Talk:Variable Star



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move to Variable Star (novel)  . --  tariq abjotu  (joturner) 00:09, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

Requested move
Robert A. Heinlein's Variable Star → Variable Star ... Rationale: The real name of this book appears to be Variable Star, not Robert A. Heinlein's Variable Star. The cover image on the page and the advance copy that I have in my possession bear this out. I believe this move is uncontroversial, but is obstructed. --Lukobe 19:00, 30 July 2006 (UTC)

Survey

 * Add *Support or *Oppose followed by an optional one-sentence explanation, then sign your opinion with  ~


 * Support, somebody confused the cover treatment with the title. --Dhartung | Talk 09:02, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Support, Name change to Variable Star (Novel). Would suggest waiting until after the novel is released, to be certain.--204.76.128.217 11:32, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Support per entry at Library of Congress. Kafziel 17:55, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose a variable star is an astronomical phenomenon. Variable Star (Novel) is preferred. 132.205.93.88 23:47, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 *  Tentative support We already have Supermassive black hole vs Supermassive Black Hole, which seems to work fine, provided that disambiguation is given at the top of the article. In any case, the current article name (Robert A. Heinlein's Variable Star) doesn't follow the typical naming conventions on Wikipedia. Chaos syndrome 00:06, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Probably have to fix that at some point... moving it to Supermassive Black Hole (song). 132.205.93.88 04:23, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * It has just been moved to Supermassive Black Hole (song)  Ai y  da  16:56, 11 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Removed "tentative" per Kafziel in discussion. Chaos syndrome 17:22, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose name change to Variable Star, as this is an important astronomical category of stars. Support Variable Star (novel) instead. --Fournax 00:32, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Zzzzzzzzzzz made the move to Variable Star (novel) and I don't think a further move is necessary. --Fournax 20:35, 3 August 2006 (UTC)


 * Support. As there is a disambiguation notice at the top of  Robert A. Heinlein's Variable Star , this is no worse than the current situation (where Variable Star is a disambig.) Spacepotato 02:27, 1 August 2006 (UTC) Withdrawing my comment now that the page is at Variable Star (novel). Spacepotato 21:23, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose. As stated above, variable stars are important astronomical objects.  I suspect that more Wikipedia readers would be looking for information on the astronomical objects than Heinlein's book.  A disambiguation page would be preferred.  Heinlein's book should be at Variable Star (novel) or something similar.GeorgeJBendo 08:06, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * No objection. Per Naming conventions, upper case names are for proper nouns. "Variable star" is a subject, rather than a name as in the case of the book. &mdash; RJH (talk) 22:07, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Support. People looking for the astronomical term will probably not be using double caps, and those who do will be pointed in the right direction by the disambig note at the top. --Groggy Dice 23:42, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Move to Variable Star (novel) - the title is definitely wrong, since Spider Robinson is writing the book. Zzzzzzzzzzz

Discussion

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There is no need to qualify it with "(Novel)", as it is not likely to be confused with anything else. If and when another version is made, it can be disambiguated. Kafziel 17:57, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Agreed. --Lukobe 18:02, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Disagree. see Variable star. I would bet more people are interested in the type of star than Heinlein's novel. 132.205.93.88 23:47, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Disagree, for the same reasons as above. The qualification is necessary. --Fournax 00:33, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * If someone types in "variable star" (lowercase lowercase) or "Variable star" (uppercase lowercase) they are taken to the astronomical article. Somebody typing in "Variable Star" (uppercase uppercase) is probably looking for the book...and if they're not, a link to the astronomical article will be at the top of the novel article anyway. Basically what Chaos syndrome says above. I don't think a disambig page is necessary for the uppercase-uppercase form. --Lukobe 00:55, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Disagree. The average user is not going to pay attention to such a subtle variation in capitalization, especially if it is not an explicit convention followed throughout the whole internet. Many people often do searches on book titles typed in lower case letters (including me), whereas other people may capitalize all the words when  searching for something that is not a proper noun.  The disambiguation page would be a more practical solution that gives readers an explicit choice.  (Also, go see starburst/Starburst.  I think that disambiguation page works well.) GeorgeJBendo 08:17, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

