Talk:Southwestern Brittonic languages

Hypothetical
Is this language a 'theoretical' link, or is there any actual writings from this? Its just that if It is a hypotheical linking language then I think there should be some re-wording, even if it is generally accepted.

Why is this article here?
I thought we VfDed this fiction. Evertype 16:22, July 12, 2005 (UTC)
 * The consensus was that the article on Old Devonian should have been merged into one on Southwestern Brythonic, so I wrote a stub which was desigend to make a tentative first stab at doing just that.Nick xylas 23:04, 16 July 2005 (UTC)
 * This article is at least supposed to be about the proto-language. The real fiction is at Devonian language The real fiction was at Devonian language, but I've merged that into Cornish language and left a redirect in its place. --Angr/undefined 16:52, 12 July 2005 (UTC)
 * I know you redirected the Devonian Language article, but it's back now. Looks like another VfD war is inevitable. Sigh.Nick xylas 17:05, 14 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Update - I tagged the Devonian Language article for speedy deletion, but admin redirected it here instead Nick xylas 20:27, 14 December 2006 (UTC)
 * The real fiction was at Westcountry Brythonic, which deserves linking here so the discussion (pleasant as it wasn't) won't be lost.. Evertype 10:09, July 23, 2005 (UTC)

A Critical Review of the Deunansek Lord's Prayer
Deunansek (sic) purports to be a scholarly reconstruction of the Brythonic language of Dumnonia (Devon and surrounding areas) as it was around 700 c.e. before it gave rise to Cornish and Breton as separate languages.

See: Old Devonian

The following is an analysis of the only continuous text (more than a single sentence) that I have seen in this language.

First the text itself : (1) HAGON TAT EN NEFOU, (2) SANKTEDHIT BEDHET DHE HANU, (3) DEFU DHE RUANTELETH, (4) DHE FODH BEDHET (5) EN DOAR FEL EN NEF, (6) ROIT DHEN HEDHIU HAGON BARA PEB DEDH, (7) HAK DHEN HAGON KAMUEDH, (8) FEL DHEN RE-NA (9) HAGON KAMUOL, (10) HAK NA EN DENTATION, (11) MAT DELIURIT NI DHERAK DRUK. I compared the above text with several versions of the Lord's Prayer in Welsh, Cornish and Breton, and found that the best match was with the Middle Breton text in Lewis' _Llawlyfr_. Large parts are identical with just some MB oddities changed.  for /v/ is written ;  from Brit. /D/ or /T/ becomes  or, not always correctly; and all 's whether for /k/ or /g/ come out as  even before back vowels, unlike anything in MC, MB, OW or MW.

Where there are bits of Breton vocabulary that seem alien to Welsh/Cornish, then bits of Unified (I think) Cornish have been inserted, or in some cases the words are just left out(!) as if the text was never finished. A few forms seem to have been inspired by Welsh.

Here's the Middle Breton line by line, with additions in boldface, deletions marked [thus] and differences italicised. Notes follow each line.

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1. hagon tat [pe heny so] en nef[u]ou,

is a hybred of B _hon_ with C _agan_. In fact W _ein_ shows that the _ag_ was a C innovation, perhaps needed to beef up the word for "our" from just _*a_ to the more distinctive _aga_, with the other plural possessives following suit. The _ag_ is probably the same word as _(h)ag_ "and, with". The SWB word for "our" would I guess have been /on/. The words "the one who is" are ignored. A UC version has _us_ "that is" here. The text as given thus reads just "Our father in heaven".


 * Comment Rereading Biddulph's book, he suggests (later in his book) that "Our father who art in Heaven" should be " Hagon Tat so in Nefiou". Here he refers to the special present tense relative form for the verb 'to be'. Dewnans 11:56, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

2. [ho hanu bezet sanctifiet] sanktedhit bedhet dhe hanu,

Here the word order has been changed, perhaps to conform to UC "benygys re bo dha hanow".  your has been changed to C. "thou". <*hages> or <*hagos> might have been predicted from.  seems to be from W. _sancteidd(i)-_. The past part. ending should be <-et> not <-it> for /-Id/ to be consistent with the rest of the text. Why was not some form of /bennig-/ or /bennath-/ used?

