Talk:Logicworks

Request edit
Information to be added or removed: In first sentence of article, remove "managed hosting" and replace with "managed services" Explanation of issue: Company has pivoted from traditional datacenter hosting to cloud-based managed services, as is typical for managed service providers in the industry. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to first sentence (additions in bold): "Logicworks is a cloud computing and managed hosting company headquartered in New York City with offices in Denver, Boston, Philadelphia, Seattle, Washington D.C. and London." Explanation of issue: Additional office locations in Denver, Boston, Philadelphia. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to end of "History" section (additions in bold): In 2017, Logicworks announced support for Microsoft Azure." In the first sentence of "Services", add to this sentence: "Logicworks provides managed services for the Amazon Web Services and Microsoft Azure cloud infrastructures. Add to end of "Services" section: "Logicworks is a Microsoft Gold Partner in Cloud Platform (Microsoft Azure) and an Audited Managed Service Partner." Can be included in both "History" and "Services" sections. Explanation of issue: In addition to Amazon Web Services, Logicworks offers professional and managed services for Microsoft Azure. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to "Compliance" section's first sentence (additions in bold): Logicworks specializes in HIPAA, HITRUST, SOC1, SOC2, and PCI compliance hosting and infrastructure design on AWS, Azure, and Private Cloud environments. Explanation of issue: In addition to HIPAA and PCI, Logicworks is also HITRUST CSF certified and SOC1 and SOC2 certified. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In addition to "managed services for the Amazon Web Services cloud infrastructure", Logicworks began offering Professional Services in 2017. These services include Cloud Architecture Design, Cloud Migration, Cloud Cost Optimization, Well-Architected Review, Compliance Assessment, and DevOps consulting services. In "Services" section, insert new first sentence before rest of paragraph: "Logicworks provides several cloud services, including Cloud Architecture Design, Cloud Migration, Cloud Cost Optimization, Well-Architected Review, Compliance Assessment, DevOps consulting services, and managed services." Explanation of issue: Logicworks offers Professional Services in addition to managed services. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2016 Logicworks was named among the "Best Places to Work in New York City" by Crain's New York Business." Explanation of issue: New award References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2017, Logicworks was named a Leader in the Gartner Magic Quadrant for Public Cloud Infrastructure Managed Service Providers, Worldwide." Explanation of issue: New award References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2018, Logicworks was named a Microsoft Gold Partner: Cloud Platform and Azure Expert MSP Partner." Explanation of issue: New award References supporting change:

Conflicts of Interest: Above requests made by an employee of Logicworks.

LindsaySyh (talk) 15:40, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Reply 22-OCT-2018
Your edit request could not be reviewed because the provided references are not formatted correctly. The citation style predominantly used by the Logicworks article is Citation Style 1 (CS1). The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1 (See WP:CITEVAR). This would not normally be a problem in a request of a smaller size, whereas larger requests would be expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests for this article should be submitted in the future:

Plain Reference Style Formatting: The sun is pretty big. The moon is not so big. The sun is also quite hot.

Displays as: The sun is pretty big.[1] The moon is not so big.[2] The sun is also quite hot.[3]

References

1. 2.  3.

In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Logicworks article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text would resemble the following:

Citation Style 1 Formatting: The sun is pretty big, but the moon is not so big. The sun is also quite hot. Displays as: The sun is pretty big,[1] but the moon is not so big.[2] The sun is also quite hot.[3]

References

^ Sjöblad, Tristan. . Academic Press, 2018, p. 1. ^ Duvalier, Gabrielle. , Scientific American, 51(78):46. ^ Uemura, Shū. . Academic Press, 2018, p. 2. 