After writing in my comment above, I found the disambiguation page here. I would not have found the page had I known that I needed to type Variable Star with the first letter in both words capitalized, and I think I would have struggled to find the Heinlein book. May I suggest the following: This seems to be the convention followed by the starburst entries, and it works well. It also leaves open the possibility that someone will open a London nightclub called Variable Star (nightclub) or that someone will write screen saver software called Variable Star (software) or that Heinlein's book will be turned into a Variable Star (movie). GeorgeJBendo 08:31, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Make variable star, Variable star, Variable Star, and anything with the same letters (regardless of capitalization) lead to the disambiguation page.
 * Put the novel at Variable Star (novel)
 * Put the astronomical objects at variable star (astronomy)


 * I don't see the need for a disambiguation page here, as we only have the two items. If the phenomenon is put at variable star and the novel is put at Variable Star, the reader experience is as follows:
 * Reader is looking for the phenomenon and types variable star or Variable star &rarr; he is taken directly to the page.
 * Reader is looking for the novel and types variable Star or Variable Star &rarr; he is taken directly to the page.
 * Reader is looking for the phenomenon and types variable Star or Variable Star &rarr; he may use the disambiguation link at the top of the page.
 * Reader is looking for the novel and types variable star or Variable star &rarr; he may use the disambiguation link at the top of the page.
 * Introducing a disambiguation page will only force the reader to chase more links. If someone makes Variable Star (movie), a disambig will probably be necessary, but it can be written then. Spacepotato 20:04, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Whatever gets done here should also be done to Double star the astronomical phenomenon and Double Star the Heinlein novel. --Fournax 11:46, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Not a bad proposal...you want to be the one to run it by the astronomy folks though? :) --Lukobe 18:02, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * While variable star (astronomy) can redirect to variable star, primary name should be about the type of star, because that is the most likely topic of a search by my guesstimate, an overwhelming amount.
 * http://www.google.com/search?num=100&hl=en&safe=off&q=variable-star+%2Bheinlein&btnG=Search&meta=
 * 13,000 ghits - Heinlein
 * http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q=variable-star+-heinlein&btnG=Google+Search&meta=
 * 900,000 ghits - non-Heinlein
 * 132.205.93.88 22:40, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
 * The same can be said for double star:
 * 45,000 Google hits - Heinlein
 * 953,000 Google hits - non-Heinlein
 * Who wants to run changing Double Star to Double Star (novel) by the Heinlein folks?--Fournax 02:06, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * I'd like to ask User:Fournax what he proposes for the target page of Variable Star. Spacepotato 02:40, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * I suggested above that it be moved to Variable Star (novel) and I think Double Star should be moved to Double Star (novel) as well. I agree with GeorgeJBendo's comment that many users will not pay attention to subtle variation in capitalization. --Fournax 10:29, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * My question is: What should happen if the user types Variable Star? Spacepotato 22:39, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * The same thing that happens now, the Variable Star disambiguation page. There doesn't seem to be an obviously correct answer here, but I believe Variable Star (novel) would be more consistent with Naming_conventions_%28books%29 and with Naming_conventions, in that the majority of English speakers are more likely to associate variable star with the astronomical phenomenon than with the Heinlein/Robinson novel.--Fournax 01:21, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
 * I think that both possible titles for the novel's article are consistent with Wikipedia naming conventions. I see no advantage in pointing Variable Star to a disambiguation page, though, because, whether Variable Star points to a disambig page or to the novel article, the person looking for variable stars will have to follow a disambiguation link in either case.
 * Another possible solution would be to point both Variable star and Variable Star to the article on variable stars, which would have a disambiguation link to the novel article (presumably called Variable Star (novel)) at the top. In this case life would be easy for the person who wanted to know about variable stars (whichever capitalization he used) and less easy for the person wanting to know about the novel.  This approach (which can be seen in action at Natural selection) could be put into action immediately by someone sufficiently bold.   Spacepotato 02:03, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Now that the novel has been moved to Variable Star (novel), I have implemented this. Spacepotato 20:55, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

