User talk:Bkissin/Archive 12

Request on 15:24:46, 16 July 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Excellenc1
Please give a look at similar articles regarding elections in France: 2004 French regional elections

2004 Île-de-France regional election

2004 Auvergne regional election I copied the same format as these articles. If you feel my draft doesn't have reliable citations, then what about these? Why are these articles approved (I know their submission is not done by you, I am just giving examples to be considered)?

Excellenc1📞 15:24, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Other stuff exists. I didn't review those articles, but I would have had the same complaints. All of the articles are notable, but you just need more sources. Find some local articles from Aquitaine about the election and some Inline citations to information you reference. Then it should be good to accept. Bkissin (talk) 15:28, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

I have added inline citations as per your suggestions above. Would you please take a look at the draft now? Excellenc1📞 16:20, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

Sorry, the article is now approved, thanks for your suggestions. Excellenc1📞 16:22, 16 July 2021 (UTC) , are you translating articles from French to English? Thank you for helping out with that! I've done that a lot myself. Different language wikipedias have different guidelines on sourcing. I try to find French articles that have a lot of references, that way they'll pass in English Wikipedia. With your current drafts, I am happy to accept them, but could you try to find WP:THREE reliable sources? It's not a hard-and-fast rule, but it sweetens the case to accept. Bkissin (talk) 16:53, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

I had found WP:THREE for my article Thierry Lataste, as per a request by a user in the Teahouse. For other articles, I usually don't check if I have three best sources, but I assure that whatever I cite is appropriate. Excellenc1📞 17:03, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

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Hi Bkissin, thanks for approving my page on Diary of a Mad Old Man. Currently it doesn't link properly from the main Tanizaki article because the titles are slightly different - mine has the word '(novel)' in brackets, which is strictly speaking unnecessary. Do you have any idea how I can sort this out? Thanks.. GaryDex (talk) 16:30, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

Linking to Diary of a Mad Old Man
Hi Bkissin, thanks for approving my page on Diary of a Mad Old Man. Currently it doesn't link properly from the main Tanizaki article because the titles are slightly different - mine has the word '(novel)' in brackets, which is strictly speaking unnecessary. Do you have any idea how I can sort this out? Thanks.. GaryDex (talk) 16:35, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi ! That's an easy fix. When you want to link to something but you don't want to use the title (or in this case, fix the link so it works) you just have to add a | symbol. So in the code, it would look like Diary of a Mad Old Man and would show up on the page as Diary of a Mad Old Man. I fixed it on Tanizaki's page, and I hope that helps for the future! Bkissin (talk) 17:53, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

Thanks a lot!GaryDex (talk) 17:57, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

Mammoth WVH
I have deleted Mammoth WVH G6. Jeepday (talk) 16:43, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

Hi!

 * Thanks for viewing my article! I noticed that the article has been assessed to the start-class, and I had a look at the example article of start-class, I don't think my article is that bad : ). so, can you please give me some advice so that I can improve it. Many thanks!! (Architecture of Zimbabwe)=> name of my article

Best regards, Zimou Yuan

Please may I edit Alexandra High School (talk) 00:51, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

A Help desk thread concerning you
Hi, just in case the ping didn't work, you are mentioned at Help desk DuncanHill (talk) 13:37, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Joel Ventresca
Greetings! Just wanted to touch base about my draft for Joel Ventresca. I understand that perennial candidates normally do not fit the notability requirements, but as someone with an interest in third-party politics, I believe anybody who gets 7 percent of the vote in a city of 800,000 people as a third party candidate is pretty notable. Now that Ventresca is running in the California recall, I think people should be able to figure out who he is straight from the recall's Wikipedia page. I also think there is a viable amount of sources with good information, and I will update the page with more information as time goes on if you would reconsider your decision. All The Best. Capisred (talk) 14:43, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
 * And they can learn who he is straight from the recall's Wikipedia page. If you want to add more detailed bios about each of the candidates there, you are more than welcome. Alternatively, you may want to consider Ballotpedia, which is not affiliated with Wikipedia, but may provide the venue for the type of candidate information you want. Bkissin (talk) 14:54, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Bangladesh Bank Taka Museum
Again, thanks for your work over at AfC. Take a look at this draft, you approved it, then the article creator moved it back into mainspace (first time I've ever seen that happen!). And from their edit summary, this is clearly UPE. Thoughts?
 * I think we were concerned about POV/PAID issues all along in terms of the article prose. Oof, did you see the edit summary? "That's not how this works! That's not how any of this works!!" I'll put a UPE tag on the draft and we can figure out what to do from there. Bkissin (talk) 15:18, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , lol. It was the edit summary which gave me pause.  Onel 5969  TT me 15:38, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Moroccan mafia
Hey, I got you ping about Moroccan mafia late, looked and thought was notable but needed time to read fully so would have waited till after work because that is way to much to read even while on the most boring of company conferences calls :) Mute now as it's accepted. Just wanted to say I want ignoring you, just sleeping and working. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 14:22, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries! :) Bkissin (talk) 14:28, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

Hello Bkissin! Thank you for the reply regarding my Draft. How can I delete a Draft? TY

SB 86 GNG
I wrote this article in part because of just how much controversy it had. I have seen pages for other failed bills that are notable. If you just Google SB 86, you can see a lot of news coverage, including by Fox News, TBT , and Politico. Most coverage is by local news channels across Florida, but the number of signatures, I think, shows general notability. Several examples are cited here.

