Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive 11

 This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up, or are over one year old .

June

 * George Jacob – Several cleanup issues denoted by maintenance tags in the article. North America1000 03:16, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
 * The above core concerns above were addressed by User:Drewmutt and User:MarnetteD. North America1000 23:06, 5 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Eric Block – 16 bare urls. North America1000 20:06, 3 June 2018 (UTC)
 * by User:MarnetteD. North America1000 23:07, 5 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Cooking on the Wild Side – 15 bare urls. North America1000 20:00, 3 June 2018 (UTC)
 * by User:Derek R Bullamore. North America1000 23:08, 5 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Dominica citizenship by investment programme – Many bare urls and reference formatting errors. North America1000 21:47, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up by User:MarnetteD. North America1000 18:29, 8 June 2018 (UTC)


 * London Mint Office – 13 bare urls. North America1000 08:40, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
 * by . North America1000 20:01, 3 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Michael J. Carey (professor) – Unclear citation style. North America1000 12:18, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
 * AmericanAir88 (talk) 12:19, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

April

 * Dodge College of Film and Media Arts has inline URLs, peacock POV, and seems misleading. Z75SG61Ilunqpdb (talk) 02:31, 28 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ AmericanAir88 (talk) 19:17, 18 July 2018 (UTC)


 * The Land of Open Graves – anthropology book. Self-referencing (could be changed to sfn) and too much content. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:38, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Comment – The book has received some notable reviews:, (PDF), . According to WP:NBOOK that probably bestows notability, but the WP article should be about the book's influence and should not repeat the book itself. Also, the article could possibly be nominated for deletion because there is no article about the author. ---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 15:23, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ ...at least in terms of cleaning up he weaknesses noted by User:Bbarmadillo back in April. I alerted the Books Project about the article and some folks there cut down the self-referencing summaries substantially. The article still has lingering notability issues though. ---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 17:21, 1 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Austin Irving – American contemporary artist. She is notable (LA Times, Slate, WIRED mentions her works) but the article simply has too much information esp. at the Bibliography section. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:05, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * I also notified that they should not be editing this article and should properly declare COI. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:12, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ❌ This page has been deleted (not by me) due to it being "Unambiguous advertising or promotion". -- LichWizard  talk  14:44, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks like it has raised from ashes :) -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:26, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
 * So it has :P -- LichWizard  talk  19:49, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Well, I guess it's been deleted again... -- LichWizard  talk  14:53, 10 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Melodorum siamense - This is a tree species native to Thailand, but it seems whoever wrote this article wasn't a native English speaker; there's several examples of syntax/grammatical errors throughout the body of the article. -- Aanaranjo10 (talk) 18:16, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ I cleaned up the grammar and such, but the article doesn't cite any sources, so I have no idea if it's accurate or not. -- LichWizard  talk  21:31, 8 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Yang Chia-Yun – Taiwanese film directors, needs references de-duplication. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:55, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Cleaned up the duplicated references. -- LichWizard  talk  18:19, 14 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Trans-Saharan Railway – Bare urls. North America1000 07:50, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Fixed duplicated and bare URLs -- LichWizard  talk  11:34, 16 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Mineral industry of Europe – Bare urls. North America1000 21:42, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
 * by User:MarnetteD. North America1000 11:42, 16 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Coretta Scott King – the entire article is disorganized, and uses many instances of unidiomatic American English. Sections are all right, but many anecdotes are sort strung together or pop up randomly. The article as a whole reads like a high school essay. Matuko) 22:33, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
 * I think it's a beautiful article! Nina07011960 (talk)
 * ✅ - Tags for "copy edit" and "personal opinion/essay" were placed on 10 April by Matuko (who also commented above). Several editors tackled typos and grammar errors and in my judgment the problem is resolved so I removed that tag. Meanwhile, Matuko (if you read this), please give some examples of how the article looked too much "like a high school essay". Respectfully and professionally, I must disagree because almost all claims are supported by reliable sources and a few minor oversights already have the standard "citation needed" tag. ---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 19:12, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I stand by my issues with the article, and have replied to your comment on my talk page with examples. I don't have a dog in this hunt other than providing readers with a factual and readable article on Mrs. King (as we all want), and if I am alone in this, I'm perfectly fine with that. I used phraseology (i.e. "high school essay") from Wikipedia's guidelines regarding encyclopedic tone and article cleanup and certainly not just to offend. --Matuko (Talk) 23:49, 18 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Ashley Avis – American screenwriter and director. The article is written like advertising, needs cleanup to remove puffery. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 15:37, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅, fixed by other editors