At the risk of being too blunt for sensitive ears, we need to get our shit together here. As things stand, it's not moving to "Variable Star" and it's not moving to "Variable Star (novel)". Everyone can talk about Google hits and astronomy for the next week, and the move request will fail. This is going to continue to sit right where it is, a title which we all agree is incorrect. So how about we move it to the one suggested, and after that everyone worried about confusion can work on setting new precedents? Kafziel 03:03, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Good point. Whatever happens the book really shouldn't remain at the incorrect title Robert A. Heinlein's Variable Star. I'm sorry I didn't think of moving the article to Variable Star before creating the disambig page. I second Kafziel's suggestion. --Lukobe 04:54, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * I have boldy moved this to Variable Star (novel) while we await closure on this discussion. (Variable Star (novel) was unocuppied, so it didn't require admin intervention). Zzzzzzzzzzz 18:57, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
 * It can be moved again when we've reached consensus. Zzzzzzzzzzz 18:59, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
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Book is out.
The book is in stores, and the article has been updated accordingly. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Nagle (talk • contribs).

Whether to put "borrowings" into own section
JimDouglas has suggested putting the names of the works Robinson borrowed from in making the plot into its own section and deleting them from the plot summary, to make it flow smoother. I oppose. Two reasons. First, a list of novels and whatnot, just by itself, doesn't really convey how much, and what, was borrowed. Second, if someone adds, say I Will Fear No Evil (as an example) to the list, it is hard to evaluate whether it is so Suggest leave as is.--Wehwalt 20:50, 7 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm ambivalent about it, which is why I left the basic structure intact. In reading it the first time, it seemed like the plot section couldn't quite decide if it should describe the book or enumerate the Heinlein references.  There are other references that I didn't even try to add because I couldn't find a logical place to shoehorn them in:
 * Leslie Lecroix, financed by Harriman Enterprises, was responsible for the first moon landing; there's a Harriman City on the moon.
 * Tombaugh Station has been bugging me...I'm certain it's a Heinlein reference, but I can't quite place it.
 * 'The Runt' gets lost in a space suit on a field trip from Tombaugh Station in a short I can't remember the name of right now. --Baylink 21:01, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
 * And a counter-example...on page 77, Spider refers to space travel during the time of the Prophets; I'm certain that this is inconsistent with the Future History.
 * Slightly off-topic, but I really wish they'd included all of Heinlein's original notes as an appendix. It's not clear from what Spider says in the appendix exactly where Heinlein's notes stopped.
 * BTW, now totally off-topic: On page 63, Spider refers to Main & Hastings as the most upscale ("tony") part of Vancouver. Today, that's the middle of the downtown eastside; it's crawling with heroin addicts, prostitutes, and assorted street people. -- Jim Douglas (talk)  (contribs)  21:18, 7 October 2006 (UTC)
 * I believe Spider is pretty familiar with Vancouver, so I expect the comment is meant to be tongue-in-cheek. The story is set several centuries from now, remember. Plenty of time for gentrification! --Michael K. Smith 16:11, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Also, I wikilinked Charles Sheffield, as that's undoubtedly the reference Spider was going for. But I'm sure he was also thinking of Captain Aaron Sheffield of the New Frontiers. -- Jim Douglas (talk)  (contribs)  21:44, 7 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Wasn't Tombaugh Station the lunar outpost that Kip, Peewee and the Mother Thing were heading towards? I also spotted the LeCroix reference but like you, I threw up my hands.  I wonder if Robinson ever made a timeline.


 * There was some space travel during the time of the Prophets as the Moon and Venus were already settled. For example, Lazurus gets offplanet after the Families' Meeting of 2012.  It was, however, very small, from the comments we have, and the US played no part in it.


 * I agree with you both on the notes question and on Vancouver. But look, twenty-five years ago, Gastown was rundown.  Now it is upscale.  Things come and go.