RALupien (talk) 18:39, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

Article: David Provoost
Thank you so much for accepting the article.

Vedlagt (talk) 20:31, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

Thank you so much for acceptance of Lakshmi Ghar Aayi submission
Hi Bkissin. Thank you for reviewing, accepting and publishing my AfC on Lakshmi Ghar Aayi. I just came this morning to check the status of my drafts submitted for review and I was overjoyed to see it accepted. This one was very difficult to make because I really had no more references to add and thought I will add them when I get them later as I want to be a bit inactive due to busy school schedule. However I was so so overjoyed that this submission got accepted as this is my one of the favorite shows on TV. It was like dream come true moment for me. Thank you so much and wishing you a happy editing.--Creativitylove (talk) 05:56, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Rejection of Draft:DietPi
Hello :, we now changed somehow the wording of Draft:DietPi and also removed some doubled contents. Would you please review the draft again and give me some more hints what to improve before I resubmit the article?

Regards, StephanStS — Preceding unsigned comment added by StephanStS (talk • contribs) 12:47, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

Official Anna Tenney ( Anna Tenney) Article for publish on wiki so fans may find out more information on Anna Tenney" Official Anna Tenney"
I know that there are a few fans trying to get articles published about Anna Tenney ( Official Anna Tenney). But I work on her Pr team and I know my information is correct. How can I get my article published ? Will you whelp m e please. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Suga5070 (talk • contribs) 19:06, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
 * (See also User talk:Fianaarmstrong1.) – Athaenara ✉  01:52, 3 August 2021 (UTC)

Flatmates
Hello! I am trying to retrieve a few old NZ 1990s shows as you can see. I have created a draft for Flatmates which aired in 1997. More sources have come to light for this one! You can take a look here at the draft which I have now submitted! Draft:Flatmates. Tank you! --ArleneHerman (talk) 05:17, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Update - Already on the mainspace! That was quick! --ArleneHerman (talk) 05:32, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
 * ''(Currently exists at Flatmates (New Zealand TV series).) – Athaenara  ✉  01:56, 3 August 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Hawaa Al Mansoori
Thanks for reviewing and your comments on Draft:Hawaa Al Mansoori

I have removed some wording that could be seen as promotional and content that was superflous. Would appreciate any further recommendations.

My understanding is that this should pass WP:POLITICIAN given that the Federal National Council (FNC) is a national legislative body of the UAE. To my knowledge, the government makes no distinction between members of the FNC based on the method of selection. But I'm not familiar with the grey area so I might be missing the context of this point. Article (69) of the UAE Constitution states: "An Emirate is free to determine the method of selection of its representatives". Looking across both federal and regional governments in the UAE, with the exception of the FNC members that are currently elected (20 of the 40), all other senior government postions including cabinet ministers and judges are appointed.

Appreciate you taking the time. Best, --Curiouskaon (talk) 12:25, 3 August 2021 (UTC)

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Draft:Hyperautomation
Hello, thank you for taking the time to review Draft:Hyperautomation. I'm reaching out to see if you would be willing to expand further on your assessment that the submission reads more like an advertisement. The article is about a type of technology, so I wasn't sure where the concern about advertising might be coming into play. I'm happy to help clean up any concerning content, as my intent is to keep the article within WP:NPOV. For full transparency, I have a declared COI in relationship to Appian Corporation. Again, thank you for your time! JMGAppian (talk) 13:48, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

Ways to improve 2021 Quebec City municipal election
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Thank you for creating 2021 Quebec City municipal election.

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AfC notification: User:Firaszreik/sandbox has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Firaszreik/sandbox. Thanks! Eagleash (talk) 19:39, 10 August 2021 (UTC)

CSD
Hi,

That was definitely sufficient for the CSD, and while it's not guaranteed it's a PAID issue, it's certainly very suggestive. Nosebagbear (talk) 20:19, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Meredith Scardino – undisclosed payment tag
Hi Bkissin, you recently approved a draft of an article about Meredith Scardino. User:Onel5969 has added a tag to the article indicating their concern that User talk:Bevelgearsinc, who created the draft in February 2021, may have created it in return for payment. I have started a discussion on the talk page and your feedback would be most appreciated. Regards, Atiru (talk) 06:50, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jack Thorne


Hello, Bkissin. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jack Thorne".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 23:07, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Paul Summerville
The title is a salted redirect, because an article was deleted, and the deletion was endorsed at Deletion Review. Because of that history, I have Rejected the draft. The author can request a review of the rejected draft at Deletion Review again.

