Talk:Phil Quartararo

Neutrality
This article in its present form seems like an excellent beginning in my opinion. It's certainly very nicely written, and I'm grateful for it (I worked in the recording business for a while, but hadn't known about this person). Unfortunately it has the overall tone of a memorial tribute. It's not that I want to see adverse criticism added for the sake of phony "balance", but since there are broad statements such as "Quartararo was known as a defender of artist rights" and "He spoke out on [ ... ] restoring the value of music", I want to know what that means concretely, and what difference the person's words and actions actually may have made. Again, though, thanks and appreciation for what's there now. DSatz (talk) 22:33, 23 November 2023 (UTC)