User talk:Sulfurboy/Archive 1

Brian Wright
, I will be adding updates as well as references for the Brian Wright page today.

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Stephen Christian
Please explain the concerns you tagged Stephen Christian with, on the talk page. --Walter Görlitz (talk) 07:00, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. Sulfurboy (talk) 23:26, 23 May 2013 (UTC)

I have unreviewed a page you curated
Thanks for reviewing Indonesian Movie Awards 2013, Sulfurboy.

Unfortunately Tentinator has just gone over this page again and unreviewed it. Their note is:

"'A page created before the ban does not qualify.'"

To reply, leave a comment on Tentinator's talk page.

I have unreviewed a page you curated
Thanks for reviewing Concussion mitigation technologies, Sulfurboy.

Unfortunately Tentinator has just gone over this page again and unreviewed it. Their note is:

"A page created before the ban does not qualify for speedy deletion."

To reply, leave a comment on Tentinator's talk page.

Thank you
For the 'star, through I am not sure which page you mean :) --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 04:55, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

Mary Bruce Wallace
Mary Bruce Wallace I have made some corrections and added references, taken out the subjectiveness and the self promotion. If you care to revise it. --Fady Lahoud (talk) 16:36, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

Scott Etzler Page
Hi Sulfurboy!

Thanks for your note regarding the notability of the page for Scott Etzler You can review my response on the talk page. Please note that CEOs of global publicly traded companies do commonly have pages and will be included as a part of List of chief executive officers which has hundreds. This page will continue to be built out over time. Cheers! KatiePack1 (talk) 22:18, 26 May 2013 (UTC) (talk)

Speedy deletion declined: Hermann Settegast
Hello Sulfurboy. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Hermann Settegast, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Article claims coverage in reliable sources. Thank you. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 23:04, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

Mary Bruce Wallace 2
Mary Bruce Wallace

I have made a second revision, please read my talk page. --Fady Lahoud (talk) 04:15, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Thank you!
Thank you very much! Greetings, Chicagouser (talk) 12:10, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Thank you
Thanks for the acknowledgement! Ringbang (talk) 02:05, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

I have unreviewed a page you curated
Thanks for reviewing When Strangers meet, Sulfurboy.

Unfortunately Loriendrew has just gone over this page again and unreviewed it. Their note is:

"User blanked page and started over, removing prior reviewing"

To reply, leave a comment on Loriendrew's talk page. —Preceding undated comment added 18:50, 4 October 2013 (UTC)

Value Pack 1
Hi! I updated the sources for Value Pack 1. Could you please re-review that article. Also, I was just wondering why the sources that I initially provided in the article were deemed unreliable. Thank you. Malcolmrevere (talk) 19:22, 4 October 2013 (UTC)

Sandha language page
What are the thing with that I can remove the tag orphan from page Sandha language. I don't have long editing experience on enwiki, so please guide me in this way. &#9734;&#9733;  Sanjeev Kumar  ( talk ) 19:44, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
 * I think now (after my last edits) Sandha language page doesn't fulfill conditions of WP:O. So now what is remaning. &#9734;&#9733;  Sanjeev Kumar  ( talk ) 20:27, 4 October 2013 (UTC)

Talkback
 Malcolm    message me!    00:24, 5 October 2013 (UTC)

Verification request
Thank you for reviewing my article, however I need your help coz it's really confusing what all do you need me to omit out. Whatever has been put up there are 100% valid and have enough references from genuine Indian houses of print media. I am professionally associated with the person as well. This is the page : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K_Hari_Kumar

Your help will be appreciated. Lakshmikm (talk) 11:26, 5 October 2013 (UTC)

Added inline notes where sources or needed or the statement needs to be deleted. Also removing sections tag in favor of leaving reorganization tag. Let me know when you want me to look at it again.Sulfurboy (talk) 03:59, 6 October 2013 (UTC)

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Marie Diener-West Page
Thank you so much for reviewing this page for me! I've attempted to clean up the issues that you pointed out in the page, I'm still getting used to some of the specific conventions on Wikipedia, so I appreciate your feedback! Please let me know if I have eliminated all of the issues that you were concerned about, so I can also remove the the clean up message at the top of the page. Very best, Ethan (HPR) (talk) 18:17, 8 October 2013 (UTC)

Very busy over the next few days. I'll try my best to review this ASAP. Thanks for taking the time to properly improve your article.Sulfurboy (talk) 20:09, 8 October 2013 (UTC)