I haven't made a recommendation as to whether DRV should unsalt the title. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:58, 24 August 2021 (UTC)

Briggon Snow Draft
This actor is a lead in a slew of fiction podcasts and regarded as a big name in the space. All of the citations, of which they are extensive and from reputable publications and websites, and also including the actor's IMDb and website with audio clips from each role, should be enough to prove the actor's body of work. There are many citations and I'm not sure I understand your question/comment of how to prove the actor's work in podcasts when the proof of a substantial public career in the space has been provided throughout the draft of the article. Guster705 (talk) 17:14, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

Hey! So, I worked with some wonderful helpers and they were able to guide me through dropping and adding citations. What was determined is that Briggon Snow should qualify for WP:NACTOR with these changes. He has had multiple regular roles on notable programs (noted and cited in the article - some of which include a major musical release in "In Strange Woods", and roles in an iHeart Media show and Netflix spin-off, not to mention his lead role in one of the biggest podcasts globally, The Bright Sessions), a recurring role on the Nickelodeon tv show Game Shakers, and has been reviewed and mentioned by Wil Williams which has been determined as a reliable source for the podcast industry from her bylines and interviews in Forbes etc. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Briggon_Snow Guster705 (talk) 15:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Manon Claeys
Hello! I saw that earlier today you declined this draft for needing more reliable sources. I've added a few more sources and resubmitted, and I'm hoping you can take another look. Aerin17 (t • c) 23:14, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Tarbiat School
Hi, Thanks for comments. I added a book in the Persian language as a reference. The book is titled" History of education in Persia from antiquity to contemporary times". That book is the main and most credited reference for this page. Trekanten (talk) 20:29, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Request on 20:04:19, 1 September 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Mendel baumgarten
hi, i feell that publication of at least a stub article of the locations of the school would be greatly benificial as literaly no information is availeble about it. i have gone through alot of the yidish newspapers of the time - availeble in a searcheble archive at the NLI linked in the article. but i have no experiance in creating a wikapedia artice. i would appreciate very much any help.Mendel baumgarten (talk) 20:04, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

Mendel baumgarten (talk) 20:04, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Arnergy
Hello, Bkissin. Hope you're doing great. I need a little help from you and I would be very thankful for that. I've trimmed the article and have removed all the clutter and promotional tone of article in a bid to make it neutral. I am happy if you can further make it neutral by making any kind of changes that make it acceptable. I have re-submitted the article (Draft:Arnergy) and will be waiting for your review. Thanks. Fernande Bonhomme (talk) 14:09, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Soupnism
This to me qualifies as a blatant hoax, but I'm not an expert at either AfC or CSD. Do you have an opinion? A google search on "soupnism" turns up zero, the only source for the draft doesn't use the term. This person just made this term up and decided to try creating an article. —valereee (talk) 17:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Heritage Yak
Hi Bkissin,

I just ran the Heritage Yak article through Quetext https://www.quetext.com/results/941ce5830c5e85983b98 and got about 8 sentences identified. 6 of these are followed by citations. I will shortly rephrase the sentences discussing: "both sexes have long shaggy hair with a dense woolly undercoat to insulate them from the cold. This may form a long "skirt" that can reach the ground." and provide an original citation. Can you give me any other tips to remove your rejection "because it included copyrighted content". Please help.

Warmly, --Skyyak (talk) 05:10, 11 September 2021 (UTC)Skyyak

Draft:Oliver's Market
Hello, You declined my submission of Draft:Oliver's Market with the reason being that it "reads like an advertisement". This article was written with wording very similar to the third party sources that were cited throughout the article. Could you please give some direction on what specifically needs to be fixed?