 * Racine Art Museum needs Wiki help as not sure how to comply with requests.Ramfan101 (talk) 17:19, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Ramfan101
 * ✅ Leschnei (talk) 13:24, 21 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Nina Gamble Kennedy – please advise as to exactly what text should be deleted for the article to be "fixed." Nina07011960 (talk) DOB removed Nina07011960 (talk)

March

 * A. & L. Tirocchi Gowns -- nice article but way too long. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:37, 27 March 2018 (UTC)
 * improved references a bit. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:59, 16 March 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Finished the cleanup. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:58, 17 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Aaron Sim – requires clean up to remove any promotional tone and kindly read all the resources for fact checking thanks :) Shenalyn2018 (talk) 02:47, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
 * ❌ per discussion at Articles for deletion/Aaron Sim (2nd nomination). North America1000 06:05, 20 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Galbraith (business) – requires clean up do to input from someone working at the company after they underwent a rebrand. --RMGDKC (talk) 15:53, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
 * De Dolle Brouwers – Bare urls. North America1000 15:17, 29 March 2018 (UTC)
 * by User:MarnetteD. North America1000 22:07, 6 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Gerald Murray (Talent manager) – the article is simply too long and not well-referenced. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bbarmadillo (talk • contribs) 21:03, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
 * UPD: Nominated for the deletion. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 11:46, 1 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ❌ per discussion at Articles for deletion/Gerald Murray (Talent manager). North America1000 20:02, 8 April 2018 (UTC)


 * The Raphael Hotel – article about an hotel made by someone who doesn't know how to make references. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:59, 30 March 2018 (UTC)
 * the text is OK. There are still too many links at "External links" that should be turned into text references. I did part of the job. A bit more effort is needed. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:15, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Finished the cleanup. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:54, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

February

 * Deadcuts – 52 bare urls. North America1000 12:55, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
 * by, and thank you. North America1000 11:49, 15 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Pretzelmaker – Bare urls and reference errors . North America1000 10:58, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Has been addressed by other users, and I performed some follow-up minor edits. North America1000 19:56, 20 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Cyril Ramaphosa – The information that should in a box on the right appears in the lead section. FergParkinson
 * Has been fixed by User:BraedenMayer. FergParkinson


 * Mila Jam – May need some edits here and there and I am not quite sure what exactly! I know the page is listed as an orphan page, but there are many different articles and publications about this artist. NicoLarsson
 * The article is presently in a satisfactory state, and it is also not orphaned at this time. North America1000 02:30, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

January

 * Duval-Leroy – Reference linkrot issues. North America1000 05:04, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
 * by . North America1000 07:09, 28 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Magdalena Zyzak – linkrot issues. North America1000 12:52, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I've checked all the links and they all work.Plum3600 (talk) 21:42, 13 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Miya's – 30 bare urls . North America1000 19:58, 16 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Also reads like an advertisement and the sections need extensive cleanup due to trivial nature AmericanAir88 (talk) 14:46, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Bare urls were fixed by, and thanks! North America1000 08:25, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ AmericanAir88 (talk) 03:07, 19 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Can you assist me in cleaning up my draft? John Warner Smith (talk) 18:51, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Note: This appears to be about Draft:John Warner Smith. North America1000 07:04, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Note that Draft:John Warner Smith has already been rejected for article status five times due to lack of notability and shortage of reliable sources. Another review now is likely to lead to the same result. ---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 22:21, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
 * The article is now in main namespace, and does not appear to require cleanup at this time. North America1000 02:34, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

August

 * Nortec Software – Written not like an encyclopedia, All Bare Urls, and is an Orphan. AmericanAir88 (talk) 17:48, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Bare urls fixed. North America1000 00:07, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Article was soft-deleted per Articles for deletion/Nortec Software. North America1000 08:37, 17 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Travancore royal family – Bare urls. North America1000 04:26, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Presently has no bare urls. North America1000 08:21, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Aron Ra – Tons of external links that should be references. Zero Serenity (talk – contributions) 18:40, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
 * (by another user). North America1000 23:58, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

November

 * Acme Monaco – External links inline the article. Reads like a advert and in general the style of this article is confusing, including many IP edits. --Steinfeld-feld (talk) 19:59, 24 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Article has been Deleted from an outside person.AmericanAir88 (talk)


