Talk:Sulkhan-Saba Orbeliani

Needs to fix that rather pompous and un-encyclopedic language
No disrespect to Sulkhan-Saba Orbeliani, who is one of my all-time favorite Georgians for sure, but the quotes like 'his immortal genius', or 'he was a great renaissance man' are rather cringey, unencyclopedic and do more harm than good. Wikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view. They should point out how significant SS's dictionary, writings and travelogues are but never venture into supra toasts and subjective hagiography
 * i've done a bit of a copyedit including removal of all/most(?) peacock terms but still needs tightening up, including references, if any other editor can assist....? Coolabahapple (talk) 14:16, 25 June 2021 (UTC)