Talk:Seymour S. Kety

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http://www.nature.com/npp/journal/v25/n3/full/1395719a.html http://www.nature.com/jcbfm/journal/v20/n9/full/9590979a.html http://archpsyc.ama-assn.org/cgi/content/extract/58/6/604 http://www.nap.edu/readingroom.php?book=biomems&page=skety.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hhearst (talk • contribs) 20:13, 25 June 2011 (UTC)

Overall I think you did a good job at developing this page from nothing, but I still believe that this needs work. Each section only has few information under it. If you would have done a little more research, you would have found a lot more information of which you could have used to make nice, big, informative paragraphs. Also, throughout the page you mention Semyour S. Kety as both Kety and as Semyour - pick one (generally you go with the last name). This is the same for Abo - just use the last name. I re-worded a few of the sections because they were either over repetitive or the sentences could have been made into better ones. In order to make this a good article, do a little more research and incorporate more information. Discuss more of his contributions and what he is known for. Find out more information on that and go with it. Best of luck!! Kehr47 (talk) 23:19, 26 July 2011 (UTC)