 * Kettlebell Grips – Needs to be entirely rewritten to not look like a manual. EMachine03 (talk) 00:45, 11 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Deleted per discussion at Articles for deletion/Kettlebell Grips. North America1000 17:52, 23 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Erik K. Alexander – 43 bare urls. North America1000 18:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
 * by . North America1000 04:27, 19 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Mercuria Energy Group – Many bare urls intermingled in the references. North America1000 04:22, 14 November 2017 (UTC)
 * by other users. North America1000 18:12, 20 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Peer Zumbansen – 61 bare urls. North America1000 04:26, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
 * by . North America1000 02:23, 22 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Vanjari – Poorly written, no references. Only reference used is from an unreliable website.
 * Nb. The article was redirected (by another user) to Banjara, the latter of which does not appear to need improvements. North America1000 03:00, 23 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Chor-Bakr – based on a single source full of errors, see talk page --Bjs (talk) 16:22, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:12, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

December

 * Roger Smart – Two named references had the same refname and this threw an error. I renamed the both refnames but it's still unclear which reference belongs to which reference call. --Steinfeld-feld (talk) 21:10, 17 December 2017 (UTC)

July

 * Doe Maar – The article has several cleanup templates within it, is tagged for reorganization, and also presently has no references. North America1000 19:49, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:19, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Venceremos (political organization) – The page is a mess. Much too long, very few citations, long quotation in the middle.  Might have been created by someone close to the organization. -Xcuref1endx (talk) 06:58, 21 July 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ - Xcuref1endx was probably right about someone close to the organization writing the article. It had way too many unsourced details about the group's inner workings, stuff probably remembered fondly by the group but boring and irrelevant to everyone else. I eliminated just about all that stuff, reduced the article to a factual history, and improved the citations. There are a couple of fairly minor factual statements that I was unable to verify so I left "citation needed" alerts. ---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 21:03, 20 April 2018 (UTC)

April

 * Patriotic Spring – This could use a good cleaning. POV language, lack of sources, WP:SYNTH/OR. I can see where this article is heading, but it's going to need some good, neutral work. -- ZiaLater  ( talk  ) 04:42, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
 * The article presently redirects to Neo-nationalism. See the article's Revision history for more information. North America1000 05:29, 25 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Tariffs in United States history – Graphs out of place, tables unformatted King Jason96 (talk) 02:24, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

March

 * Aston Martin – Have started badly needed cleanup, lots of outdated, and sometimes wrong information. Article will need a general refurbishment after the worst has been fixed. All help appreciated. BsBsBs (talk) 08:02, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

September

 * Sierra Leonean Zip Code – Needs cleanup per maintenance tags in article. North America1000 23:55, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:23, 13 October 2017 (UTC)

October

 * Eastsheen — seems somewhat like the well-meant work of a simple-minded enthusiast…--Cleph (talk) 15:59, 20 October 2017 (UTC)
 * The article was deleted. North America1000 02:29, 29 October 2017 (UTC)

December

 * Twelve Swords of Power – Multiple issues. At least 6 aging maintenance tags on this one. Not sure what the best approach would be for this one but above all else it definitely needs a trim. -- &oelig; &trade; 05:59, 11 December 2016 (UTC)

November

 * Nalanda Buddhist Institute, Bhutan – Several issues. Most sections lack any citation and sources are not clear. Three images used in the article are marked with a © (copyright character). (Are these photos copyright?) Chris Fynn (talk) 13:33, 16 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Book of Mormon chronology – Significant format and style issues. Also fairly obscure content found in context in other pages. Finally, concerned about overly positive POV vs. neutrality.

May

 * Atlantic City, New Jersey, needs clean up, especially lead needs expansion and some layout organization issues. Tinton5 (talk) 03:21, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

August

 * WWICS Group of Companies - Bare urls and lacking inline citations. Ayub 407 talk 12:19, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Bare url matters fixed. North America1000 00:52, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Article was deleted per WP:G4. North America1000 08:38, 17 October 2017 (UTC)


 * List of largest corporate profits and losses – PDF file sources are bare urls. North America1000 17:57, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅ All Bare Urls fixed AmericanAir88 (talk) 01:40, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

