Talk:Ronnie Hilton

Guardian
The opening paragraph is a word-for-word copy of The Guardian's obituary, here. The obituary is provided as a source, but the paragraph either needs to be in the form e.g. "according to The Guardian's obituary, QUOTE dah dah dah UNQUOTE", or it should be rewritten. -Ashley Pomeroy (talk) 10:04, 28 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Quite right - now edited to include 'According to his obituary in the The Guardian newspaper, "blah blah"'. Thank you,


 * Derek R Bullamore (talk) 13:51, 28 April 2009 (UTC)