Talk:Subway Hero/GA1

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GA review 1[edit]

  • "series' co-executive producer Jack Burditt" - producer should be plural? commas needed too
  • "The credits in the episode also, jokingly, lists the Lord Stanley Cup as a guest star" - lists shouldn't have an s if credits is plural (check this sort of thing throughout)
  • Is there really no more info on production? Doesn't seem broad...
  • "On the newspaper presented on Liz by Jenna" - huh??
  • "Tim Conway guest starred in this episode as, the 1950s television star, Bucky Bright." - needs copyedit, those commas make it read poorly
  • "from the program which aired prior to it, My Name Is Earl" - which episode?
  • IGN shouldn't have italics (in reception section), check all others