Talk:Safe listening

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Hi, I edited some following the move from main space to draft. The main argument was regarding notability and being undersourced, which I don't quite agree. Do you think that it would of for me to submit for review or should I do do more? Thanks! TMorata (talk) 15:58, 24 November 2020 (UTC)
 * The main issue is that most of the text isn't about Make Listening Safe as a program, but about safe listening in general. Most of the sources don't mention Make Listening Safe itself, so they don't count for notability for it as a program.  If the article was entitled Safe listening, it should be notable as a topic rather than as a program.  John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 21:07, 24 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I will think of how to change it. TMorata (talk) 15:37, 1 December 2020 (UTC)

A bit of history on this article, request for input
I started a different article on a health campaign by the WHO, see Draft:Make Listening Safe. When I tried to published the issue of notoriety came up. A fellow Wikipedian suggested that i turn the article into an article on safe listening instead. I did and will submit for review. Suggestions for improvements would be wonderful. TMorata (talk) 19:57, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
 * The reviewer rejected it because a lot of the text is copied or very similar to the sources (see Close paraphrasing), when they aren't public domain or under a proper Creative Commons license. See .  These paragraphs need to be rewritten before the article can go to mainspace.  John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 21:40, 5 December 2020 (UTC)

Addressing issues of copyright
Review raised issues related to copyright. I was working with the authors of the papers and used text they provided me. I will work to correct the issues. I will move it to my sandbox. TMorata (talk) 14:50, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

Rewritten
Please see a segment I added on Apple study and the one Christi added on personal interventions. Let me know if you think it is ok to move into main space. Thanks! TMorata (talk) 22:07, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Helped needed with Chinese Translation
A draft page in Chinese was created but the editor has not been able to publish it and I have not been able to help. It would be great if someone could help: User:GWei13/安全聆听 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 (wikipedia.org) Thanks! TMorata (talk) 13:06, 2 July 2021 (UTC)