Chester Santos
hey, thanks for reviewing my work. i'm glad you liked it! Yogiile (talk) 21:34, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Hi
Thanks for reviewing Qazi Salahuddin :)   Crown Prince    Talk  03:01, 17 October 2013 (UTC)

Bahramshah
Hi thanks for reviewing this article. I'd be grateful if you could indicate any sections where yu feel the tone is inappropriate so I can think about revising. I'm also not clear why you feel it may not be neutral (that was a surprise). I didn't put sections in as it is so short. There are very few sources for this ruler so pretty unlikely there will be more factual content to add to this. Many thanks Mccapra (talk) 07:30, 18 October 2013 (UTC)

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Gordon Crown article
Do you even know anything about chess? "Highly promising" is not a "claim", it is a description, and it is a description well supported by the text of the article. Don't drop this "vandalism" crap on me. MaxBrowne (talk) 04:24, 21 October 2013 (UTC)

Niebergall
Hi Sulfurboy, you tagged my new surname article Niebergall as an orphan, because no other articles link to it. That's exactly the way it should be. If you take a look at the article, you may recognice the note at the end:

''This page or section lists people with the surname Niebergall. If an internal link intending to refer to a specific person led you to this page, you may wish to change that link by adding the person's given name(s) to the link.''

So it would be helpful if your not tagging surname articles as orphans any more. Thank you!

Best regards, --NiTen (talk) 07:13, 22 October 2013 (UTC)


 * Sorry about that, NiTen. I know better. Must have brainfarted. Sorry for the inconvenience. Sulfurboy (talk) 07:16, 22 October 2013 (UTC)


 * You're welcome! :) Best regards, --NiTen (talk) 07:34, 22 October 2013 (UTC)

Prolepsis (rhetoric)
Hi. I've declined your speedy request as there doesn't seem to be an article of which this is a duplicate. Your request had a redlink in it (why, I don't know 'cos there's a disam at Prolepsis), but there's no duplicate I can see. Peridon (talk) 20:34, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Agree to disagree I suppose. Did I do something wrong in the delete tag that caused the redtag issue, Peridon? Thanks for taking the time to review it.Sulfurboy (talk) 01:53, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Got it. You put in a URL. The template expects an article name as it's for internal things only. It'll treat whatever you put after article= as being in Peridon (talk) 10:21, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Blood on the Face
Can you HELP?, you edit it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by IvanRSsenite (talk • contribs) 04:15, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Speedy deletion contested: Northbridge International School Cambodia
Hello Sulfurboy. I am just letting you know that I contested the speedy deletion of Northbridge International School Cambodia, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: '''Not unambiguously promotonal. Secondary schools are generally notable.''' Thank you. Eastmain (talk • contribs) 19:53, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
 * If an article seems like an advertisement, you have the option of adding a advert tag. This will alert other editors to the promotional tone in the article without asking for the article to be deleted. See Template:Advert for how to use the tag. Eastmain (talk • contribs) 23:38, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Sorry, Eastmain. I apparently had a much looser interpretation of G11 than is the actual case. I've just finished reading up on it some more, so hopefully this will not be an issue in the future. Thanks, Sulfurboy (talk) 00:25, 24 October 2013 (UTC)

Speedy deletion contested: London Greek Film Festival
Hello Sulfurboy. I am just letting you know that I contested the speedy deletion of London Greek Film Festival, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Not unambiguously promotional. Thank you. Eastmain (talk • contribs) 00:11, 24 October 2013 (UTC)

I have unreviewed a page you curated
Hi, I'm APerson. I wanted to let you know that I saw the page you reviewed, Movim, and have un-reviewed it again. If you have any questions, please ask them on my talk page. Thank you. APerson (talk!) 02:38, 24 October 2013 (UTC)

Tagging of article Norunn Tveiten Benestad
There is no basis for claiming that the article does not follow Wikipedia's policies. The Norwegian sources are to be trusted, even if the original language is Norwegian. I would therefore argue that the head tagging of this article is to be ceased immediately. The article, however, may retain the stub tag under, that was changed by me. User:Carsten R D
 * The tag involved your use of social media links, not norwegian links. I just assumed this was obvious, sorry.

Esperanza Cruz Hidalgo
You tagged my article Esperanza Cruz Hidalgo for deletion due to lack of citations.

You checked my page while I was still working on it. I have added citations. Thanks.

George Joannides
Additions to the page have been made, hopefully up to par. Joannides is an interesting historical figure; it's surprising there wasn't already a page created for him. Per your advise, I went to remove "the text that looks like this: " but couldn't locate it.