3. [deuet] defu [ho] dhe r[o]uanteleth

"let it come" replaced by probably representing the C. optative _(re)_dheffo_ "may it come", again probably inspired by the UC version "re dheffo dha wlascor". The /-ff-/ << /-vh-/ root extension in this form might well be a C. inovation since it is not found in B, and W uses /-l-/ by analogy with the verb "to go". B.  is regularly rewritten as which makes one wonder how /y/ would be represented. It does not seem to occure in the sample.

4. [ho] dhe [uolontez] fodh bedhet [graet]

replaced by for WC /voD/. This is valid, but C does also have _bolonjedh_, later _blonojadh_. The word "done" has been missed, so the phrase reads "thy will be (in earth ...)". Something like <*gwra-et> /gwra-Id/ might have been expected.

5. en do[u]ar [e]fel en nef[u]

MB /evel/ has been shortened to /vel/? as in W. The MC is _avel_. All go back to a weakened form of _hevel_ "like, similar". <*(h)euel> might have been expected.

6. roit [dimp] dhen hedhiu hagon bara pebdedh[yec]

B "to us" replaced by for MC/UC _dhyn_, presumably because is just "too Breton"? The ancestoral form might have been /dIm(m)/, cf. MW _ym_ /1mm/. "everyday" (adj) replaced by "everyday" (n?), again from UC _pup_deth-(oll)_. is the unstressed form of _peub_ which might perhaps have been /pOb/ in SWB.

7. hak [pardonnet] [dimp] dhen hagon [offansou] kamuedh

"pardon, forgive" (imperative) is ommitted. "offenses" is replaced by from UC _camwyth_, KK _kammweyth_ "misdeed" with  for (cf. W. _gwaith_). The line reads "and to us our misdeeds", with the key word "forgive" missing!

8. [e]fel [maz pardonnomp] [da nep] dhen re-na

Again the key phrase "as we forgive" is missing. "to whoever" (singular) is replaced by C _dhe'n re-na_ "to those" (pl.), giving "as to those (ones)". If  looks too F, and C _gav_ too English, then here W _maddau_ might usefully be adapted.

9. [an deueux] hagon [offanset] kamuol

seems to be for UC _camwul_ "misdeed, wrong-doing". The B phrase lit. "that have offended us", uses _am_eus_ with a past part. to form a perfect as in E and F. This usage is special to B, just as the use of _wedi_ is special to W. The MC construction with _re-_, also found occasionally in MW is most probably the original pattern. Thus a back-dating of "dhe'n re-na re-gammwrug er-agan-pynn" or "... re'(ga)n kammwrug" might have been expected. In fact this phrase has just been left without a verb. As it stands this whole sentence reads "and to us our misdeeds, as to those ones our wrong-doing", which is pretty much garbage.

10. hak [non] na [leset da couezo] en den[p]tation

 "and allow us not to fall" has simply been replaced by C _na_ "(that) not", or "(do) not". This is odd as C _koedhe_ "to fall, to be due", is well attested, and W _cwyddo_ shows that it would back-date to something like /ku:jDIM/, while could be replaced by the SWB equivalent of C _gaze_, W _gada_, _gadael_. is probably the work of an out of control spell-checker, leg. ?

11. [hoguen] mat [hon] deliurit ni [uez an] dherak dr[o]uc

"moreover", (C _hogen_, MW _hagen_), has been replaced by, leg. ? as in ModB, C _mez_, all pointing to an earlier SWB /med/. There is no clear reason for this replacement, unless the word _hogen_ was unknown to the adaptor. The possessive has been dropped and replaced by the suffixed pronoun  which shouldn't be able to stand alone at this early date. <(hag)on deliurit ni> would have been expected.  C _a-ves a'n_ "away from the" has for some reason been replaced by UC for "in front of, before", perhaps influenced by W _rhag_ "lest". The UC text has _dyworth_ and ModB, its equivalent _diouzh_, "from beside".

