User talk:Vanchu22

Returning the Favor
Hi Vanessa! I saw your introduction on my talk page and thought I'd just briefly return the favor: my name is Trey, I'm a freshman at Duncan College, and I am super excited to be in PJHC with you. Looking forward to a great semester :) See you around, and happy editing! UnoDosTrey (talk) 22:04, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Vanchu22, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hi! Your contributions really improved the article and you added very important topics. I like the organization and I think it provides a pretty comprehensive account of educational inequalities with a large number of respectable sources. Since there are so many relevant studies and statistics, I think adding graphics/charts/illustrations would improve the article and the reading experience. I also think the lead should be expanded since the article is so large and there is a lot of new information. I think these 2 revisions would improve the article, but it’s already at a great spot, so good job! S.shedore (talk) 19:25, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Hello! Very nice job on your article- I really appreciated how well researched and neutral the sections you added were. In the doc I sent you I included some image suggestions for illustrating the article more and I think the article as a whole would benefit for a bit of a longer lead. Within the sections you added there were just a couple typos and possibly moving the Inequalities in different educational stages section to either be within Educational inequalities or being located just above it. Overall, very nice work, your additions are very helpful! KaelaWilbur (talk) 03:07, 29 October 2020 (UTC)