Wikipedia:Articles for improvement/Nominations/Archives/2015/4

Yamaha Corporation
Unapproved. North America1000 02:14, 1 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 23:16, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support 日本のウィキペディアは記事に翻訳することができたコンテンツを持っています. -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 23:31, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - very useful and well-known. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 04:34, 10 March 2015 (UTC)

Shanty town
Unapproved. North America1000 09:46, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 23:57, 12 March 2015 (UTC)

Tent city
Unapproved. North America1000 09:46, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 23:53, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support, I heard about one in a city in my state a while ago, but it doesn't exist anymore. -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 23:56, 12 March 2015 (UTC)

Refugee camp
Unapproved. North America1000 09:46, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 23:51, 12 March 2015 (UTC)

Royal Watercolour Society
Unapproved. North America1000 07:27, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nominated by N ORTH A MERICA 1000 19:28, 15 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Evad37 &#91;talk] 01:13, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - CSJJ104 (talk) 22:37, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Comment - I think the best way to improve is to just add the infobox. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 04:50, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Oppose Not significant enough for a TAFI -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Fire bike


Unapproved. North America1000 07:51, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 15:12, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Evad37 &#91;talk] 01:14, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Nice candidate for WP:DYK. -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:46, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Combination plate
Unapproved. North America1000 07:52, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 11:24, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Go food! Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 19:38, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support, wow, what a mess, but indeed, go food! :D -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 22:56, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose Very general term which may be difficult to find anything substantial on. -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Colgate (toothpaste)
Unapproved. North America1000 07:52, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Doesn't look like a Start-class, more like Stub-class. Who here knows Colgate? I do. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 06:33, 5 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support. N ORTH A MERICA 1000 01:15, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 23:13, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose Going to much in favor of advertisers. -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Comment - what does niche because you seem to enjoy using the word "niche"? Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 21:23, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

List of cooking techniques
Unapproved. North America1000 07:52, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Expandable article. N ORTH A MERICA 1000 15:00, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - better list and citations. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 22:27, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - Evad37 &#91;talk] 01:20, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose General oppose including lists on TAFI. -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Cannabis strains
Unapproved. North America1000 07:53, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 14:53, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Gees the poor information strains me. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 05:45, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Oppose on grounds of list-style article. -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Crime in Iran
Unapproved. North America1000 07:53, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 23:59, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Middle East is important these days Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 01:48, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Nerd
Unapproved. North America1000 07:53, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 23:55, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 08:55, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 13:19, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Oppose Niche -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Mass transit in New York City
Unapproved. North America1000 07:54, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Rated as B-class, but still has significant potential for improvements. N ORTH A MERICA 1000 01:23, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Oppose too niche for TAFI -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Cannabis Cup
Unapproved. North America1000 07:54, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 12:04, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Oppose – there is already a community working on these articles, too few from TAFI will likely be able to contribute --  CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

Soufflé
approved Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 03:26, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
 * I know I said the ones below were the last ones for today, but soufflé is in horrible shape. -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 00:26, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 08:58, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support --CSJJ104 (talk) 00:05, 15 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support--BluJay (talk) 01:48, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

Capture the flag

 * Capture the need for more attention. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 04:10, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 05:04, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support N ORTH A MERICA 1000 01:27, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support Obviously --A.Minkowiski_Lets t@lk 18:07, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Support--BluJay (talk) 01:48, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

Obviously approved by Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 20:40, 5 April 2015 (UTC)

Attic
Approved. North America1000 04:19, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Attic is at iiihhk. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 06:44, 22 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support. -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 13:17, 22 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support.--BluJay (talk) 01:42, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support --CSJJ104 (talk) 23:25, 8 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Support --Zackmann08 (talk) 03:36, 9 April 2015 (UTC)

Merchant
Unapproved. North America1000 04:22, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Who will be our merchant-merchant? Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 08:52, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support. N ORTH A MERICA 1000 09:56, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

Christmas dinner


Unapproved. North America1000 04:22, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 01:24, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - lead section is horrible and there is a lack of citations. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 03:05, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

Asian supermarket

 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 22:01, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - although I am not so sure if there are some Asian fans. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 05:13, 3 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Oppose Not an asian phenomenon really, too niche. -- CFCF  🍌 (email) 10:37, 13 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Comment: : How does not being "an asian phenomenon" disqualify the article, in your opinion? N ORTH A MERICA 1000 09:31, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

Unapproved. North America1000 04:22, 9 April 2015 (UTC)

Money trail

 * Nom., please use the nomination method above. You may support my vote because I rewritten your nomination for you. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 05:43, 28 February 2015 (UTC)

Unapproved. North America1000 04:23, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support Khallus Maximus (talk) 23:03, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support N ORTH A MERICA 1000 01:59, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

List of mathematical jargon
Unapproved. North America1000 04:21, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Has three maintenance templates atop to guide improvements. N ORTH A MERICA 1000 09:35, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

Birds Eye
Unapproved. North America1000 04:23, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 23:33, 17 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 03:27, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Comment - this is a company, not a point of view. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 03:27, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

Evening
Unapproved. North America1000 22:31, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Good evening (or morning?), but this article is very undeveloped. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 08:51, 17 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support. N ORTH A MERICA 1000 09:39, 17 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support. -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 13:19, 22 March 2015 (UTC)

Worm's-eye view
Unapproved. North America1000 22:32, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
 * It is a short worm (Gettit? Stub?) Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 19:33, 24 March 2015 (UTC)

Sega

 * Article's about a well-known subject, suffering from CE problems, heavy use of primary sourcing and POV/promotional verbiage, and could use some work with organization and the overall focus of the writing. BlusterBlasterkablooie! 21:14, 23 March 2015 (UTC)

Unapproved. North America1000 22:32, 16 April 2015 (UTC)

Religious text
Approved. North America1000 22:32, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 02:02, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support as it needs to be an article, not a list. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 03:03, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support Agreed with Qwertyxp2000. It should be an article --A.Minkowiski_Lets t@lk 18:05, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support--CSJJ104 (talk) 11:56, 16 April 2015 (UTC)

Newgrounds
Unapproved. North America1000 05:50, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
 * The article was in a pretty bad state when I came across it, and has very little editor interest-- it's in dire need of extra hands, and having been one of the most well known entertainment sites around in the late 90s/early 2000s, I think it deserves better. BlusterBlasterkablooie! 12:51, 22 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - history needed especially. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 23:54, 26 March 2015 (UTC)

Firefighting
Approved. North America1000 23:28, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
 * An important article that could do with some improvement --Zackmann08 (talk) 20:28, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support --CSJJ104 (talk) 11:57, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support North America1000 05:51, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Support -- Amaryllis Gardener  talk 23:17, 20 April 2015 (UTC)

Condiment


Unapproved. North America1000 03:47, 29 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Nom: N ORTH A MERICA 1000 21:21, 14 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - I feel this article caters too much to the western perspective. Qwertyxp2000 (talk) 04:09, 15 March 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Support--BluJay (talk) 01:44, 6 April 2015 (UTC)