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CONCLUSION
The above sample of "Westcountry Brythonic" turns out to be essentially a Middle Breton text taken from an well known handbook, partially respelled, and with any distinctly Breton looking words replaced by their equivalents from a Unified Cornish version. Some "difficult" words and constructions have simply been dropped, so that a literal translation is often nonsense. The person publishing this piece clearly couldn't understand it, nor did its author have any real idea of historical linguistics or the development of the Brittonic languages, even though work on the history of Cornish has made such information more readily available than it might otherwise have been. To suggest that a text composed of an amalgam of Middle Breton and Middle Cornish (i.e. nothing earlier than 1400 c.e.) could in any meaningful way represent the South West Brythonic speech of some 700 years earlier is ridiculous.

While it might be an interesting exercise to reconstruct SWB prior to the C/B split, the present attempt is naive, amaturish and careless. I could probably do better over a wet weekend, with a Welsh-Breton dictionary and the etymologies in GLKK.

Mongvras 12:55, 26 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I should point out that I have a copy of Biddulph's work in front of me, and it does address some of the issues raised above.

For example Biddulph indicates that he is unsure of the translation of 'who art' in the first line (and in his work he renders it in English in brackets in his text). He also expresses similar uncertainty about the 'pardon' in the sixth and seventh lines and agains renders it in English in brackets.

The text Mongvras refers to is not a literal reflection of Biddulph's work and as such these limitations should not be sheeted home to him.

Why oh why are people so keen to put down work that they have not studied properly themselves.

I will pass the comments above to the site I believe Mongvras took the text from so they may address these deficiencies.

Dewnans 11:27, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Later in his text Biddulph suggests that the special present tense relative form would render "Our father who art in heaven" as "Hagon Tat so in nefiou". I will re-iterate however that this article is not promoting Biddulph's reconstruction per-se, but rather the subject is the 'south-western brythonic language' - of which Biddulph is only one attempting reconstruction. Refer the reference to Schrijver (below) - who I am sure all here would consider as a recognised linguist.

Dewnans 12:05, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

Since writing the above I have obtained a copy of Mr. Biddulph's book, and corresponded a little with the author. It is quite clear that Biddulph is not making any exaggerated claims about his work, he is in effect saying, "Middle Cornish and Middle Breton are really quite similar, let's see if we can combine them into a common language". The whole work is tentative and experimental, and as Dewnans says, the Lord's Prayer translation (Biddulph's only attempt at more than isolated sentences) is full of untranslated English words, queries and alternative translation equivalents. Biddulph's reference list, and comments here and there in the work, show that his sources are Lewis' Handbooks, and various popular works on Modern Breton and Revived (Middle) Cornish. He was not aware of Kenneth Jackson's key works on Breton and Brittonic historical phonology, nor indeed does he seem to have any background in historical and comparative linguistics, which whatever you may think of them, a good many conlangers do. To be fair, why should he? These are not high profile subjects in the UK. So in effect Biddulph has joyfully "reinvented the wheel", or in this case, independently discovered comparative philology, though without, I think, appreciating the extent to which languages change over time.

For comparison, here is the text exactly as Biddulph gives it : Hagon tat who art en nefou, sanktedhit/bendigeit bedhet dhe hanu, deuet dhe (kingdom: ruanteleth or gulaskor or teirnas etc.), dhe fodh (from bodh) bedhet done en doar fel/afel en nef, roit dhen (i) hedhiu hagon bara peb dedh, hak pardon dhen hagon kamueth/kamuedh, fel/mal we pardon dhen re-na who hagon ?kamuol, hak na lead us en temptation, mat deliurit ni dherak druk (rak druk). Amen. What is odd/interesting, is that someone should take Biddulph's tentative reconstruction, and put it up on a web site, with all the caveats removed, so as to give the impression that SWB was a known language.

