Talk:Practice Date

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Date	Process	Result
April 1, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed
January 18, 2011	Good topic candidate	Promoted

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 01:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC) Hi. I'll be reviewing this article as part of April's GAN Backlog Elimination Log. See Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my review style. Address the below comments; meanwhile, I've placed the article on hold. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 01:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

Does Ann have her own article? And if not, wikilink to the character's list?
"digs up dirt" — a bit slang-ish, wouldn't you say?
"an improvement over the previous week's episode, "Beauty Pageant.""
- Got them all. I also added some other missing wikilinks... — Hun ter Ka hn 02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Plot[edit]

Again, "find any dirt": bit slangish. Same with the later uses of the word.
Replace the period after "problem" with a colon.
"he's" → "he is"
"awesome I am" → "how "awesome" she is."
I'm a bit confused: did Mark dig up dirt on himself or Jerry?
- Done. Let me know if the Jerry thing still needs further clarity. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Production[edit]

"features about" → "features approximately"
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cultural references[edit]

Quotes around "perfect ten"
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

Separate the ratings and the reviews.
Remove the second "together" in the IGN review
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Images[edit]

One FU file (which is good) and one PD image (checks out)
- Thanks! — Hun ter Ka hn 02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Final say[edit]

Nice work! I'm going to go pass this. Congrats and happy editing. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 19:05, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]