Thank you,

Joe Wiecks (talk) 15:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)

Forts and fortresses of the Portuguese Empire
Thank you very much for reviewing my template! Wareno (talk) 12:17, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

2021 in amusement parks
Hi Bkissin, I come from the new pages feed. I just wanted to let know that I draftified 2021 in amusement parks, which you had previously moved to the mainspace, because 90% of the content is unsourced. JBchrch  talk  22:25, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

turning my draft into an article and getting it accepted
you declined my draft Spongebob Squarepants the clam Prix and I would like to know if I get more sources from leapfrog or maybe a primary source via buying the game and verifying all the information. could I get my draft accepted and turned into an article?
 * Hi ! Neither of those (sources from leapfrog directly) and a sales receipt of your buying the game would be reliable sources. I would suggest taking a look at what our WikiProject on Video Games considers reliable sources and work from there. Bkissin (talk) 17:10, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

To publish the Draft: Oh My Messy Mind, as I have added the references now
I have submitted the draft again but i have added the references and sources links with a detailed description in the source code which shall not be visible in reading mode. Please switch to editing mode and read the source code for the references, If it gets published I can assure you that the article will improve. Thank you! HimuTheEditor (talk) 08:36, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

Serbian Heritage Academy Of Canada
Hi I improved an article you recently had some feedback with and was seeking some peer review - thank you! QuebecQue (talk) 12:16, 5 October 2021 (UTC)

Portuguese Oman
Once again, I appreciate that you reviewed my new page. Thanks, and keep up the good work. Wareno (talk) 01:01, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Gumbo'!
Hi, can you take another look at my draft, you rejected it based on notability issues yesterday. What notability guidelines does the article fail?  Just ' i ' yaya  16:24, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

Municipal Chamber of Araripina
Hi Bkissin, I declined this but it appears I was wrong to do so and looking at the editor's talk page maybe others have as well. Do you mind helping me understand the criteria for governmental agencies/bodies? Thanks! S0091 (talk) 21:04, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi ! It wasn't a question of wrong/right, I think it's just a difference of opinion. I think that the notability of a city/municipal council probably depends on the size of the city or municipality in question. Municipal Chamber of Belo Horizonte (which I accepted earlier) would be fine because Belo Horizonte is a large city and capital of the state in which it is located. Looking at the sizes of Araripina and Araquara respectively, it is a tough call. Arguably, there are US and European cities of similar sizes whose city councils have articles, but that's an WP:OSE copout. The English wiki articles for the cities are a little lacking, so someone could make the argument that the information in those articles could be merged into the articles about the cities.
 * TL;DR - There aren't any specific criteria for government bodies. What I would argue is that many legislative bodies would be notable, and government agencies would meet notability if there is enough reliably sourced coverage that is independent of the agency itself.
 * Hope that helps! Bkissin (talk) 21:25, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks Bkissin! Your logic makes sense to me.  I just feel bad for the editor as it seems like a ping pong ball on their talk page but they are a trooper. S0091 (talk) 21:52, 7 October 2021 (UTC)

Kenya Special Forces
Hello, I have made some editing on an article you recently reviewed. Could you please go through it and advise? I believe it is an important article that, even though not conclusive, will provide some useful information to start off researchers. Thank you and much appreciatedMikeytuku (talk) 10:31, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Rare Pepe Draft Article
Greetings - I see that you rejected the draft article for the subject matter of "Rare Pepe" citing the reason that an "article that already exists". This is inaccurate. There is a significant distinction between "Pepe the Frog" the cartoon character and a "Rare Pepe" which is a crypto art project which incorporates the likeness of the cartoon character. Two completely different subjects. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iynos (talk • contribs) 14:55, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Faberlic
Hello. I translated an article from the Russian Wikipedia. There is also this article in the Polish, Ukrainian and Turkish Wikipedia. In Russian it was more voluminous, so I translated it from there. Will there be time to take a look ? Thanks ! 37.230.234.79 (talk) 18:24, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The IP has spammed several editors with this request. Please ignore it. — Bilorv ( talk ) 15:25, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * LOL already did and most of the time already do! Thanks ! :) Bkissin (talk) 15:29, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Lorenz Bruno Puntel
Thanks for tagging me for comment on the draft! Please forgive the delay, as I was on vacation. Alas, it seems the draft has already been accepted. That said, taking a look at the available sources, I do believe he passes muster as a philosopher and an academic. - Pax  Verbum  04:17, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

About Revaz Lordkipanidze works and activities for anti-hidden-monopoly policy+
Sincerely Dear Bkissin, this article is not an advertisement for Revaz Lordkipanidze (he does not need it) - this is an article about his contribution for the fight against the most dangerous hidden monopolies in the form of terrorists or organizers of a covid pandemic. Antimonopolist (talk) 14:47, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Mercaz Olami article
Hi, I scrubbed through Draft:Mercaz Olami and left a bunch of comments. Maybe another editor can AFC review this? It seems like it still needs a lot of cleanup as many of the sources are connected to the organization in some manner. More Haaretz, Times of Israel, etc. Like, anything with the American Zionist Movement, Masorti Olami, KKL-JNF, would still be associated with the org, especially when there are leaders that share executive positions across both organizations. AngusW🐶🐶F ( bark  •  sniff ) 00:24, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Mafura Butter
This actually appears to be a cosmetic product :D —valereee (talk) 17:44, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

sources for Gregory v. Ashcroft
Hey, you declined my article for lack of sources. I am confused about what sources I should cite. All of the information comes from the 8th circuit case and the supreme court case. I can add sources for every line, but they would be the same two sources. Is that what I should do? Thanks.

