Talk:William Shellabear

Question about tone
The article was tagged for its "tone". It would be helpful to know what changes in tone are desired. Pete unseth (talk) 17:11, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
 * The tone needs neutral and less promotional sounding.  Words like "pioneer" and "well known" should be avoided unless they are backed up by citations to reliable sources.  Who considers this person to be a pioneer?  If the answer is you or a single writer who has written about this person, it probably shouldn't be in the article.  The purpose of the article is to inform, not to promote.--RadioFan (talk) 17:34, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Malaysia Conference of the Methodist Episcopal Church, 15th to 20th February, 1912
http://images.library.yale.edu/divinitycontent/dayrep/Methodist%20Episcopal%20Church.%20Malaysia%20Conference%20%201912%20v20.pdf