Talk:Petroleum transport

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Some of the sentences were very confusing in the first paragraph. I believe this is due to the fact you are writing about petroleum but then you begin to use "fuel" and "oil" as replacement words. Then there were places where you used however and also and you need a comma after them. B Dean
 * I corrected some grammar issues in the "Pipelines" section. --Barracuda22 (talk) 05:08, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Pipeline versus rail debate section comments
In the Pipeline versus rail debate section, there is a heavy focus put on pro-pipeline information. If this section is truly focused on the information of these two different types of transportation for petroleum types than it has to have balanced sourced information. It is important that the information has a neutral voice that will best allow the reader to decide.--Modernbrooke (talk) 17:35, 6 October 2021 (UTC)