 * Unless we can think of some way of conveying the large number of works that Robinson is referring to in some manageable way, I would suggest we leave it more or less as is.--Wehwalt 21:52, 7 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Works for me...I'm sure others will weigh in soon. (I specifically avoided looking at this article until I had time to read the book; just finished last night.)
 * Also, did you find any of my changes that bothered you? I deleted some references that seemed a bit out of place (moving sidewalks in Asimov's novels).  And of course, the starship in Orphans of the Sky is the Vanguard; New Frontiers is Methuselah's Children. -- Jim Douglas (talk)  (contribs)  22:52, 7 October 2006 (UTC)
 * (Followup) I think you're right about Tombaugh Station. I thought it might be Have Space Suit—Will Travel, but I wasn't seeing it in a quick scan. -- Jim Douglas (talk)  (contribs)  23:05, 7 October 2006 (UTC)


 * No, the edits were fine. I think the sidewalks were closer to Asimov's books than to the "Roads" which must roll.  Robinson plainly didn't limit himself to Heinlein, judging by the autodocs.  I think that as long as we have enough indisputable references to Heinlein's books in the article, we have done all that can be expected from a WP article.  This is not a concordance.  Good catch on the starships.  Are we meant to believe that in this universe, AJ Libby returned from space, married well, and got out just before the last trump?  In which case, we can think Lazarus finally gets his!!--Wehwalt 23:11, 7 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I don't think Spider worried too much about compatibility with the Future History...he created a weird hybrid universe that's more or less our own (with the addition of Harriman Enterprises), then uses 9/11 as one of root causes of Nehemiah Scudder. I didn't think the 9/11 references served the book well, but I'm sure others will differ.
 * I didn't link to The Roads Must Roll because in the Future History timeline, rolling roads died out in the 20th Century.
 * Oh, BTW: Read the last three paragraphs at the bottom of page 305. That's not Slipstick Libby! (As far as I can tell, the Howard Families don't exist in this universe.)
 * The article itself also states that the Howard Families don't exist in this universe, but I'm not sure why it makes that assumption; absence of evidence rather than evidence of absence, beyond the differences in the New Horizon. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 158.155.6.117 (talk) 20:40, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
 * And one more Heinleinesque reference...Yoji Kondo makes an appearance on page 174; he also appears as a character in The Cat Who Walks Through Walls. -- Jim Douglas (talk)  (contribs)  23:29, 7 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Touché. Certainly would be out of character for him.  Although maybe in this universe, he got some balls, rather than losing his . . .--Wehwalt 00:02, 8 October 2006 (UTC)

I don't think we need any more info about the book. This is a turkey that Heinlein didn't finish for good reason. It's like Verne's Paris in the 20th Century, a bad book by a great author. Verne showed the manuscript to a few people, all of whom agreed it was awful, then put it in a safe and forgot about it. Recently it was discovered and published. A century later, it still sucks. --John Nagle 05:52, 8 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Forced to agree. Very strained plot.  Oh yeah, Joel's shares were not even worth the selling, but now become enormously valuable when the ship reports in.  Confederate Bonds had a market value well into the 20th century, and Czarist bonds throughout the century.  You think those shares wouldn't be worth something?  And what sort of father, trying to provide for his son, puts most into such a speculative investment anyway?  Also, a smarter solution would be for each colony to board the ship and wait in the planet's shadow (it would take some fuel, but should be possible) until the wave has passed.  And are they going to survive on sterilized planets, anyway?--Wehwalt 21:46, 10 October 2006 (UTC)