Hi
Thanks for the comment, I'm working on the John G. Kelton page.

device page changes
Hi Sulfurboy, I took some time to expand to a mediumish size, and was wondering if you'd like to patrol it again (since it's basically a new page). thx :) Note that I often find press releases useful when there aren't better sources with key facts (like the canada announcement, etc.), but I understand a lot of people don't think that way, so wouldn't be offended if you preferred them trimmed. Earflaps (talk) 19:56, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Road Recovery
Hello. You said that my page, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Road_Recovery read too much like an advertisement. What steps could I take to make it more neutral? Thanks! Roadrecovery (talk) 01:46, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 * I'll be happy to answer specific questions you may have, but I'm not going to throw out generic fixes for questions that can already be answered by help links already posted. WP:BUILDER Sulfurboy (talk) 06:03, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Do the statistics on the side of the page cause the article to appear like an advertisement? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Roadrecovery (talk • contribs) 16:07, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
 * I would say so, yes. Sulfurboy (talk) 16:23, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Add new category for the article
Good morning, Sulfurboy Re: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yaron_Meiri

Thank you for revising this page. You help is of great value to me. I've seen that you put the article into a category, Israeli People. This is very good. I've done some search and I think we could add another category - Category:Artistic_directors. I'll do this myself but I have no idea how. Can you help me with that? (and even walk me through the steps so I won't bother you again). Let me know your thoughts. Thank you! Daniela — Preceding unsigned comment added by Miha dani (talk • contribs) 05:20, 6 July 2015 (UTC)
 * In the future I would recommend using WP:HOTCAT Sulfurboy (talk) 15:18, 6 July 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your feedback! I've enabled the HOTCAT widget.

I need your help on figuring out the rest of the issues: "This article has an unclear citation style." -> Can you be more specific on that? What exactly can I do to make it clear? "This article may be in need of reorganization to comply with Wikipedia's layout guidelines." -> I will work on this later today, but some advice will be of great help. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Miha dani (talk • contribs) 12:55, 9 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Looks fine now really. The only thing I can advise (and the reason I left the one tag is there needs to be citations for that first section. Sulfurboy (talk) 16:34, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

Thank you, Sulfurboy! Your advice is welcomed and I will do my best to add citations for the first section of the article. XOXO — Preceding unsigned comment added by Miha dani (talk • contribs) 14:28, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

17:51:47, 6 July 2015 review of submission by Gpeja
I am not asking for a review just a quick note if the direction I am taking (by removing the mission and references to advertisement like references) is the way to go. The statements made in the article are the facts (year of founding, an interesting fact that is supported by a man (Michael Smith), targeted population, programs and the Canada wide support). Should I add criticism (for example the name is a bit strange for instead of and there are some complaints about influence) ?

Gpeja (talk) 17:51, 6 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Yes that helps, but I'd also focus on putting some of those lists in a prose form. Just having a large list of accomplishments or what the org does makes something look advert like.Sulfurboy (talk) 17:53, 6 July 2015 (UTC)

I combined everything in the one prose section (History). The programs section didn't make sense after I re-wrote history. Does it make sense now?Gpeja (talk) 06:33, 7 July 2015 (UTC)


 * I've approved it and did a few housekeeping cleanups on it, if you want to further improve the article I would recommend adding some more categories. Sulfurboy (talk) 16:37, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

Request on 05:11:02, 8 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Etisalat UAE CCD
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject

Hi,

I need to understand why is the CEO of Etisalat UAE not notable, there are people of the same calibre on Wikipedia, why is he not worthy to be on wikipedia

Regards,

Nancy Sudheer

Etisalat UAE CCD (talk) 05:11, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Request on 05:17:29, 8 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Etisalat UAE CCD
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Etisalat_UAE_CCD

Hi,

This is related to the upload of the article on Saleh Al Abdooli, CEO, Etisalat UAE, why is he not notable and not worthy of the submission, he is one of the respected figures in the telecom industry in the Middle East,

Please explain,

Regards

Nancy Sudheer

Etisalat UAE CCD (talk) 05:17, 8 July 2015 (UTC)


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:The_answer_to_life,_the_universe,_and_everything Sulfurboy (talk) 05:19, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Article Declined and submitted for review
--Dubaiinfo (talk) 06:04, 9 July 2015 (UTC) Hi, Sulfurboy! I noticed that article has been declined by you for some obvious reason. Unfortunately some other user has deleted lot of text from the article which i was surprised to see when you where reviewing it. I have now reverted back to the text which i had submitted for review. I would appreciate if you can review it and suggest changes if required. Thanks article link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Al_Habtoor_Motors_LLC []

07:48:53, 8 July 2015 review of submission by ParideVezzoso
Hi! You declined my submission writing that "The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations." Could you please give specific examples what I supposedly did wrong? That way I'll get an opportunity to understand the nature of your comment and try to improve the article. Thank you!

