Wikipedia:Peer review/Sindhis/archive1

Sindhis


I've listed this article for peer review because it has been a very long time since the article was peer reviewed or possibly might've never been under a peer-review before, Between November 2022 and April 2023 the article went under a general overhaul via which alot of necessary information was added, after all that I believe an external instance on this topic is now crucial and I request a peer-review

Thanks,  ⭐️ Starkex ⭐️  📧  ✍️ 10:02, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:


 * "Wink 2002, p. 203." What source is this? There's no full citation to an author named Wink.
 * "McIntosh 2008, p. 387:" Same as above
 * "Dyson 2018, p. 29" Same as above
 * "Wright 2009," Same as above.
 * Quotes are usually not necessary in the inline citations, as the reader can look up the source themselves to verify the information. Examples include refs 157, 158, 159
 * Per MOS:ALLCAPS, titles of works and publishers should not be in all caps in the references sections. Examples include refs 149, 151, 110.
 * Why is 137 a reliable source?
 * Most paragraphs in the article should have an inline citation at the end of the last sentence. Exceptions include the lede.
 * The Festivals section suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION and should be divided.
 * There are no citations in the Notable people section, which need to be included to verify that these people are part of the Sindhis group
 * Per WP:RS/P, Joshua Project is considered an unreliable source and should be removed from the article.
 * Notes need a citation at the end of each one.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 19:39, 27 May 2023 (UTC)