If "borrowings" refers to the parenthesized names of novels, then there's no question in my mind that they should be taken out entirely. The book more or less fits into the Future History; noting every correlation is unhelpful, and looks silly and unencyclopedic, IMO. The ones under "Setting" make sense, but the rest are just goofy. A lot of the little parenthesized comments are more like attempts at amateur literary criticism than anything that belongs in an encyclopedia article. I've taken out all the parenthesized references in the plot section.--24.52.254.62 00:00, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I'll reserve judgement on most of those changes. For now, I've just corrected two inaccuracies that I corrected once, and which you just reintroduced.  The stream-of-consciousness thing does not mark this book as non-Heinlein; I Will Fear No Evil is loaded with it.  And I reverted bisexuality to the more general sexuality.  Heinlein couldn't get away with any hint of sexuality in the Scribners juveniles. -- Jim Douglas (talk)  (contribs)  00:13, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Neither is an inaccuracy. I Will Fear No Evil is describing an internal monolog between two consciousnesses inhabiting the same brain; that has nothing to do with the literary technique of stream of consciousness. The part about bisexuality, as I originally wrote it, was not referring specifically to 1955 juveniles but to juvenile novels in general; somebody else changed that later. In any case, casual drug use, referred to approvingly, is not something that publishers put in juvenile fiction today. Ditto with the fact that the sex is often promiscuous, often comes without any emotional consequences, and that all of that is referred to approvingly. --24.52.254.62 02:36, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * If I recall correctly, the original wording was that bisexuality was unacceptable in youth fiction even in 2006, which is untrue...you oughtta see the stuff my 15-year-old niece reads. My point about stream of consciousness was that it wasn't completely foreign to Heinlein.  The remaining two points -- profanity and punning -- clearly and unambigously mark this as a Spider Robinson and not a Robert Heinlein. -- Jim Douglas (talk)  (contribs)  02:41, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * It's all in the way it's handled. Publishers love to see important social issues and controversies dealt with earnestly in YA titles. What they won't accept, even today, is the type of treatment Robinson did in this book, where drugs and promiscuous sex are described as just plain fun. The way the bisexuality is handled, with just a casual reference to it that implies it's normal and socially accepted, is not at all what a publisher, even today, would allow in a YA. Bisexuality, if it occurred, would have to be a Major Theme, and it would have to be treated with Great Sensitivity.--24.52.254.62 02:44, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Example: Gossip Girl. -- Jim Douglas (talk) <sub style="color:gray;">(contribs)  02:46, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * OK, you've got me there -- excellent counterexample :-) I guess I'm out of date.--24.52.254.62 02:54, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * The book doesn't clearly fit into the Future History, as I've noted above. I'm hoping to get a chance to ask Spider about the weird hybrid universe in this novel at a book reading/signing here in Vancouver next Sunday. -- Jim Douglas <sup style="color:green;">(talk)  <sub style="color:gray;">(contribs)  00:18, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * It doesn't seem like we have a real issue of disagreement at this point. The parentheticals are still in the "Setting" section.--24.52.254.62 02:40, 15 October 2006 (UTC)

Imbalance, overly long plot summary
The article is IMO severely unbalanced at this point. It consists mainly of an extremely long and overly detailed plot summary. That's just not appropriate for an encyclopedia article. I think the plot summary should be edited down to something like 1/4 of its current length.--24.52.254.62 02:40, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I don't disagree, but it seems to be a systemic issue in all of the R.A.H. novel and short story articles (and possibly in other fiction articles on Wikipedia). I'm not sure that an encyclopedia article that's simply a point-by-point regurgitation of the plot is really the best approach.  But we should probably review them all as a group; the style and structure ought to be internally consistent. -- Jim Douglas <sup style="color:green;">(talk)  <sub style="color:gray;">(contribs)  02:45, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I disagree about the need for consistency, and in any case, it's just not practical to require consistency of that kind, because that's not WP's strength; WP is a massively parallel project. I think there's also a difference between this book and the other Heinlein books. If you take a book like Stranger, or Starship Troopers, you have a massive amount of criticism that's been written about them, so you can write an article that isn't original research, uses verifiable sources, is fairly long, and doesn't just consist of a plot synopsis. That's not the case with Variable Star.--24.52.254.62 02:52, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Stranger and Starship Troopers are probably the most prominent books, and have received the most attention from multiple editors. Several others are mostly plot summary:  Red Planet (novel), Between Planets, I Will Fear No Evil.  -- Jim Douglas <sup style="color:green;">(talk)  <sub style="color:gray;">(contribs)  02:58, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * What else do you want to write about? It hasn't made the bestseller list.  There hasn't been time to see if it is going to win (or even be eligible for) a HUgo or Nebula.  Let me know.--Wehwalt 03:35, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I've gone through and put { { Plot } } templates on all the Heinlein novels that seemed to me to have this problem. IMO it was roughly half of them. I was actually pleasantly surprised at how many managed to be fairly lengthy without consisting of long plot synopses.--24.52.254.62 03:25, 16 October 2006 (UTC)

