Talk:Parasite Eve II

Clean-up
Sept 1, 2006 - This article needs some serious spelling/grammar checking....74.105.146.115 00:34, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

from VfD:

Tis an excerpt from Parasite Eve. Redirect, no need to merge. --Valmi[[User_talk:Valmi| &#10002;]] 03:11, 13 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Yes, redirect. Next time, you could just do this yourself. --Twinxor 03:16, 13 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Aow, now that you mention it... I guess it's too late now, sorry. ;-) --Valmi[[User_talk:Valmi| &#10002;]] 05:14, 18 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Redirect. I can see why Valmi listed, though, because there is, effectively, a blanking of the page to make it an empty redirect.  I.e. no merge is involved, so there's sort of a delete.  This "article" looks like something that escaped from GameSpot, though.  Geogre 05:14, 13 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * The point is that that action would be easily reversed by anyone at any time, so it doesn't require consensus. Actual deletion is more permanent, so consensus is required. &#8212;Rory &#9786; 15:21, Oct 13, 2004 (UTC)

end moved discussion


 * I did some cleanup and I made a lot of links. I am not sure I did a complete job though so could someone finish? I did enough to remove clean-up tag, though. -84.169.248.87 16:46, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

Ow
I just read through this and it looks like a twelve year-old wrote it. I'm not a great user of grammar either, but can someone PLEASE fix this? I read it and had almost no idea what was being said. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.154.212.92 (talk • contribs) 22:00, September 9, 2006


 * The spelling is generally ok but the grammar is horrible (making the article almost unintelligible). If no-one minds, I'll have a go at a re-write...? 136.8.152.13 13:50, 12 September 2006 (UTC)



I went ahead and rewrote the first 7 paragraphs - unfortunately I am writing from memory about a game I played many years ago, and with only the existing text to go on I can't be sure about the editing from this point on! Anyone else like to take on the rest? EyeSerene 18:38, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Addendum to the above: I changed my mind and did the rest as well, taking the story from the somewhat garbled text and memory. If anything needs changing where I've got the details wrong, please go ahead! EyeSerene 10:39, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Finally finished the edit, added the Reaction section & a few links, although the article could still do with some pictures (I couldn't find any that conform to Licensing policy).EyeSerene 17:57, 13 September 2006 (UTC)

Army?
I saw a sentance towards the end that says 'But the Army shows up with lots of guns, helicopters' etc. Asside from the obvious, if I am to remember correctly it was the Marines that show up, not the Army. I'll go give this an edit.

Apologies
Maybe i`m overreacting or taking it personal but i want to say i`m sorry for the bad grammar in the article, i`m mexican, english is not my natural lenguaje, i do what i can Zidane tribal 22:05, 14 January 2007 (UTC)

Plot Summary Rewrite
Have taken on the task of rewriting the plot summary to comply with MoS.  Jelli ♥ Babi  S'up 10:21, 23 September 2007 (UTC)

Plot summary rewritten! :D  Jelli ♥ Babi  S'up 12:07, 23 September 2007 (UTC)

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