Talk:Snapchat dysmorphia

Review
Excellent! View your page's history to see if I made any edits or left any templates. My only concern is the promotional tone of Dove’s #NoDigitalDistortion. When you've addressed that concern, proceed according to the syllabus. Note, since you have an outline in your sandbox, you won't be able to simply move the article without removing the outline. But some of your citations are first defined in the outline, so that will require some work to untangle. -Reagle (talk) 17:54, 20 February 2024 (UTC)


 * I have removed the article outline from the sandbox without disturbing the citations. I tried tweaking the short paragraph on Dove's #NoDigitalDistortion to create a more neutral tone. Please let me know if this is good. - Jinnyjin123 (talk) 22:09, 25 February 2024 (UTC)

This is a great article Jin! You have great research to back up your information on Snapchat Dismorphia. If I were to make a few suggestions, I would maybe add a little bit of information on what Snapchat is, just defining what kind of social platform it is. Also, adding anything specifically about influencer culture might be interesting to add. Lastly, adding images would be helpful in trying to understand what the filters look like. Overall really good job! Kbill98 (talk) 17:15, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Hey Jin! This is a great topic. In your introduction when you discuss the filters creating a “perfected” view of the user, it may be worth it to clarify that you mean in terms of society’s beauty standards (if that’s what you mean). I see later you describe what the “perfect” face is: “high cheekbones, poreless skin, cat-like eyes, plump lips, and small nose” and maybe this should go further up? Do the filters try to create a homogenous vision of beauty?

I had no idea BDD is part of OCD, that’s really interesting. This piece is well done and it was a very informative read! Lvogel1 (talk) 12:49, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

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