Mongvras 23:35, 10 October 2005 (UTC)

Old South-West British
In Peter Schrijver's book Studies in the History of Celtic Pronouns and Particles (Maynooth 1997, ISBN 0-901519-59-6) he cites a dozen words in a language he calls "Old South-West British" which apparently come from manuscripts called "Ang477A" and "LeidLeech". The words are: If anybody has any information on these manuscripts, such as if they've been published, and if it's been established that the language is neither Old Cornish nor Old Breton, then maybe we'll be able to talk about an attested language here rather than a hypothetical one! --Angr/undefined 22:08, 11 July 2005 (UTC)
 * dodo i "to them"
 * dudo em "to him"
 * guarnoeth-ou "on them"
 * henneth "that (near you)"
 * hepdo em "without him"
 * (h)ou "their"
 * i "they"
 * (in)no "that of them"
 * Macoer "wall"
 * ois "was"


 * My guess would be that these glosses are Old Breton, although some of them could equally well be Old Cornish, and faced with any one of them in isolation, even Old Welsh could not always be ruled out. For instance macoer ought to be macuir in OW (but given the variation in medieval spelling ...). Mongvras 03:36, 13 October 2005 (UTC)

Old South West British appears on a number of language lists, including the one used by the Indo-European Etymological Dictionary

http://www.indo-european.nl/lang-abbrev.html

This is linked to Leiden university, which I would guess provides a clue on the source of the 'LeidLeech' referenced above. Dewnans 03:58, 18 July 2005 (UTC)


 * I sent an e-mail to Peter Schrijver asking him what precisely "Old South-West British" means in his book. His answer:
 * South-West British is a cover term for Breton and Cornish. It is especially useful for Old Breton and Old Cornish, since before about 1100 there is not a single identifiable difference between the two 'languages'. Put differently, distinguishing Old Breton from Old Cornish is only geographically useful. I combine both as OSWBr.
 * So as I see it, this page should be for describing Old Breton and Old Cornish together, and for discussing how they evolved from Proto-Brythonic in a way distinct from Welsh. --Angr/undefined 13:36, 22 July 2005 (UTC)


 * I think PS is overstating his case. There were a number of distinct differences between OC and OB (svarabhakti in final consonant groups only in Cornish; /I/ merging into /e/ only in Breton; etc.) but nevertheless the two languages were still developing in tandem to some extent, and were less differentiated than modern Breton or Welsh dialects. Synchronically they do look like one language (with clear dialect differences). Conventionally they're treated as two languages only because each "dialect" went on to give rise to Middle Cornish and Middle Breton which were separate languages. I would be inclined to call this stage something like "Old Cornu-Bretonic", and perhaps reserve "South-West Brittonic" for the period from say 600 - 800 c.e. There's agreement, I think, over what happened and broadly when it happened, the difficulty is just a matter of terminology and outlook. Mongvras 03:36, 13 October 2005 (UTC)


 * Interesting feedback and I like the information on the differentiation between this language and Western Brythonic.

Schrijver is not the only one who includes this language in Celtic family trees (eg McCone or Schmidt) although under a variety of names. The article should also note that fact.

I also suggest that we do not attribute Schrivjer's words on 'Old South West British' in absolute terms, as after all they are still only one persons stated opinion - however educated and informed Schrivjer is - and his terminology does differ from others..

I also believe we should note the recent interest in the language, or in approximations to it. However unpalateable Biddulph or his work may be to some (even if they haven't read it) the interest and publication does exist. Perhaps this should be shown as a footnote, as the article is about the language, not (just) Biddulph's reconstruction. Dewnans 02:56, 23 July 2005 (UTC)


 * Further to my comment about not attributing Schrivjer's words as fact, the following link suggests that some (at least) may see the situation as slightly more complex. Vocabularium Cornicum Dewnans 03:10, 23 July 2005 (UTC)


