Wikipedia:Peer review/My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic/archive5

My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic


I've listed this article for peer review because I am hoping to get this article to Fa-status and any comments on how I could improve it to meet the FA criteria would be welcome.

Thanks, Pamzeis (talk) 06:16, 12 May 2021 (UTC)

Some quick general comments...
 * Fair-use rationales need improvement
 * ✅ (I think)


 * There is a more extensive explanation of the premise in the lead than in the actual Premise section - suggest reworking


 * Faust's departure doesn't seem to fit well in the current organizational structure, and it would be better to reduce the number of one-paragraph sections overall
 * Removed sub-section headings


 * The "Other" section seems like a random compilation of trivia - any way to better integrate this material, if it warrants inclusion?
 * Removed


 * Citation formatting needs editing for consistency - for example it's mostly using 'cite'-family templates, but there are also citation which results in a different output


 * Make sure that you can justify the quality of all sources used - I saw a couple that have been flagged as unreliable at WP:RSP. Nikkimaria (talk) 11:31, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
 * fn 18: YouTube video published by an owner of a distributor of the series fn 29: YouTube video published by a verified account of a reliable magazine fn 74, 75, 76, 78, 79, 83, 85, 95: used for "basic information", fine per WP:RSPAMAZON. If episode/additional features are not basic information, I'd be happy to remove/replace the Amazon sources.