Talk:Sidney Mashbir

Sidney Forrester Mashbir Papers, 1942-1960
A significant amount of previously donated physical information and records relating to Sidney Mashbir is stored at the Charles E. Young Research Library in Los Angeles, CA

Anyone wishing to make a substantial contribution to this Wikipedia article may be able to seek these resources. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aeonx (talk • contribs) 11:39, 20 October 2010 (UTC)

Suggestions for improvement
As per the request on my talk page I have reviewed this article. In doing so, I have made a few edits to comply with the Manual of Style. Largely the article looks quite good and I have rated this article as a Start class article. Nevertheless, I feel that with a little more work it might be able to be assessed as B class. I have the following suggestions:
 * expand the lead to summarise the entire article;
 * provide some details about the subject's later life and when and where they died in the main prose section;
 * I'm not really knowledgable on the subject so can't really comment on the content. As such I suggest requesting a formal peer review as this might attract the help of a few other editors with more specific knowledge. This can be done by going to WP:MHPR and following the steps listed there. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 07:17, 21 October 2010 (UTC)

Timeline?
According to the article, "following the attack on Pearl Harbor, Mashbir was re-enrolled in January 1940". Considering that the attack on Pearl happened at the end of 1941, this would be rather impressive. I assume that Mashbir was not actually a time-traveller, so perhaps a bit of clean-up is warranted? 82.209.158.3 (talk) 12:52, 12 April 2022 (UTC)