Talk:Death Jr. II: Root of Evil

Made the Page
Hi there! I noticed Death, Jr. 2 needed a page, so I dug up about all I could find. Not much has been released about it so far, so this was all that I could find. --Noah A. 03:32, 30 July 2006 (UTC)

Wiki's standards?
Page doesn't seem to be up to the Wikipedia's standards at the moment. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 217.194.107.136 (talk) 15:55, 8 February 2007 (UTC).

No
Whoever is reverting the first paragraph back to the rambling, italicized intro, stop. You can't say that the game is "better" than the previous one, that's not neutral. Can't say "it's also easier," without a source because it just sounds like an opinion of your experience with the game.

Also, your sentence structure is off and you have a super long sentence going on there. 