Talk:Cleveland Indigenous activism

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2020 and 11 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Miaonl. Peer reviewers: Katey.P, Kardon99, Stringam, Jcichoke.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:09, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer review
This is a solidly structured new article, that balances one highly covered controversy (the baseball mascot) within a longer historical context. You may find this to be a useful source for expansion; it discusses population,, and the Lake Erie Native American Council. Above all, whenever you find a particular organization or event to be of interest, research it relentlessly. For example, see what you can find about the 1970 BIA protests.

Here are some specific suggestions for improvements: Best of luck to you.--Carwil (talk) 04:25, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
 * First sentence: There's no need for self-defining sentences like this one in the lead, see WP:LEAD for advice.
 * Re "Ohio had an almost nonexistent Indigenous population": narrow and make this specific to Cleveland and Cuyahoga County.
 * Make the mascot section as fully informed by the more detailed work at Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy following WP:SUMMARY style
 * You may find some sources on Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy that describe broader issues relevant to this article.