May

 * Life-cycle greenhouse-gas emissions of energy sources – Contains many instances of unclear writing, particularly due to poor grammar and inadequate punctuation. --Arvedui (talk) 00:32, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
 * The article has received many copy edits since this post. May not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 01:48, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Children's Day – URL clean up needed in reference section. Tinton5 (talk) 22:15, 10 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up using Webreflinks. North America1000 01:46, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Recess (break) – Clean up needed (see notice at top: page needs to be globalized), also references need clean up. Tinton5 (talk) 02:00, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
 * I cleaned up the references, no globalization tag presently exists on the article, the article is essentially cleaned-up at this time, and requests for major copy edits are better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 01:00, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * List of Shameless (U.S. TV series) characters I saw some glaring errors in some of the descriptions of the characters of this TV series. I corrected some of them, but then saw that many of the entries contain detailed descriptions of plot activity (especially from Season 4), rather than just the characters' nature or biographical information. It seems to me that, even though the activity of the story lines impacts the characters' personalities, the inclusion of what amounts to partial plot synopses may be irrelevant, and furthermore will contain spoilers. I believe this is not the place for plot outlines and such. I soon realized I was looking at a much larger task than originally conceived, and thought it best to bring this matter to public attention, hoping those with more experience in this area will know how to improve the page satisfactorily. I hope this is the right place to post this sort of notice. Thank you. Journeybear
 * Dated post; may be better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 01:32, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Abed Mahfouz – Lists references, but has no inline citations. Article is badly organized as well.SpiritedMichelle (talk) 04:50, 13 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Tamara Rojo – Article has info that is not well organized and is repeated several times without reason.SpiritedMichelle (talk) 04:48, 13 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Traffic-light signalling and operation and Traffic light – Clean up needed, as well as the notices on top of page need to be addressed. Tinton5 (talk) 22:17, 10 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Looks like one had been fixed, but Traffic light still needs improvements. Tinton5 (talk) 20:21, 16 May 2015 (UTC)


 * List of the most common U.S. place names – clean up needed with notice on top from 2013. Tinton5 (talk) 14:50, 9 May 2015 (UTC)
 * I took a look at this article and I don't think that there's much use in cleaning it up until there is some kind of consensus on which source to use for the list (post office vs USGS, for example) and how broadly to define place names (include counties?). Leschnei (talk) 14:06, 15 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Donna Summer – references and article need clean up. Tinton5 (talk) 03:25, 2 May 2015 (UTC)

April

 * Dominicans Don't Play – Entire references section has problems; embedded urls, most of the sources missing titles, and more. North America1000 14:28, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Most of websites cited in the article are deadlinks. Ayub 407 talk 06:44, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:23, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Rocco Louis Gentilcore – orphaned article that needs more wikilinks and categories, and has many bare urls. North America1000 12:28, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the above. North America1000 01:36, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:24, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Traffic light – needs additional sources and clean up. Notices on top of page need to be addressed. Tinton5 (talk) 20:13, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
 * A duplicate post for this article exists on the May 2015 section of the main Cleanup page.


 * Pemex – Bare urls embedded in inline citations. North America1000 06:49, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:17, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Johnny Cash – Some bare URLs and other fixes needed. Tinton5 (talk) 20:41, 14 April 2015 (UTC)

March

 * James Nyamweya – major COI issues. Reads like a personal reflection. Appears to be notable individual, but major copy edit required. --Haruth (talk) 19:34, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

February

 * Feeding Everyone No Matter What – Many bare urls. N ORTH A MERICA 1000 01:38, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:30, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Atom (Ray Palmer) – clean up needed.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 09:18, 15 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Coastal Corporation, needs lots of fixings. Formatting, bare URL's, you name it. Tinton5 (talk) 06:16, 15 February 2015 (UTC)
 * The article presently has no bare urls, but still needs clean-up for other reasons. North America1000 03:41, 1 January 2017 (UTC)

January

 * CISPA, layout is messy from the last two versions of the bill, needs organizing and new information for 2015 – Gaming4JC (talk) 01:41, 17 January 2015 (UTC)
 * May be better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 06:08, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

January

 * International museum and library of music – a bit of mess; shouldn't there be more capital letters in its title, for a start? Toccata quarta (talk) 10:10, 30 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Not in a messy state at this time. Source searches are showing the organizations title as titled in the Wikipedia article. North America1000 01:34, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

October

 * Ivyann Schwan – needs clean up with punctuation, formatting, more sources, etc. Tinton5 (talk) 15:49, 2 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Green Arrow in other media – various sections contain excessive details and may require copy edit and clean up. --NeoBatfreak (talk) 19:56, 1 October 2014 (UTC)
 * May be better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 03:43, 1 October 2017 (UTC)

August

 * Charlie Walsh The whole article is rubbish. No references for Walsh being a technician before, no or bad references at all, critics were thrown out. Very bad. Please return to [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Charlie_Walsh&diff=262770574&oldid=262770464] --Nicola54 (talk) 06:49, 9 August 2014 (UTC)}}
 * 101 Strings, wording, formatting, removal of original research and more sources needed. Tinton5 (talk) 00:12, 4 August 2014 (UTC)