 * When McCone and Schmidt talk about "Southwest Brittonic", they're not talking about an (attested) language, they're talking about a group of related languages, the same way one can say "West Germanic" to mean Old High German, Old Saxon, Old Low Franconian, Old Frisian, Old English, and their modern descendants. But you're right that it is probably only Schrijver's opinion that Old Cornish and Old Breton are similar enough to be grouped together as a single language. I'm still suspicious of mentioning "recent interest in the language" when it isn't even clear what language we're referring to. Is there recent interest in reconstructed Proto-Southwest Brythonic? Is there recent interest in the set {Old Cornish, Old Breton}? Or is there recent interest in the idea that Southwest Brythonic includes a third language, Devonian, which is completely unattested, and on the basis of which Biddulph has invented his conlang? Finally, I don't see how the Vocabularium Cornicum link is inconsistent with what Schrijver said. He said Old Cornish and Old Breton were basically the same language before 1100; the V.C. link is discussing the Cornish language of about 1150-1200. --Angr/undefined 07:21, 23 July 2005 (UTC)


 * I am not sure where you source your comment that McCone and Schmidt talk about "Southwest Brythonic" as a group of languages. The language family trees seem to indicate something more specific. What members are there in this "family"?


 * As to references to the "Devonian" language, this is simply one of the names that Biddulph uses to describe the language he attempted to reconstruct - Southwest Brythonic, Old South-west British or whichever name you like. He also referred to the language as "Westcountry Brythonic" although it is clear that he means the Brythonic language spoken in Southwest Britain around 700AD and not just a particular language of Devon. Dewnans 03:56, 25 July 2005 (UTC)
 * The members in the group of Southwest Brythonic languages, of course, are Cornish and Breton. The node "Southwest Brythonic" in those trees is no different from the node "Insular Celtic" in McCone's vision and the node "Gallo-Brittonic" in Schmidt's. Neither is claiming that there is an attested "Insular Celtic" or an attested "Gallo-Brittonic" language; both are labels used to group together languages believed by the author to be genetically related and to have a reconstructable proto-language. --Angr/undefined 05:41, 25 July 2005 (UTC)


 * What then do you make of this site?


 * http://www.kwatrynynalletalen.motime.com/


 * Van de Meer claims to have had his qautrain translated into 2 different versions of south west brythonic - one 'insular' dialect the other 'amorican'. Dewnans 08:49, 25 July 2005 (UTC)


 * I suppose only the translator, one Talat Chaudhri, can say what he means by "Reconstructed South West Brythonic (Insular dialect)" and "Reconstructed South West Brythonic (Armorican dialect)". By "attested" historical linguists mean "attested from the period in which the language was spoken", either by inscriptions or by manuscripts. --Angr/undefined 09:07, 25 July 2005 (UTC)


 * He also contributed Cornish and Breton versions. The SWB versions seem to be his own Biddulph style amalgams of the two, based I think on Modern Breton and Revived Cornish. The translations are not especially accurate or grammatical.


 * What exactly do the Devonians want their language to be? SWB at the time of the migrations (c 700 c.e.), if so Dumnonia might be /de&mu;'nent/ Demnent. Or at the end of the OC/OB period (c 1100 c.e.?) /de&beta;'nent/ Deunent Deffnent. Or perhaps the language of some isolated pocket(s) of Britons who resisted anglicisation well into the medieval period. /'devnent, 'devnen, 'dewnent, 'djunen, 'downant/ ?? Or would they have had enough contact with Cornish to have copied the /-nt#/ >> /-ns#/ change? Mongvras 03:36, 13 October 2005 (UTC)


