Talk:Superman: Ultimate Flight

Copyedit
This is just to say that I've tried to fill a request for a copyedit filed on the WP:GOCE/REQ page. Also, a couple of observations/suggestions:


 * The "Ride layout" section is a bit confusing -- probably because it's not easy to describe the experience of a roller coaster in words. The two pictures in that section help considerably, but someone more familiar with the ride may be able to clarify the words a bit more. That section is rather heavy with roller coaster jargon.
 * In the "Characterstics" section, it says that one version of the ride takes 3 minutes instead of 2 -- but it's only a few feet longer. How is that possible?
 * Should this article be in American or British English? I mean, the design company is European, but the rides themselves are in the United States.

Best of luck on an eventual GAN. Bobnorwal (talk) 01:53, 19 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. I've clarified the ride's duration with different sources so now it is more realistic. Also, the article should feature American spelling so I fixed one instance (if there are more that I've missed, please feel free to make those corrections). Finally, I will endeavour to make the ride layout section less confusing for those not familiar with the jargon. Themeparkgc   Talk  22:47, 20 March 2013 (UTC)

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