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Brief description of changes/modifications to the article ATP7A
Sections added: Structure, Transport mechanism

A table also added under the Function section.

All other sections are kept but have been greatly or slightly modified (e.g. major content changes, added missing citations, deleted unverifiable contents, added verifiable contents,etc)

Daamoy (talk) 20:23, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

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Hi Daamoy. I work with the Wiki Education Foundation, and help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment. If there's anything I can do to help with your assignment (or, for that matter, any other aspect of Wikipedia) please feel free to drop me a note. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:58, 8 January 2015 (UTC)

How to start a new paragraph in User Page?
I typed "Enter" to try to start a new paragraph but after I saved, two paragraphs came together. So how do I start a new paragraph in User Page?


 * You need to hit Enter twice and leave a blank line between paragraphs. (This applies to all pages on Wikipedia, not just user pages.)  Anon 126   (notify me of responses! / talk / contribs) 05:02, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Got it! Thank you Anon126.

Hello
Hi Daamoy.
 * Welcome to CHM437&CHM1263 Bioinorganic Chemistry 2015

Dbzam (talk) 21:18, 13 January 2015 (UTC)

Hi
Hi, I am testing talk page Cliff310 (talk) 12:41, 14 January 2015 (UTC)

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Re:Helping your peers Daamoy
Hello, I liked your article. I am working on ATOX1, which interacts with ATP7A. I thought I would leave a few comments: LacMJ (talk) 00:18, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
 * The introduction paragraph was a bit long, perhaps you can move some of the details and technical language down into sections.
 * In the gene segment, perhaps instead of, "Genetic disorder of this gene causes copper deficiency, which leads to progressive neurodegeneration and death in children.", you can say, "Genetic disorder of this gene causes Menkes Disease"
 * There is a lot of discussion on the different motifs present in the structure, but this might be too much information.
 * I am very surprised that Zn(II) has a higher affinity than Cu(I) even given cooperativity
 * Copper should be written as copper, Cu(I), or Cu(II) rather than just Cu
 * Also, just thought I would mention that the image on the article (I know this is from a BOT) is just one particular domain of ATP7A
 * Thanks for the mention of ATOX1!

Peer review CHM437
This protein is similar to my project ATP7B, many similarities between our proteins.

Postive part

 * Great explanation of the transport mechanism.
 * Nice referencing
 * Nice to mention other metals other than Cu
 * Good table in function part to illustrate function in different locations
 * Good to know ATP7A can cause diseases other than Menkes disease.

Things to improve

 * In structure part, better to mention other domains, since you mention DKTG motif in the mechanism part and it locates on the loop in the cytosolic part. This loop is not from any of the three domains you mentioned. I would recomend to add a Phosphorylation domain for this moytif.
 * Strcture part is a long part, use subheadings would be better to read

Other comments

 * I am trying to find more information about interactions to other protein like ATOX1 and GLRX, we can share some references if possible.
 * More pictures would be better to explain things like structures.However, it's hard to find nice pictures, I am still working on it.

Good luck with future study!Cliff310 (talk) 23:23, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

Image size
You can force images to display at a larger size by adding a pixel size to the image, so in this case adding e.g.  after   to the image. The downside of this is that it forces the image to be a certain size, so it can create problems for smaller screens.

The alternative is to make the image file itself larger. The original image file is only 1,359 × 590 pixels, 76 KB. If you went back to the original image and saved it at a higher resolution, you would automatically make the image larger. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 05:05, 28 May 2015 (UTC)