 * Not to wake the dead, but toponyms appear to show t>s changes anyway, such as Brinsabach and Goosemoor (Cos, Welsh Coed - if that is indeed the right interpretation of Goosemoor as Cos Mor/Great Wood). More interesting (and damning to Deunansek as a name) would be Breton 'Devnent' and Welsh 'Dyfnaint' - odd that Breton and Welsh would retain 'v' while Breton's ancestor language didn't have it - but I don't know enough about how those 'v's got there - 'v' is weak in Welsh and disappears, and it mutates from 'm'. I would have thought the sequence would be 'm'>'v'>'silent' like weak 'f' in Welsh and 'mh' in Irish.  Any protolanguage would be earlier in the sequence, not later.  Anyway, I'm just a punter.  Maybe the argument would be that parallel forms existed together, and then crystallised later but then that does rather get around the whole point of this kind of philological game, n'est-ce pas?. An interested (fairly) neutral observer. Stevebritgimp (talk) 13:58, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
 * And another thing: The French called north east Britanny 'Domnonee' - so the 'm' must have got across the channel. 'Dewnansek' would then be properly a Cornish word (north of the Channel - whether uttered on the West or East side of the Tamar).  If the Deunansek attempt was at a protolanguage for Cornish and Breton, an 'm' would have been more appropriate than 'u', although again this is just my opinion as a punter, rather than a linguist.  Cheers.  Stevebritgimp (talk) 14:10, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

Proto-?
The current title of this article, "Proto-Southwestern Brythonic", is not attested in any books I can find. Here's the Google Books search. This language is typically referred to as just "Southwestern Brythonic". If there are no objections I'll move the page back.--Cúchullain t/ c 17:32, 21 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "Typically referred to"? I don't see much evidence that this language is referred to in the linguistic literature at all. When I do the same Google Books search as your link above but without the "Proto-", all I get is a bunch of quotes from Wikipedia and one mention of "northern, western and southwestern Brythonic dialects". I moved it to "Proto-" in the first place to make it clear that this language is only reconstructed, not attested, but now I'm wondering if it should be kept at all. +Angr 22:20, 21 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Yes, actually I can't anywhere that uses "Southwestern Brythonic" either, though I found some for variants like "Southwest Brythonic", "Southwest British", etc. I also found a reference to Jackson arguing that Primitive Cornish and Primitive Breton were in fact indistinguishable, but no name for both languages together was given. I don't know what to do with this thing.--Cúchullain t/ c 23:34, 21 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Even later than their proto-stages, Peter Schrijver has said that Old Cornish and Old Breton (i.e. the attested languages) are linguistically identical, the only criterion for deciding whether to call a text "Cornish" or "Breton" being whether it was written in Cornwall or Brittany. Perhaps we should move the article to Southwestern Brythonic languages and deemphasize the reconstruction of the proto-language, though it needn't be removed entirely. +Angr 07:46, 22 May 2010 (UTC)
 * That sounds reasonable to me.--Cúchullain t/ c 00:52, 25 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I've finally complete the move. Still needs sources, etc. --Cúchullain t/ c 20:05, 15 July 2010 (UTC)


 * In Die keltischen Primärverben (2004: p. 90, footnote 92), Stefan Schumacher writes (translated): "In many cases, a clear linguistic separation between the written testimonies of Old Cornish and Old Breton cannot be found; traditionally, only few testimonies are addressed as Old Cornish (cf. LHEB 59–62), in fact, however, part of the texts called Old Breton could also originate from Cornwall [...]".
 * LHEB is, of course, a referrence to Jackson's book. His chronology of sound changes reveals, if I remember right, that until 800, Primitive Cornish and Primitive Breton were absolutely indistinguishable (at least on the phonological level), while between 800–1100, Old Cornish and Old Breton developped in parallel, though not precisely in lockstep – not quite unlike the contemporary Old High German dialects. So, if Jackson's chronology can be trusted in this respect, Old Cornish and Old Breton samples could be distinguished in principle if they could be dated relatively precisely and contain relevant diagnostic traits, i. e., sound changes which one of the two dialects had already undergone but the other not yet. (Also, you need to have absolute confidence in the spelling not to mislead you.) But these differences must have been incredibly marginal and so it's probably not worth the bother to make the attempt even for the most dedicated specialist (or nerd). --Florian Blaschke (talk) 19:36, 16 February 2014 (UTC)

Britonian
Thanks to for highlighting Britonian in the infobox with a citation request. I have gone ahead and removed it from the infobox for these reasons:

