User talk:David dclork li

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 * Thank you very much! Face-smile.svg ~ ToBeFree (talk) 19:47, 14 April 2023 (UTC)

Rename from "Issac Newton school" to "David dclork li"
✅ -- Deepfriedokra (talk) 19:42, 14 April 2023 (UTC)

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Hi David dclork li! Thank you for your message. In answer to your question, yes, the two references you provided are valid, but I removed your edit for three reasons: a) it was virtually impossible to make it intelligible; b) because you also included content without a reference; and c) because you didn't respect the existing, logical chronology of the section you edited, simply slapping your new content in there at the beginning. If you consider the content worth including, you are, of course, welcome to do so. But please remember that this is an encyclopaedia and that it's necessary to respect certain, minimum standards when editing. Including the three points I've just mentioned. Regards, --Technopat (talk) 07:17, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

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 * I have edited the page of embryology article some of the reference given were very wrong and was edited by anonymous users.There is a claim that sushuruta mentioned about embryonic stages but the reference talks about ancient Buddhist text of Garbhāvakrāntisūtra,so i removed it and made it a seperate section about Buddhism and secondly most of the statements should be on the basis of reference some of the statements have no links with the reference.Hers my reference of my contribution.
 * "Aristotle, Buddhist scripture and embryology in ancient Mexico: building inclusion by re-thinking what counts as the history of developmental biology - PMC" https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7875486/. David dclork li (talk) 08:51, 24 April 2023 (UTC)

Diabetes history
"Principles of Diabetes Mellitus - Google Books" https://books.google.co.in/books?id=i0qojvF1SpUC&pg=PA3&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false. Is this link genuine or self published work. David dclork li (talk) 19:00, 25 April 2023 (UTC)


 * It looks like a genuine link to me, from a book written by the physician on this web page. I have no connection to it.  I copied this message to your talk page.
 * Ira Leviton (talk) 00:03, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Ira Leviton (talk) 00:03, 26 April 2023 (UTC)

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 * Hlo i am extremely sorry for my edits,what i did is that i found a link of sushuruta samahita in internet Archive which is translated in English.￼I thought that the page has relevant source but it doesn't.I apologies for my terrible mistake David dclork li (talk) 13:26, 27 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ancient nuclear warfare (April 27)
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 * ok David dclork li (talk) 18:21, 27 April 2023 (UTC)

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