Template:Did you know nominations/Viviana Gradinaru

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:31, 3 February 2020 (UTC)

Viviana Gradinaru

Created by Jesswade88 (talk). Nominated by Achaea (talk) at 19:23, 24 January 2020 (UTC).

Interesting research, on good sources, Spanish and subscruption accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I like the ALT much better, naming livin creatures ;) - In the article: I don't understand "also" in the first sentence about growing up. For musicians, Work comes first, then Awards. Is this different for scientists? - I think mentioning her Romanian roots might make a hook more interesting. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:38, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
  • @Gerda Arendt: Thanks! Have changed that now, I think it was confusing, because Vaslui is a city, but it also seems to include several smaller villages, so I presume she grew up in one of those. Have also added Romanian to ALT1 per your suggestion, hope that's okay. Achaea (talk) 18:21, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, and got the new one down here - or the conversation would make little sense ;) - Well, how about adding Californian to the team then, or say "from Romania"? Or readers might think the whole thing takes place in Romania. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:26, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
  • @Gerda Arendt: Sorry, should have done that, wasn't thinking! I think you're right about the adding California angle, how's this? Achaea (talk) 20:48, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
ALT3:... that Romanian neuroscientist Viviana Gradinaru was part of the research team from Caltech that found that serotonin is necessary for sleep in zebrafish and mice?
that's great! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:55, 30 January 2020 (UTC)