ParideVezzoso (talk) 07:48, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Request on 09:33:58, 8 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Angelova V
Hello, I'm Velly! Thanks for the proposal to help me out! I recently tried to submit an article about a gaming company and need some review draft help. I will edit the text ion terms of marketing terms but how can I deal with the external reference sources needed? Can you revise mine and advice me which links to remove? I will be extremely happy to get my first wikipedia article online! Any assistance will be highly appreciated! Angelova V (talk) 09:33, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

inre Articles for deletion/Der Bunker (2015)
Sorry you take a personal umbrage, but we are not to judge a topic by how poorly an article may be written or sourced, but per WP:NRVE upon the sources available even if not used. And WP:NF does not mandate big spreads in major media, only coverage that is independent and reliable, sources WHICH the nominated made mention dismissively while inexplicably deciding somehow that NF was failed.  Schmidt,  Michael Q. 09:45, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Request on 11:30:08, 8 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Katsheron
I have made 3 more edits on this article for creation. The last one is the one I would like reviewed, June 30 or July 1, I believe. So, now I just wait?

Katsheron (talk) 11:30, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

07 July review: Fair Stone Draft
Hello,

thanks for taking the time and reviewing the draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Fair_Stone. The article still seems to be missing the formal tone. I reviewed the text for any claim or marketing blah blah. I removed 3-4 sentences but could not find anything else. Is there anything in particular you critize? The article is meant to describe the formal requirements of the standard as well as the procedure. The previous reviews were very helpful and I have adjusted (i.e. reduced) the text accordingly. Segments such as the motivation or the need for a standard have been omitted. The reception segment contains an endorsement ("particulary recomendable" label), this however is a justified third party evaluation.

Kind regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Azradon (talk • contribs) 12:06, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

From Draft to Final Article - Source Page Name Mistake
Hello Sulfurboy,

This draft was approved and moved to a wrong name Page.

Here is the old link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bouclair&direction=next&oldid=668657099

The article was published under the name: Urbashi Chatterjee while it was supposed to be Bouclair. This was the message I sent you on 27th June after the initial acceptance:

""Thank you and Can I change my article page heading/username Hi Sulfurboy,

Thank you for approving Bouclair Home contribution. I however, would like to change the heading/direct link of the page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Urbashi_Chatterjee) to Bouclair Home. It is currently Urbashi Chatterjee and looks pretty odd as my user page talking about the company. Can the article be better named?

I also want to delete my sandbox history so that article appears as a BOuclair page on Wikipedia and not as my Sandbox contribution or user page. Please help. Thanks

Urbashi Chatterjee (talk) 11:18, 29 June 2015 (UTC)Urbashi ChatterjeeUrbashi Chatterjee (talk) 11:18, 29 June 2015 (UTC)""

The article had to be re-moved to another page which is the final target page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bouclair

However, the source page which redirects to this target page is appearing on Google results. I need you to guide me to change that. I have tried removing the redirect link from my user page and even deleted the old content from sandbox and user pages of Urbashi Chatterjee. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Urbashi_Chatterjee https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Urbashi_Chatterjee/sandbox&redirect=no

For your reference: https://www.google.co.in/search?q=bouclair&oq=bouclair&aqs=chrome.0.69i59j69i60j69i61j69i59l2j69i61.6495j0j4&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=93&ie=UTF-8

Please do guide me in this because my name appearing on a company page or article makes no sense to me or to the company...especially when the page is on Google through Wikipedia. Please help me fix this.

Thanks, Urbashi Chatterjee (talk) 13:27, 8 July 2015 (UTC)Urbashi ChatterjeeUrbashi Chatterjee (talk) 13:27, 8 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Looks like the issue has been resolved. Sulfurboy (talk) 15:33, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

14:33:16, 8 July 2015 review of submission by JKhade
Thanks for the reply. I am just confused with you saying "extensive coverage". Do you mean to say I should add some more information about the artist? Can you please explain more?

