Talk:Transpirational cooling (biological)

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	This article was accepted from this draft on 8 December 2022 by reviewer Chidgk1 (talk · contribs).

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Name of article?[edit]

Do we need (biological)? If change name probably need to change link in the excerpt I have added in transpiration Chidgk1 (talk) 07:30, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think it's probably good to have "biological" in the title as otherwise it could be confused with this similar sounding article title: Transpiration cooling (?). EMsmile (talk) 10:31, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You might like to add cites to lead[edit]

so that they appear in transpiration Chidgk1 (talk) 07:38, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Some content is more essay like, not encyclopedic[edit]

From a quick look at the article (haven't yet studied it in detail), I find these too sentences problematic as they seem "essay like" to me:

The Earth’s energy budget reveals pathways to mitigate climate change using our knowledge of the efficacy of how plants cool and moderating Western approaches with proven indigenous and traditional sources of knowledge.
This calls on us to unlearn some of the assumptions embedded in Western epistemologies and the decolonisation of knowledge as a foundation for more effective climate action. EMsmile (talk) 10:30, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]