Talk:Raorchestes chalazodes

Wiki Education assignment: Behavioral Ecology 2022
— Assignment last updated by CalJS (talk) 21:32, 11 November 2022 (UTC)

Peer review
I implemented significant changes and corrections to the grammar and sentence structure throughout this article. Especially in the parental care section, I reordered the entire section so that the section on egg guarding flowed more coherently. Under the habitat and distribution section, I attempted to improve the sentence "this bamboo forms a shrubby habitat that often forms impenetrable clumps next to stream banks". Due to the use of the word "impenetrable", I assumed that the this kind of habitat offers some kind of protection, but I recommend this part to be further explained. Froggo1324 (talk) 22:54, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

What I changed: I rephrased many sentences to make them more succinct and easier to read. Holotype is a jargon that I believe most people don’t know what it is, so I added a hyperlink to it. I added a few sentences to the leading section. The development was listed as a subheading under parental care, but it is not really about parental care, so I changed it to a separate section. What I rephrased: The overall body coloration of Raorchestes chalazodes is green with a purplish white ventral region and black-blue spots on the groin region. Some distinguishing characteristics of the species is a rounded snout, a lingual papilla on the tongue, and well-developed supernumerary tubercles. By the way, the eyes of this frog is so cute!Yunfeng Ge (talk) 02:20, 17 November 2022 (UTC)


 * What I changed: the updated Wikipedia page was very strong, but I noticed Olachandra travorica was not italicized although it was a scientific name. The discussion on holotype confused me originally and it was unclear to me whether the holotype continued to apply or if there were more individuals present today. In order to better cement the notion that the numbers are higher than 1, I researched an article and added its sampling to the conservation section. Luiscville (talk) 04:52, 18 November 2022 (UTC)