Talk:Shang-Chi and the Legend of the Ten Rings/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BigLordFlash (talk · contribs) 16:29, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I'm gonna take this one. If you have any questions, just talk with me! BigLordFlash talk 16:29, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Plot:
 * This allows some of the Dweller's soul eaters to escape, and the Ten Rings join forces with the villagers to fight them. - Why the Ten Rings joined forces with the villagers to fight the Dweller's soul eaters?
 * In order to jointly deal with the threat of the soul eaters, I did some CE around the area to provide what I believe was additional context. Feel free to ping me back if unresolved. -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Cast:
 * Liu was knowledgeable in taekwondo, gymnastics, and Wing Chun, and learned and trained in tai chi, wushu, Muay Thai, silat, Krav Maga, jiu-jitsu, boxing, and street fighting for the film. - Excessive use of the word "and".
 * ✅ -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Development:
 * (...) and began looking at Asian and Asian-American filmmakers to potentially direct the film. The studios' goal was to explore Asian and Asian-American themes presented by Asian and Asian-American filmmakers,(...) Excessive use of the expression "Asian and Asian-American".
 * -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Choreography: Visual effects:
 * (...) rising and rising to almost ridiculous levels". - It doesn't look good.
 * - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
 * 40 to 50 of its 168 shots were mostly digital, with the environment requiring digital pieces for the bus, buildings, and people. - It doesn't look good starting a sentence with a number.
 * ✅ -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Theatrical:
 * in over 4,200 theaters, with 400 IMAX, over 850 in premium large format, 1,500 3D, and 275 in specialty D-Box, 4DX, and ScreenX. - I think the way it's written is strange (400 IMAX, 1500 3D, etc.).
 * ✅ -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Critical response: Important topics: BigLordFlash talk 18:17, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
 * decision to give the "second-tier" Shang-Chi the same "over-the-top treatment" as major Marvel heores had broadened Marvel Studios' - It's "heroes".
 * - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Streaming viewership information should be in "Reception" section.
 * Per MOS:FILM, that info should be in that section. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
 * WP:DUPLINK all over the article (mostly in "Accolades" section).
 * I've removed the DUPLINKS as highlighted by the script. The repetition within the Accolades table is acceptable. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)


 * I've responded to a few of the notes above. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Hey there! I've also (hopefully) resolved some of the issues above. Let me know if there's any outstanding issues. :) -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

I think I'm going to pass this one. You really did a great job! Congratulations! :D BigLordFlash talk 13:16, 3 January 2024 (UTC)