Talk:Storm Area 51/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 04:39, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement
In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. — ♠Vami _IV†♠  04:39, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Background
Expand this section. When was Area 51 established, and to what end?
 * ✅ I've added some more info relating to the site's opening and history, but let me know if you want more to be added. WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Citation [1] is now repeated without need in the second paragraph.


 * WackyWikiWoo (talk) 13:18, 6 April 2020 (UTC)


 * around the time the military began flying CIA U2 spy planes in the area. They would not be CIA planes if the USAF was flying them.
 * I've removed that part of the sentence all together, it seems sufficient to just mention UFOs were spotted at the site. WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Prose

 * "Facebook event and internet meme" is the place to introduce and discuss Matty Roberts.
 * ✅ I've moved it down to that section. WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Add his first name, please.
 * ✅ WackyWikiWoo (talk) 13:18, 6 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Oh, that's Naturo running. What's this cheek clapping the youngins are talking about?
 * ✅ I've added an... explanation? WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:59, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Perfect, hilarious. Things like this make me wonder what aliens will think of us if they ever show up above our ball of rock. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  11:25, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
 * This? ◢    Ganbaruby!    (Say hi!) 13:46, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Hopefully. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  15:08, 6 April 2020 (UTC)


 * B-2 stealth bomber Could you make one link out of the three here?
 * ✅ WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Combine "Gathering" and "Music festivals"
 * ✅ WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)


 * The county has just 184 hotel rooms Make this past-tense.
 * ✅ WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)