In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As I indicated above, since Wikipedia is a volunteer project, larger edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards,  Spintendo   20:28, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Edit Request (with Revisions)
Information to be added or removed: In first sentence of article, remove "managed hosting" and replace with "managed services" Explanation of issue: Company has pivoted from traditional datacenter hosting to cloud-based managed services, as is typical for managed service providers in the industry. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to first sentence (additions in bold): "Logicworks is a cloud computing and managed hosting company headquartered in New York City with offices in Denver, Boston, Philadelphia, Seattle, Washington D.C. and London." Explanation of issue: Additional office locations in Denver, Boston, Philadelphia. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to end of "History" section (additions in bold): In 2017, Logicworks announced support for Microsoft Azure." In the first sentence of "Services", add to this sentence: "Logicworks provides managed services for the Amazon Web Services and Microsoft Azure cloud infrastructures. Add to end of "Services" section: "Logicworks is a Microsoft Gold Partner in Cloud Platform (Microsoft Azure) and an Audited Managed Service Partner." Can be included in both "History" and "Services" sections. Explanation of issue: In addition to Amazon Web Services, Logicworks offers professional and managed services for Microsoft Azure. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to "Compliance" section's first sentence (additions in bold): Logicworks specializes in HIPAA, HITRUST, SOC1, SOC2, and PCI compliance hosting and infrastructure design on AWS, Azure, and Private Cloud environments. Explanation of issue: In addition to HIPAA and PCI, Logicworks is also HITRUST CSF certified and SOC1 and SOC2 certified. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In addition to "managed services for the Amazon Web Services cloud infrastructure", Logicworks began offering Professional Services in 2017. These services include Cloud Architecture Design, Cloud Migration, Cloud Cost Optimization, Well-Architected Review, Compliance Assessment, and DevOps consulting services. In "Services" section, insert new first sentence before rest of paragraph: "Logicworks provides several cloud services, including Cloud Architecture Design, Cloud Migration, Cloud Cost Optimization, Well-Architected Review, Compliance Assessment, DevOps consulting services, and Managed Services for AWS and Azure." Explanation of issue: Logicworks offers Professional Services in addition to managed services. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2016 Logicworks was named among the "Best Places to Work in New York City" by Crain's New York Business." Explanation of issue: New award References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2017, 2018, and 2019, Logicworks was included in the Gartner Magic Quadrant for Public Cloud Infrastructure Managed Service Providers, Worldwide." Explanation of issue: New award References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2018, Logicworks was named a Microsoft Gold Partner: Cloud Platform and Azure Expert MSP Partner." Explanation of issue: New award

Conflicts of Interest: Above requests made by an employee of Logicworks.

LindsaySyh (talk) 20:52, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

Request edit
Information to be added or removed: In first sentence of article, remove "managed hosting" and replace with "managed services" Explanation of issue: Company has pivoted from traditional datacenter hosting to cloud-based managed services, as is typical for managed service providers in the industry. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to first sentence (additions in bold): "Logicworks is a cloud computing and managed hosting company headquartered in New York City with offices in Denver, Boston, Philadelphia, Seattle, Washington D.C. and London." Explanation of issue: Additional office locations in Denver, Boston, Philadelphia. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to end of "History" section (additions in bold): In 2017, Logicworks announced support for Microsoft Azure." In the first sentence of "Services", add to this sentence: "Logicworks provides managed services for the Amazon Web Services and Microsoft Azure cloud infrastructures. Add to end of "Services" section: "Logicworks is a Microsoft Gold Partner in Cloud Platform (Microsoft Azure) and an Audited Managed Service Partner." Can be included in both "History" and "Services" sections. Explanation of issue: In addition to Amazon Web Services, Logicworks offers professional and managed services for Microsoft Azure. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: Add to "Compliance" section's first sentence (additions in bold): Logicworks specializes in HIPAA, HITRUST, SOC1, SOC2, and PCI compliance hosting and infrastructure design on AWS, Azure, and Private Cloud environments. Explanation of issue: In addition to HIPAA and PCI, Logicworks is also HITRUST CSF certified and SOC1 and SOC2 certified. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In addition to "managed services for the Amazon Web Services cloud infrastructure", Logicworks began offering Professional Services in 2017. These services include Cloud Architecture Design, Cloud Migration, Cloud Cost Optimization, Well-Architected Review, Compliance Assessment, and DevOps consulting services. In "Services" section, insert new first sentence before rest of paragraph: "Logicworks provides several cloud services, including Cloud Architecture Design, Cloud Migration, Cloud Cost Optimization, Well-Architected Review, Compliance Assessment, DevOps consulting services, and Managed Services for AWS and Azure." Explanation of issue: Logicworks offers Professional Services in addition to managed services. References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2016 Logicworks was named among the "Best Places to Work in New York City" by Crain's New York Business." Explanation of issue: New award References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2017, 2018, and 2019, Logicworks was included in the Gartner Magic Quadrant for Public Cloud Infrastructure Managed Service Providers, Worldwide." Explanation of issue: New award References supporting change:

Information to be added or removed: In "Awards", add additional bullet: "In 2018, Logicworks was named a Microsoft Gold Partner: Cloud Platform and Azure Expert MSP Partner." Explanation of issue: New award

Conflicts of Interest: Above requests made by an employee of Logicworks.

LindsaySyh (talk) 15:20, 25 March 2019 (UTC)