I've gone ahead and taken a whack at the disproportionately long plot synopsis. I've also added a { { Plot } } template, which is clearly made for articles like this.--24.52.254.62 03:12, 16 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Since you have a history of editing with some consistency and some attachment to Heinlein's work, I encourage you to register an ID and use it. It is free and easy and not a burden.  You will get more respect.  I almost went through and reverted all your plot tags, but being cautious, I investigated first. Hu 05:11, 16 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I suggest that fixing the plot summaries would be much better than making all the book articles look ugly by adding plot to the top of them. I don't think it will encourage anyone to fix the plot summaries. --Pmsyyz 11:37, 17 October 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree with Pmsyyz. Go do it and then other editors will judge if it was done well.  That is how WP works.  It annoys me when someone says "oh, there is a problem" and doesn't offer a solution.  Get on with it.--Wehwalt 11:49, 17 October 2006 (UTC)

Notes from a book reading
You don't get a lot of time to ask questions at a Q&A session and a book signing, but I managed to ask a few: I know this all counts as original research, but I thought it might be of some interest to whoever reads this article. -- Jim Douglas <sup style="color:green;">(talk) <sub style="color:gray;">(contribs)  00:07, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Spider doesn't want Heinlein's original notes to ever be released. He wants readers to "see Heinlein on every page", as opposed to picking out the Heinlein parts from the Spider parts.  And he thinks the notes would be used to criticize Heinlein (I guess because they're just rough scraps of notes; his reasons weren't clear).  I'd be interested in knowing if Bill Patterson is considering including the notes as part of the Virginia Edition.
 * The plot twist in the middle was not in the original outline (I managed to get that much out of him). Although I would have guessed as much anyway...I can't see Scribner's in 1956 putting out a juvenile with that sort of event in it.
 * The plot twist did originate with Heinlein, though. Heinlein mentioned it in a phone conversation to Spider as a plot he'd considered 30 years earlier, which Campbell rejected out of hand as too pessimistic.
 * Spider didn't make any effort to smoothly fit the story into the Future History universe; he was really just trying to fit in as many references as could logically be shoehorned into the story. But (he said) you could consider it to be one of the "sheaf of related universes" (i.e. the multiverse or World as Myth).


 * Ah. At a reading.  I was wondering.  :-)  It's in timeline 2; LeCroix was the first man on the moon, so either it's an offshoot, or anythhing FH related needs to be evaluated in that light.  I'm not too worried about tone; I'm sure that will settle out by the end of the month or so... I just don't think it's all that great a synopsis, myself.


 * I'll probably take a crack at cleaning it up a bit more, but not until I have a copy in hand, which probably won't be until this weekend (Thank ghod for Borders :-). Overall?  Good book, some weak spots; clearly exactly what it purports to be: Spider writing Heinlein's novel.  Will I pay hardcover prices for it?  Damn sight faster than Clancy.  :-)  Thanks, Jim, for the pointer. --Baylink 21:07, 24 October 2006 (UTC)


 * But then again, it's not in timeline 2 because it includes 9/11, it doesn't include the Howard Families, the Interregnum of the Prophets lasted 150 years (as opposed to 75), the New Horizons returned decades later than it did in the FH, etc. (Spider also mentioned that the Ganymede of Variable Star has a different gravity than the Ganymede of the FH, as Heinlein quoted the figure that was believed accurate 50 years ago.) -- Jim Douglas <sup style="color:green;">(talk)  <sub style="color:gray;">(contribs)  21:11, 24 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Correct; we live in timeline 3, by inspection. --Baylink 04:12, 20 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Hard to believe that nobody has mentioned the inclusion of a reference to "The Dukes of Hazzard", part of a discussion overheard as the crew is boarding the Sheffield. That and comparing the destruction of the Sun to 9/11, and shoehorning them both into Heinlein's universe with the Venerian Dragons just flat out made Variable Star a real stinker for me. The Dukes bit reminded me of the 1980's catchphrase quoting character in Starmind. Pile on Robinson's heavy handed left-wing political screed of an evil mega-rich capitalist as the Big Bad just made it worse. 66.232.94.33 (talk) 04:37, 18 October 2010 (UTC)