Smerdyakov911 (talk) 20:08, 8 November 2021 (UTC)Smerdyakov911

hello i see that you have kind of not understanding the value of a great information of living persons but whatever i am will just ask to think calm. best — Preceding unsigned comment added by JuliaKurti (talk • contribs) 16:50, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

Drafts
Hi, Bkissin, you told me once to notify you to check my drafts, could you check this draft about a museum in Japan and this one is from Mongolia? --- Seb { 💬  Talk  + 📝  Edits  } 20:23, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Eddy Burback
Hi, I think you reviewed my draft of a page for Eddy Burback. As you may be able to tell this is my first time editing on Wikipedia, so I would really appreciate it if you could help me with defining a reliable source. Were there any ones in particular that were considered unreliable, or is my standard of sources generally too low? If so, what sort of issues are there with my sources and what would be more reliable? Are there particular types of source that will never be acceptable? Thanks

Twdavies (talk) 23:18, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Hey, for a first timer, the article looks good formatting-wise at least! Because you reached out to me so nicely and with questions I can actually answer, let me explain some of what I mean.


 * Youtube/Reddit/Twitter/Twitch - Most social media stuff is going to be considered unreliable (even if it came directly from the person's mouth, unfortunately). With user-generated content, anyone can say they are a big deal or make outlandish claims and give no information to back it up. Additionally, sites like that are often filled with people who are self-promotional and using those promotional sources in an article to try and paint a good PR picture about themselves on Wikipedia.
 * Apple Podcasts/Spotify, etc. - These sources just show that the podcast exists. They don't really tell us anything about the subject. If they do, it is often written by the host themselves, and that brings us back to the user-generated content situation above.
 * At its core, Wikipedia is a bunch of nerds, and so the site still looks at sources like you would use for an essay in school (newspapers, TV, reputable websites, etc.) For example, let's look at Gus' Wikipedia article (Just because Gus has one and not Eddy does not automatically mean that Eddy should have one, BTW. See WP:OSE): there are definitely some similar issues with the sources there, but Gus also has coverage from the Milwaukee Journal Sentinel and the Burnett County Sentinel. (Note that Gus' article doesn't mention his recent controversies, which is talked about on the talk page for the article. Basically, they can't find a reliable source that gives a shit about Youtube Drama.
 * In closing, I want to thank you for wanting to put a good article together. Making articles for YouTubers is super difficult, because the guidelines of who is notable enough are not well understood. For more information on reliable sources, you can look at Reliable sources or at one of my favorite lists on the site Reliable sources/Perennial sources, which looks at many well-known sources and whether or not Wikipedia would consider them reliable. Happy editing! Bkissin (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Bkissin thanks a lot for your feedback, I am learning a lot. I do have a few more questions if you have the time to answer: Thank you again! Twdavies (talk) 19:20, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Regarding the social media sources, I expected them to be considered fairly unreliable. I noticed this previously on Reliable sources/Perennial sources: "Context matters tremendously when determining the reliability of sources, and their appropriate use on Wikipedia. Sources which are generally unreliable may still be useful in some situations. For example, even extremely low-quality sources, such as social media, may sometimes be used as self-published sources for routine information about the subjects themselves" so I tried to stick to social media only for this kind of information, although there are some that I can see are suitable. Does this sort of thing make social media sources generally acceptable for this type of information or is it not that widely applied?
 * Yes, I could tell the difference between sources on Eddy and Gus as soon as I began researching, the justification for his page is certainly a lot stronger given the articles about him. You mentioned that the apple podcasts/spotify sources etc. show that the podcast exists, but nothing about the subject, but I am wondering, am I not citing sources with the purpose of showing that the podcast exists? I am stating a fact, then providing evidence for that fact. Is it a case of too many primary sources/original research? I have, since the first draft, added more secondary sources, but I must admit it may not be enough. I am gathering that it is about balance, if there were more reliable sources for central aspects of an article, then using primary social media, podcast, or award show sources would be more acceptable (e.g. Gus' has a number of social media sources but also plenty of articles), is this correct?
 * Slightly unrelated, but you said that others can't find reliable sources about the Gus drama. Now, I'm not about to go trying to add it, but I noticed that the Gus drama has been covered in news articles (a little too much for youtube drama imo). For example, the sun is an established newspaper here in the UK. Would an article such as this be considered an adequate source for adding it? If not, why not, it would be interesting to know for future reference.

Draft:Katie Britt
Hello,

I was wondering if you could help me out with this. I saw you declined the submission.

