Talk:You Are the Apple of My Eye

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C-class review
I have passed the article at C level. The article has sufficient coverage and reasonable depth, and no major sourcing issues that stand in the way of a C class assessment.

A few recommendations:
 * You don't need to cite every sentence, unless of course the paragraph has sentences that come from different sources. If a paragraph or section just uses the one source only, then you only need to give it one.  If you over-cite it can become to messy for the reader.
 * The critical reception section isn't completely neutral. All the reviews are favorable, and you should really include a negative review by someone who didn't like the film to offer a counterpoint to the praise the film has received.
 * Generally, consensus on the film project is to not include an image in the soundtrack section, since it is not needed to identify the subject. See Manual_of_Style_(film). It might be more productive to include a 30 second audio sample from the score instead to give readers a better understanding of the style of music used in the film. Betty Logan (talk) 11:28, 23 December 2011 (UTC)

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