-- Sirfurboy (talk) 19:11, 3 December 2019 (UTC)
 * 1. Britonian as a language is entirely unattested. The infobox child language attribute should only be used for attested languages;
 * 2. If Britonian existed it must have split from Brittonic in the fifth century or earlier. It is not therefore a child of Southwestern Brittonic at all, even though it may be a child of Brittonic.
 * 3. There are no sources. Wikipedia is not for OR, but this whole Britonian language thing (see also talk in Cornish and Breton language talk pages) smacks of OR. The name appears to have been coined for Wikipedia. Searching Google for Britonian Language only finds Wikipedia pages and pages quoting Wikipedia (with some scepticism).
 * 4. This page is poorly sourced, but the one source it does have lists the child languages as Cornish and Breton only. We can only go with what the sources say.


 * ...as one could also expect to find traces of Britonian in modern Galician --Couiros22 (talk) 10:36, 4 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Why? There was not prolonged cultural interchange between Galicia and southwestern Britain, or between Galicia and Brittany, in historical times. Some trade, but not more than between other areas in the region, and not the sort of dynastic channel spanning we see between Cornwall and Brittany. Anyway, I have redirected Britonian to Brittonic languages as it seems to simply be a variant spelling.  — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  13:19, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Requested move 13 March 2021

 * The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion. 