Did you see these two sources? They meet the requirement of multiple significant coverage, secondary published sources, reliable, and independent of the subject.

https://www.montgomeryadvertiser.com/story/news/2021/07/26/katie-boyd-britt-us-senate-race-wants-solve-alabamas-problems-what-alabama-wants-richard-shelby/5310697001/

https://www.southeastsun.com/home/article_f32c4fe0-9b11-11e8-9a30-fb97a2726323.html

Would you please reconsider? Kindly, --Eileithyiai (talk) 20:11, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Review of my article
Hello Bkissin, Thank for the comment you left on my article. I've draft you referred me to. I think mine is different and better arranged. I don't know what you think or if you'd want me to change anything Mastetchi (talk) 19:19, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Shanghai-style Salad
Thanks for the ping! Does the edit history seem odd to you? I'm not expert at AfC, but that's a lotta brand-new editors. —valereee (talk) 19:55, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
 * , let me take a look. Bkissin (talk) 20:10, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Noland's Ferry draft
You suggested that the new information could be addded to the exisitng Nolands Ferry I Archeological Site page. OK, I've done that. Can the name Nolands Ferry I Archeological Site be changed to indicte that there is more than just the Site? Or, is there a way that a redirect page named Nolands Ferry can redirect to Nolands Ferry I Archeological Site? The intent is to not have the present name be too narrow.Tlc356 (talk) 12:27, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Good question ! I think I can put together a redirect of Noland's Ferry for you. Let me give it a shot. It should be ready in the next 10-15 minutes. Bkissin (talk) 14:55, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
 * OK, it should work correctly now: Noland's Ferry should redirect to the article about the site. Bkissin (talk) 14:57, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Super. That appears to be a solution. Thanks. Tlc356 (talk) 17:09, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

Drafts
Hi, could you check some of my drafts? It is about a museum in Guatemala and another one in Colombia. I also made a draft of a videogame, I took into account the notability rules for videogames and added references to newspapers about videogames in English and other languages such as German, Russian or Spanish. Seb { 💬  Talk  + 📝  Edits  } 00:29, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

Human rights in Norway
Hi, could you please take a look at 's recent edits on the article Human rights in Norway, an AfC you reviewed and accepted in February 2020? - Thanks, 4ing (talk) 22:03, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

Hi I am happy to answer any questions. See also my comments in talk section on the article in question. I must warn that there seems to be a concerted effort to supress information about current and historical human rights abuses in Norway.

- Editor456991 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Editor456991 (talk • contribs) 01:54, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Do not warn our editors about your opinion. While you might be passionate about your issue, we do not cotton to threats, per WP:LEGAL. Chris Troutman  ( talk ) 02:20, 13 December 2021 (UTC)


 * I think you misunderstand me or are intentionally putting words in my mouth, contextualising context which was never there, there has never been a "threat" or "cottoning" of one (whatever that means?). I apologize however if there for some odd reason is a communication and/or language problem here somehow I am failing to see? I simply stated that there are a lot of people in Norway that wish this information to not be publicly disclosed for private reasons and/or misguided national pride. I am not warning anybody, I am warning "that" there are such efforts to supress information. I think that's useful information for an admin if considering applications for removal of information and censorship on an article about especially human rights abuses in a country. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Editor456991 (talk • contribs) 21:35, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
 * I apologize. I jumped the gun there. My mistake. Chris Troutman  ( talk ) 02:38, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

Wow, you try to take a weekend away from Wikipedia and look what happens! Thank you for helping out in the meantime! , can you show me diffs where someone has tried to suppress this information? I looked through the article history and I only see your most recent edits. An article/topic like this is bound to bring people with particular agendas or soapboxes that want to suppress or highlight particular abuses by a country. In some ways, that is not what Wikipedia is about. It is a collaborative project in which users work together to build good content. In terms of a content dispute, it seems like the edits are mostly positive (major emphasis on mostly), though heavy-handed. I think a larger question about the article (which all editors involved should discuss on talk page) is whether the focus should be on Norway's current protections for human rights, or its history. I'd caution against relying on one source, even if that source is a UN Human Rights review (reminder that many countries with terrible human rights records are on the UN Human Rights Council). , if issues persist, I would suggest reaching out to. Robert is an admin here and is active in dispute resolution. Hopefully a mutually beneficial solution can be found. Bkissin (talk) 15:02, 13 December 2021 (UTC)


 * I know the EU has reports and criticism about many of these issues in Norway also, I will try to find a version to their reports to cite as that would be a good source of impartial information also. The government really doesn't write, discuss, comment or talk about these issues. The Norwegian press has done a good job however in writing articles so I have lots of links to Norwegian press articles and information from Norwegian civil society organisations (maybe some of those are in English also). Well there were issues with a Norwegian translation of this page almost immediately with someone trying to delete a lot of information, however now still waiting for the Norwegian translation of the article to be accepted over some simple link issues and translations errors. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Editor456991 (talk • contribs) 16:29, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

Reviews
To my surprise, this is apparently legitimate (to the extent that anything crypto-based can be). It wasn't vandalism, is my point. Grossly inadequate, and rightly declined, but not the sort of malicious drivel that needs to be quickly deleted.

