Talk:Retail & Leisure BID

Brief Critique
The organization of this article is well planned. The different subcategories are adequate for the subject. One concern that I have is that, as the page notifies at the very top of the article, the writing does seem to be promotional. Since Wiki articles are supposed to be in neutral tone, writing phrases like "... one of UK's best shopping streets..." is not unbiased. Also, the mentioned phrase from the article was cited as if to be a fact, and the source leads to a "Page Not Found" site. This citation should be updated in order to maintain credibility.

Nelliecruz (talk) 08:45, 24 May 2017 (UTC)