Talk:Special Task and Rescue

Issues
--NoCitNeed (talk) 12:11, 16 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Grammar cleanup. Large sections are written in rather poor English.
 * Content cleanup. A lot of hollow buzzwords are being thrown around throughout the article. Sentences like "[...] mission and responsibility of this unit includes commencement of rescue mission in difficult underwater situation" are just long strings of fancy words carrying little actual information.
 * Tone. Overall tone tends to hail this police unit at how implicitly good or tough they are. Wikipedia should be neutral, not cater to some warrior mythology.
 * Sources. Only one section provides sources.

External links modified
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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20091202161544/http://www.mmea.gov.my:80/ms/utama/99-kursus/1431-latihan-tempur-jarak-dekat-dan-pengelidahan-khas-pasukan-tindakan-khas-dan-penyelamat-maritim-malaysia.html to http://www.mmea.gov.my/ms/utama/99-kursus/1431-latihan-tempur-jarak-dekat-dan-pengelidahan-khas-pasukan-tindakan-khas-dan-penyelamat-maritim-malaysia.html

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Cheers.—cyberbot II  Talk to my owner :Online 19:05, 29 January 2016 (UTC)