Just so you know. DS (talk) 19:35, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

drinks
Yes, totally willing to work on beverages also, as long as they're not commercial brands, and thanks for the pings! —valereee (talk) 17:38, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

Request on 01:41:43, 5 January 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Manwikiperson
You deleted my sandbox about the Glorpknoff. It wasn't based on any person at all, and I don't understand how it is vandalistic. I just made this out of my imagination. Thank you.Manwikiperson (talk) 01:41, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

Manwikiperson (talk) 01:41, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

Draft Louis Riel (historiography) article
Draft Louis Riel (historiagraphy) article is intended as child article to Louiss Riel per https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Louis_Riel#Stanley's_4_critical_perspectives_of_Riel_as_cited_in_Betts"The 'or not' does not support ballooning the section in this article; as I indicated above, it would support creation of a more detailed child article. Cblambert (talk) 23:58, 6 January 2022 (UTC)"

Èlizbar Nadaraya
Thanks for asking me to look. I found very high citation figures, and accepted; I personally think the function in his name would be enough. (it was a little tricky, because most of his publications are in obscure Russian journals under his full name, and almost uncited in GScholar.; the English ones were listed under EA Nadaraya )  DGG ( talk ) 20:37, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Reno (Washington, D.C.)
Hello, Bkissin. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Reno (Washington, D.C.), a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 17:02, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Want to know something
Hey user I saw that you removed this article which I reviewed and tagged this also happened 2days ago a article I reviewed was removed by a user from the page can you say why? २ तकर पेप्सी (talk) 23:39, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for the pings
Hey ! I wanted to thank you for the pings today. I bookmarked each of the drafts and will start going through them, one by one, and see if they should be articles, merged somewhere, or deleted. Thank you so much! Elijahandskip (talk) 17:34, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

The_Atlas_Underground_Flood reviews added
I added some review to the page The_Atlas_Underground_Flood can you look for kbat it again? Peeweejd (talk) 00:28, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello Bkissin, Please take a second look at my draft and let me know if I can now submit it for publication. Thank you.Sunnycash (talk) 06:56, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Declined Draft:Eghosa Anglican Grammar School. Please review it again.
Hello Bkissin, Please take a second look at my draft. I have made some changes to it. Please see if I can now submit it. Thank you. Sunnycash (talk) 07:03, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for your help.
Thanks, Bkissin for your comments on my article. I am new to Wikipedia.

I'd like to draft a few of my articles, and also remove the submissions from my talk page. Would appreciate your advise on how to go about doing this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kanishkawrites (talk • contribs) 21:30, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Kameelion
Hey,

I have had a Nobility notification on the page added by Velella. Please can you confirm what this is or how to remove it? Is the page getting removed? 217.70.248.154 (talk) 22:25, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for letting us know, we'll see about deleting the article so you don't have to look at that banner. Chris Troutman  ( talk ) 22:39, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Hey,

I think you got mistaken. I meant how to remove the first note added to the page, not the actual page. The actual page has been running fine and was accepted and has been on Wikipedia for several months. I’d like to page kept please. It was accepted originally and suffered some vandilsm, but it got sorted and has been fine since. 217.70.248.154 (talk) 23:06, 16 January 2022 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 217.70.248.154 (talk)