The result of the move request was: Rescinded by nominator. This should be proposed as group RM of similar titles that have a "language" added onto the end which is not actually serving a disambiguation function. Per WP:CONSISTENT, this page by itself should not be moved away from the current pattern in the category. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  09:40, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Southwestern Brittonic languages → Southwestern Brittonic – WP:CONCISE, and to be WP:CONSISTENT with Cumbric, Scottish Gaelic, etc. In short, we do not append "language[s]" to language article titles when the name of them is not ambiguous with that of the culture/ethnicity associated with the language. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  13:13, 13 March 2021 (UTC) — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  13:10, 18 March 2021 (UTC) The discussion above is closed. <b style="color: #FF0000;">Please do not modify it.</b> Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
 * Oppose. The examples in the nom are "leaf" languages; language groups frequently are aided by "languages" in the title, and this article is about a language group.  So it might apply to Cornish vs. Cornish language, but not Southwestern Brittonic languages vs. Southwestern Britonnic which seems to incorrectly suggest that "Southwestern Brittonic" is a language.  For the relevant consistency examples, see Goidelic languages (parent of Scottish Gaelic), Western Brittonic languages (parent of Cumbric), or other articles like Danish dialects or Occitano-Romance languages.  SnowFire (talk) 01:35, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I'm willing concede on this one, per a counter-WP:CONSISTENT argument that you don't quite make: it appears that every article in Category:Language families and most subcategories thereof has " languages" tacked on at the end. So, removing that from those that do not need it should be done as a group RM nomination, not by picking off one example at a time like "Southwest Brittonic[ languages]", or we would be increasing a CONSISTENT failure a tiny bit over time, each time, to arrive very-eventually at a new consistency. Much more sensible to just do it in one step. But much of the rest of your argument doesn't sway, and would be unlikely to affect the outcome of such a mass-move. In detail: Leaf language has nothing to do with linguistics ("a method of characterizing a complexity class by formalizing what it means for a machine to accept an input"). It's not our job to "aid" articles (on language or any other subject); it's our job to aid the reader, with (among other things) titling that complies with the WP:CRITERIA, including CONCISE and CONSISTENT, and with WP:COMMONNAME (this term is not much used in the literature with either the Brittonic or Brythonic spelling, but when it is it is usually not followed by "languages" ).  There don't appear to be any of the criteria violated by "Southwestern Brittonic", nor any that are objectively enhanced by "Southwestern Brittonic languages". Remember that even WP:PRECISE is moderated by CONCISE and the other criteria: we only use as much precision as is required to avoid ambiguity and keep the name WP:RECOGNIZABLE).  "Southwestern Brittonic languages" is actually natural disambiguation (WP:NATURALDIS), but there is nothing from which to disambiguate it, so the tacked on "languages" should be removed.  Your own second sentence makes this point without meaning to: there is no "Southwestern Brittonic [something else]", the way there is "Cornish culture", "Cornish music", etc., to disambiguate from "Cornish language". Some examples you rely on simply don't relate to issue raised here. Danish dialects is not a language-family article but a sub-/intra-language article, and even if there were one named "Danish languages" we could not remove the final word from it because it would be ambiguous with the Danish language and other topics to which "Danish" can apply (music, etc.)  "Western Brittonic language" and "Occitano-Romance languages" easily  lose the "languages" appendage, because "Western Brittonic" and "Occitano-Romance" don't have any referents in reliable sources other than those language families, and thus are not ambiguous. The circumstances under which WP "pre-emptively disambiguates" are very limited, and are almost entirely confined to cases in which a non-human subject, like an animal breed, can be confused with a reference to an actual human ethnic or demographic group (thus, e.g., the "cattle" appended to Argentine Criollo cattle, despite lack of an Argentina-specific section yet at Criollo people).
 * If you're proposing that all language families should be moved to remove "languages" from their title as well excluding the ones that would cause confusion / disambiguation issues, I would oppose that as well to be clear. "Languages" / "dialects" is an important and useful part of the title that makes clear the article topic.  Besides, it's very frequent that a term for a group is sometimes used as a language itself when scholars disagree on subdivisions, so best be clear up front about the difference between Malayic languages and Malay language.
 * Also, you have the wrong sense of "leaf". I meant it in this context: Tree_(data_structure).  And "Danish dialects" is indeed the same kind of article - note that South Scandinavian languages redirects there.  SnowFire (talk) 16:04, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Why would I propose that language families should be moved to remove "languages"?  Nothing I wrote suggested that. Rather, it should be removed from any that are not ambiguous because they have no referent other than that language family. Tree (data_structure) doesn't relate to our article titling policies and practices, either.  Next, a random redirect going somewhere is meaningless; actually  the article. It's about the following: "The Danish language has a number of regional and local dialect varieties." It is not uncommon for dialects at some point in linguistic history to be classified as languages (or vice versa). Dialects of Danish having (apparently? supposedly?) at one time been considered by some to be full-fledged languages doesn't make that a language family article. It's an article on dialects of one language. By way of direct analogy, in the early 20th century there was some interest in reclassifying various cat breeds as subspecies, e.g. Felis catus siamensis, etc.  The fact that some of these now-rejected trinomials redirect to the breed articles to which they refer does not make them no longer articles on cat breeds and instead (or additionally) articles on feline subspecies; it means nothing whatsoever from a categorization standpoint, and just ensures that people get to the current topic that pertains closest to the now-obsolete name if they look for that name.  PS: Given that "South Scandinavian languages" isn't even mentioned in the article it probably should not redirect there, so I will list it at WP:RFD.  — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  06:21, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I was clarifying what I meant (since you read a meaning I did not intend) when I said "leaf language" (nothing to do with the unrelated leaf language article on a different topic - Wikipedia is not a dictionary, etc.). As I linked Tree (data structure) to explain my comments, not expound on article titling policy, it was quite relevant.
 * I understood you just fine. You, once again, have failed to understand me - please reread what I actually wrote ("excluding the ones that would cause confusion / disambiguation issues", yes, I got that, thanks).  I was saying that I would also oppose moving family articles in those cases where there isn't a directly ambiguous alternate title between a family and something else (a specific language, etc.).
 * "South Scandinavian languages" is not a "random redirect", it's a relevant alternate title of the page. See https://glottolog.org/resource/languoid/id/sout3248 - it is the same topic.  I can edit the article to mention it as an explicit analogue if that would fix the complaint.  SnowFire (talk) 15:52, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I see considerable disagreement wit your "it is the same topic" assement, at the RfD. I'm disinclined to argue with your further about this stuff, as moot. This RM need not remain open, since this move should not proceed by itself, but be done as part of a group nomination of all easily identifiable not-ambiguous page titles in this category that do not need (arguably at least) the " language" disambiguator tacked onto them.  — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  09:36, 21 March 2021 (UTC)