Talk:Sky Ferreira/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 13:36, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

Nominator: WikiRedactor (talk)

Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  13:36, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written
 * a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

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 * 5) ** Major Point 1: Life and career "Born and raised in Los Angeles, California, Ferreira began which is scheduled to begin on February 14, 2014." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 6) *** Major Point 1.1: Early life and career beginnings "Born and raised in Los Angeles, California, Ferreira began uploading videos on Myspace of herself singing songs she had written, which led to her discovery by producers Bloodshy & Avant and recording contract with Parlophone in 2009." ( not a concise summary of the corresponding section in the body. )
 * 7) *** Major Point 1.2: 2011–12: As If! and Ghost "She released her first extended play, As If!, in 2011, which combined elements of electropop and dance music. Ferreira's second extended play Ghost (2012), however, incorporated pop with more stripped-down song structures and featured collaborations with Jon Brion and Shirley Manson, as well as the critically acclaimed track "Everything Is Embarrassing", which she composed with Dev Hynes." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 8) *** Major Point 1.3: 2013–present: Night Time, My Time "After several delays and disputes with her record label, Ferreira's debut studio album Night Time, My Time was released on October 29, 2013, and was preceded by its lead single "You're Not the One". That year, she ventured into the film industry after appearing in the movie The Green Inferno and garnered media attention after being arrested for drug possession. She was exposed to a mainstream audience after having been announced as an opening act for the international Bangerz Tour, headlined by Miley Cyrus, which is scheduled to begin on February 14, 2014." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 9) ** Major Point 2: Musical style and influences "Ferreira's earlier work incorporated elements of dance-pop and synthpop, while her recent projects experiment with indie rock and indie pop musical styles. Her lyrical content originally incorporated themes of rebellion and teenage romance, and has since evolved to discuss personal insecurities and more mature romantic themes. Outside of her work in the entertainment industry, she has modeled for several brands and magazines, most recently serving as the spokeswoman for the hair care brand Redken in 2014." (summarised well in the lead)
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 * 11) ** Major Point 1: Life and career "Born and raised in Los Angeles, California, Ferreira began which is scheduled to begin on February 14, 2014." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 12) *** Major Point 1.1: Early life and career beginnings "Born and raised in Los Angeles, California, Ferreira began uploading videos on Myspace of herself singing songs she had written, which led to her discovery by producers Bloodshy & Avant and recording contract with Parlophone in 2009." ( the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body. )
 * 13) *** Major Point 1.2: 2011–12: As If! and Ghost "She released her first extended play, As If!, in 2011, which combined elements of electropop and dance music. Ferreira's second extended play Ghost (2012), however, incorporated pop with more stripped-down song structures and featured collaborations with Jon Brion and Shirley Manson, as well as the critically acclaimed track "Everything Is Embarrassing", which she composed with Dev Hynes." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 14) *** Major Point 1.3: 2013–present: Night Time, My Time "After several delays and disputes with her record label, Ferreira's debut studio album Night Time, My Time was released on October 29, 2013, and was preceded by its lead single "You're Not the One". That year, she ventured into the film industry after appearing in the movie The Green Inferno and garnered media attention after being arrested for drug possession. She was exposed to a mainstream audience after having been announced as an opening act for the international Bangerz Tour, headlined by Miley Cyrus, which is scheduled to begin on February 14, 2014." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 15) ** Major Point 2: Musical style and influences "Ferreira's earlier work incorporated elements of dance-pop and synthpop, while her recent projects experiment with indie rock and indie pop musical styles. Her lyrical content originally incorporated themes of rebellion and teenage romance, and has since evolved to discuss personal insecurities and more mature romantic themes. Outside of her work in the entertainment industry, she has modeled for several brands and magazines, most recently serving as the spokeswoman for the hair care brand Redken in 2014." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
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 * 18) *** Sky Tonia Ferreira (born July 8, 1992) is an American singer-songwriter, model, and actress.
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2: Verifiable with no original research
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 * b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: excellent (Thorough check on Google.)

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5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes

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WikiRedactor, I'm very happy and inspired to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article :
 * I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview and to give relative emphasis for the Early life and career beginnings.

Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. Please feel free to strike out any recommendation from this review which you think will not help in improving the article which is our main aim here. All the best, --  Seabuckthorn   ♥  08:36, 12 February 2014 (UTC)


 * I added a bit more about her connection with Michael and the fact that she dropped out of high school, which I think gives a little more background about where her career started. If you'd like me to add anything else, I certainly will! Thanks again for your time! WikiRedactor (talk) 20:43, 12 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks --  Seabuckthorn   ♥  05:34, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

Promoting the article to GA status. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  05:34, 13 February 2014 (UTC)