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Alex Grey and Colin MacDonald
Please try reading the novel as you write about it: Both these are discussed at some length in the text of the novel itself, and are far more clearly real-world references than some of the others now listed. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:18, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Furthermore, IIRC, Spider doesn't mention Grey in the afterword at all. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:24, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, let us say that Joel read War and Peace during his journey. Should we give Tolstoy a shout out?--Wehwalt (talk) 01:00, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * That would be a line. If Robinson had spent a couple pages describing Tolstoy in detail, and there were still a question in the average reader's mind whether he were a real author or part of the future history, like Rhysling, we should so link. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 21:41, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * In any case Joel discusses the artist Alex Grey and the musician Colin MacDonald in the book. is misleading; it implies that they come up in dialogue, rather than the consistent narrative voice of the entire novel. One might as well say that Joel discusses the Sheffield. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 21:41, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Hm, how about "Joel is influenced by the works of artist Alex Grey and musician Colin MacDonald, which are discussed in the text of the novel."?--Wehwalt (talk) 21:43, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Read WP:FICTION. If this were part of the plot summary, there would be a reason to phrase this as in-universe, but why here? It makes the reader click to see that they are not part of the Future History, which is the only real point here. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 21:51, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

I rephrased to: "The works of artist Alex Grey and the musician Colin MacDonald are discussed in the novel." I find "credited with" oddly phrased. Is there any prospect of MacDonald getting his own article, even a stub, would it survive an AFD? If there were two blue links, and given the subsection title, surely that would answer any question?--Wehwalt (talk) 21:59, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure. He's not Colin MacDonald or Colin MacDonald (musician) (who probably would be deleted), but his website has non-trivial media coverage, and Variable Star is itself a claim to notability. (My interest here is having read the novel, and trying to find which references Spider did invent; what one reader has done, others will do.) Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:25, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Maybe when I get some time and feel like it I will take a shot at it. However, is the language otherwise acceptable?--Wehwalt (talk) 22:30, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Tweaking to saxophonist; he appears to be a one-instrument guy, and Colin MacDonald (saxophonist) may be the best title for the page if you write it. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:36, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Might be good to link to saxophone; otherwise good. I need to review WP:MUSIC before I start playing in that band.--Wehwalt (talk) 22:37, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Go ahead, if you like. I wouldn't link so common a word; and if I did, it would be the mention in the plot summary, but I won't revert. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:46, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

Conrad
In Starman Jones the starship is propelled by "Horst-Conrad Impellers", and in Variable Star it is at least implied that the drive used on the Sheffield and other starships was owned if not invented by the Conrad family. Should this be mentioned as another reference? 129.42.208.186 (talk) 23:46, 8 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Sure, nice catch. I guess we missed that one.  Spider was really throwing in the kitchen sink, wasn't he?--Wehwalt (talk) 00:21, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Connections section is Original Research?
Is anyone else concerned that the Connections section is primarily original research? These connections between VS and other real and fictional worlds appear to be made by editors, not reliable sources. Thoughts? The article will be much improved if we could add validity to these "connections." Jim Dunning | talk  23:05, 4 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I just found this page and came to this talk page to note the same thing. The whole section is WP:OR and should probably be removed. Ashmoo (talk) 11:50, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Ten years later - and I was thinking the same thing. -- Beardo (talk) 02:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Possible discrepancy
Cold sleep (of an art) is possible in Methuselah's Children, but not in Variable Star. 144.200.0.163 (talk) 12:38, 5 June 2020 (UTC)


 * So what ? This is not supposed to be set in the same future as Methuselah's Children. -- Beardo (talk) 02:10, 28 September 2021 (UTC)