2017 Shepherd Rams football team
Hello! I wanted to reach out to see if you could help with something. I created a draft for 2017 Shepherd Rams football team, but forgot that I could create the page without the request. Is there a way to withdraw a AfC request? Thank you for your help! Spf121188 (talk) 19:12, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Hubert Douglas Delany page
Hello and thank you for helping with this page. I understand the edits made by you and others yet didnt realize my wording was so "personalized" or "promotional" to be cut so much. But I am learning and understand. I do have a question about the title listing, not sure if it was my mistake or an edit by an editor, but how can I make sure the page is seachable and states Mr Delanys middle name.. ie: "HUBERT DOUGLAS DELANY"? Right now it comes up as just "HUBERT DELANY" and I do not want him being confused with his namesake HUBERT THOMAS DELANY, a page already on wiki. Is this something I can fix? Thank you again. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iamevantheodore (talk • contribs) 19:00, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi ! No worries about the tone. A lot of people try to get paid using Wikipedia to promote people or products and they shouldn't, that's why we are very on guard about writing that sounds that way. You did nothing wrong, understanding neutral point of view takes time and practice.
 * I was thinking about the title as I was accepting it. Wikipedia is not responsible for SEO, nor do we really care. I do understand the concern that he'll be confused with his great-grandfather, but I think there is enough difference that the two will not be mistaken. You could WP:MOVE the page to a different name, but it can't be just Hubert Douglas Delany, because that article already exists (as his great-grandfather). Perhaps going with his full name Hubert Douglas Delany III or using a disambiguated title like Hubert Douglas Delany (Connecticut politician)
 * I hope this helps. Bkissin (talk) 19:16, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Hey Bkissin Thank you again. Think it can be changed and not confuse or cause issue as his g-grandfathers page is Hubert THOMAS Delany. Or am I mis-understanding? I'm reading through the WP:MOVE you suggested yet I'm thoroughly confused. Also, am I understanding that the page will still take time to be live/searchable? or do I have to still do something to get this complete. Again, sorry for all the question. I've only worked on 2 previous pages many years ago and very lost. Thank you again for the assistance. Iamevantheodore (talk) 19:31, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Whoops, I guess I got confused and thought they were both named Hubert Douglas Delany. Yes, renaming the new article to Hubert Douglas Delany is also an option, though if Delany doesn't use his middle name in any articles or anything, then it doesn't make sense to add the extra detail. As for live/searchable stuff, that's a Google thing, not a wikipedia thing. There's nothing we can do about that. Bkissin (talk) 20:21, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Page was declined *I've updated the reference page*
Hi Bkissin,

I've updated the required reference page, and everything is updated and fixed. Please review my resubmitted page. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by FedsmokerYMH (talk • contribs) 21:31, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

2001 Club
Thanks. I realized after I posted it on Articles for Creation that there was no reason I couldn't just create the article myself. Banks Irk (talk) 21:35, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you
Dear Bkissin, thank you for approving the page on Dumitru Enescu. The page has a since I am related with the subject (I am his son, my father died in 2012.) I have tried to make it as neutral as possible (basically it is a translation of the Romanian original article.) May I ask for further consideration of the COI template. If there is some process that I need to follow, could you please advice. Thank you very much for your time and help, Benescu (talk) 14:10, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

Burkhard Wilhelm Pfeiffer
Hello! I'd love to get some feedback on how I can make my article less POV and more suitable to inclusion. Any advice?Evansknight (talk) 17:22, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
 * It's basically good. I'll markup any segments that need to be reworded. I only saw a couple. It could be that you've already addressed them. Bkissin (talk) 17:34, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I'll get to work on that, with the corrections you've indicated. Evansknight (talk) 18:47, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Okay, I think I have fixed the issues you indicated. I hope I did okay! Evansknight (talk) 23:12, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
 * I took a look and it looks pretty good. I would avoid use of the term "fatherland", "beloved homeland", "devotion", etc. Otherwise it's good. Bkissin (talk) 23:22, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank so much! I kept in one instant of fatherland, but only because it was a translation of a direct quote from the individual. Thank you again! Evansknight (talk) 14:45, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Lubrecht State Experimental Forest
I added more sources and some other stuff, wanted to let you know. Best, Yungtrotsky   (talk)  20:54, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Question
Hello! I am reaching out to see if you can tag Draft:2005 Shepherd Rams football team for speedy deletion. I submitted it through AfC, and I forgot that I don't need to submit work there. Is this something you can help with? Thank you! Spf121188 (talk) 20:23, 10 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey ! You can go to that page and put or  and have that draft speedy deleted! If you run into trouble, let me know. Bkissin (talk) 20:31, 10 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Excellent, thank you! I appreciate your help! Spf121188 (talk) 20:36, 10 February 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Reno (Washington, D.C.)


Hello, Bkissin. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Reno".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 00:34, 11 February 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello, Bkissin,
 * It looks like this is a draft copy of Reno (Washington, D.C.). Twinkle post notifications on the talk page of the draft page creator which was you although a different editor actually wrote the article that is in main space. Liz Read! Talk! 00:50, 11 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it happens a lot! I wish there was a way around it. Mostly I just ignore it. Thanks . Bkissin (talk) 00:53, 11 February 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Joshua Elizondo
HI Bkissin,

I was wondering if you could tell me what I should do about making the page you denied more notable. I thought I provided enough public record and information from secondary reliable resources as there are over 20 references, and proof that the subject of the article is a recognized holder of public office/established entertainer. I do realize the conflict I have with the article, which is why I declared the conflict, but can you explain what criteria you denied on as I have seen many pages with much fewer references that are approved. Thank you in advance for your help in understanding, I appreciate it.

2600:1700:4000:6300:91DD:3025:3581:8975 (talk) 07:51, 12 February 2022 (UTC)