Talk:KNDy neuron

Thank you for your contribution
Hello, I am a member of WikiProject Medicine and a medical editor here on Wikipedia. Thank you for contributing to Wikipedia! We greatly appreciate new editors working together with the community to improve Wikipedia. I made a few small edits and suggestions.
 * One small suggestion is to use more lay terminology in the text. I know that this is difficult as it is a technical field, but if you can try to design your sentences so that people without a background in science/medicine can understand them, this would be very helpful for the article. E.g.: Use of the words "best exemplified" and "exhibited to control the pulsatile nature" could be re-worded to a simplified version.


 * Please consult Wikipedia's medical manual of style (WP:MEDMOS) when deciding on headings and subheadings to add to the article. These are standardized across medical articles.


 * Finally, please review WP:MEDMOS for how to structure and find references for the lead of the article. This should be written in a different style from the main body of the article.

Thank you again for your contribution to Wikipedia. We hope that you continue editing and contributing to the encyclopedia.

JenOttawa (talk) 17:28, 3 October 2018 (UTC)