JKhade (talk) 14:33, 8 July 2015 (UTC)


 * The issue is that there isn't reliable, independent sources about the person. Only the symphony or links to wikipedia which do not count. Sulfurboy (talk) 15:33, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

16:25:55, 8 July 2015 review of submission by TCVCJ
I put in 3 new references - are the ones now contained in the body of the draft not applicable? And if not, are the 3 new ones enough? I also need to link this article to visittazewellcounty.org.TCVCJ (talk) 16:25, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

TCVCJ (talk) 16:25, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Check back with me after you fix the formatting of the references as I can't pull them up. Sulfurboy (talk) 16:27, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

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17:19:44, 8 July 2015 review of submission by Melissa Marie 2015
Hi Sulfurboy, thanks for the review! Can you please let me know which material does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations in Alan Chebot's article? That would be of great help. Thank you! Melissa Marie 2015 (talk) 17:19, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
 * The first two paragraphs and last paragraph have no citations. Sulfurboy (talk) 17:25, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
 * That, and the whole thing is written like a press release. Start by properly verifying the Emmy, right where it needs to be. Drmies (talk) 17:31, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Alan Chebot is mentioned in the referenced wikipedia pages for:

Outermost Radio: Outermost Radio is a feature-length documentary, written and directed by AlanChebot, that takes an intimate look at a community on the tip of Cape Cod, far 2 KB (181 words) - 06:33, 7 July 2015

Robert Ellis Orrall: Couldn't Say No" "Tell Me If It Hurts" 1992 "Boom! It Was Over" chris rogers 1993 "A Little Bit of Her Love" Alan Chebot "Every Day When I Get Home" 10 KB (947 words) - 05:26, 1 July 2015

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Do I need citations if he's mentioned on those wiki pages as a director? Melissa Marie 2015 (talk) 14:56, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Melissa Marie 2015, all content needs to be verified, and Wikipedia is not a reliable source for Wikipedia. I looked at the WOMR and the Restless Heart articles, and while Chebot is mentioned there, there are no reliable secondary sources to verify the information. I believe that should answer the question. Thank you, Drmies (talk) 15:36, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

17:47:26, 8 July 2015 review of submission by Gfdemarest
Hi there. Can you give me a bit more feedback on my references? Were you not able to get access to the research papers? SL is not a front page brand, but it has a unique place in the software landscape and has an interesting backstory. Not a lot of its early history has gotten press coverage as it was used in highly sensitive or classified projects.

Can you comment on what in particular does not make this notable enough.

thanks, and thanks for your work on wikipedia,

here is the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:SL_Corporation_(software_company)

Gfdemarest (talk) 17:47, 8 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Maybe this page will help... WP:CORP Sulfurboy (talk) 17:55, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Thomas A. LaVeist Citation
Hello, for information about early education, would this website be acceptable: http://www.jhsph.edu/faculty/directory/profile/3721/thomas-laveist Actually this one might be better: http://www.thecobbinstitute.org/faculty/thomas-laveist-ph-d CHinds89 (talk) 18:11, 8 July 2015 (UTC)CHinds89
 * You need to link to the draft you're talking about. Sulfurboy (talk) 18:13, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Request on 18:08:41, 8 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Nitareeny
Hello, I received an email that my submission for Sex in the Title by author Zack Love was not accepted. Was it because of the article it was in in USA Today? or the way I edited the submission? This is my first time doing this and it's a bit overwhelming. Hope you that you can lend a hand or have some advice. Thanks in advance. Best Regards, Anita Viccica Toss

Nitareeny (talk) 18:08, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Please read and follow the links posted on your draft, that should answer your questions. Sulfurboy (talk) 18:12, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Request on 00:23:41, 9 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Rostova1944
Hello Graham As I understood your main objection to my "Eugen Schileru"articlea as being its lack of verifiable sources, I decided to list under "References" and/or "External Links" only the titles with links on the Web, so instantly verifiable. I'd like to maintain the list under "Further Reading", as these are solid sources of info, most available through "Amazon" or other chains. I'm greatly appreciative for any further suggestions, piece of advice you'll send my way. Yes, I'm a seasoned reader of Wikipedia, by megatons, but "Eugen Schileru" is or hopefully will be my debut contribution. ````

Rostova1944 (talk) 00:23, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
 * If you are a seasoned reader of wiki, then you should see how offputting and confusing the formatting of the page is. This is what makes verifying the citations so difficult. If you need specific help formatting the page, please let me know and I'll link you to the appropriate help pages. Sulfurboy (talk) 05:21, 9 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Yes, all sources were in "confusing and offputting" jumble, for it was my first foray in using the system.

With help from my son, the short text is correctly annotated now and resubmitted. I did appreciate your so precise points. Thank you, Graham. ```` — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rostova1944 (talk • contribs) 19:27, 10 July 2015 (UTC)