February

 * Bella Shteinbuk – bad grammar. Toccata quarta (talk) 16:48, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Update: I made some grammatical improvements. Icensnow42 (talk) 16:35, 12 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Lantern Festival – Needs sources! Rotideypoc41352 (talk) 20:55, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Francisco Riba Rovira – as far as this article is concerned, "unmitigated disaster" is a euphemism. Toccata quarta (talk) 12:39, 14 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Dated post; unclear how it's an "unmitigated disaster". North America1000 01:30, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * List of HVDC projects – Article needs some refresh and linking fix. Georgij Michaliutin (talk) 06:22, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I filled in 7 bare references with reFill. More bare urls remain. North America1000 14:44, 25 September 2017 (UTC)

October

 * Dubai World Central – Al Maktoum International Airport – Airport just opened for passengers. Needs additional references and page cleanup. Sherenk1 (talk) 16:51, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
 * The page presently has 37 references. I cleaned up the bare urls, and layout is in order at this time. North America1000 01:23, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Wallace v. Jaffree – Facts of the case as well as the opinion of the case are all in the introduction, not segmented into subheads. Cleanup needed. Amberkilloran (talk) 02:05, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
 * The stated problems do not exist in the article at this time. North America1000 01:25, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Barmaley Fountain-This monument was recently restored,the article needs a photograph too.I would do it myself,but I am an amateur Wikipedian -.- -- Killuminator (talk) 19:06, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Stated concerns no longer exist in the article. North America1000 01:27, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Administrative divisions of South America – the article is full of incorrect ref formating.. --Frze > talk </tt> 11:08, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
 * D.P. Kothari – Needs clean up with formatting, punctuation, and other fixes. Tinton5 (talk) 17:31, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Added links, attempted cleanup, still requires more citations. jojo@nthony 13:09, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

August

 * Hiv impact of education in ethiopia – Very essayish, needs extreme copyediting and retitling. Probably should also be expanded to worldwide scope, or at least a larger region than just Ethiopia. -- <font color="1034A6">Brainy J ~ <font color="602F6B" size="3">✿  ~ (<font color="1034A6">talk ) 13:23, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I changed the title to Relationship between education and HIV/AIDS.-- <font color="1034A6">Brainy J ~ <font color="602F6B" size="3">✿  ~ (<font color="1034A6">talk ) 19:06, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * May be better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 01:19, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * List of haunted locations, especially Haunted locations in the US – Has numerous amounts of speculative information from various unreliable paranormal websites. Also prone to drive-by additions, need a massive cleanup and removal of such content based on unreliable sources; watchlisting will also help. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 12:04, 19 August 2013 (UTC)
 * This request may be better suited for WP:GOCER, rather than this project. North America1000 01:04, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * List of Cluedo characters, not consistent at all, example...Ms. Scarlet or Ms. Scarlett? Clean up needed. Tinton5 (talk) 03:23, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
 * May be better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 01:15, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Lowell Milken – The cleanup banner has been on this page since April 2013 regarding additional editors to qualify for a neutral point of view. There are also references that require proper sourcing. Perhaps some other editors can attend to the references on this page? Sarahkeen (talk) 21:16, 26 August 2013 (UTC)

July

 * Silva Method – Grammar needs fixing. Article is more about José Silva than the Silva Method. Content about the method itself is mostly not encyclopaedic (e.g. list of countries). The Navbox template adds little value. Stelio (talk) 09:10, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
 * The article has received many copy edits since this post. See the page's Revision history for more information. North America1000 01:14, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Muhammad ibn Ismail – Needs additional references and page cleanup .Sherenk1 (talk) 12:52, 6 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Cleanup done. North America1000 01:07, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

April

 * 2005–present: Paramount today – This section of the Paramount Pictures article is almost entirely unsourced, as indicated by the "citation needed" tags added in July 2012. The entire section needs rewriting. Editors may find the following articles useful as sources. NinaSpezz (talk) 17:56, 5 April 2013 (UTC)
 * This section presently has many references, and only a couple of citation needed tags at this time. North America1000 01:12, 4 October 2017 (UTC)


 * The Third World War Book – Needs layout clean up, especially in the lead. Tinton5 (talk) 02:25, 1 April 2013 (UTC)

May

 * Macedonian hip hop – organization into sections, copy editing, better sourcing, currently has no inline citations. Northamerica1000(talk) 20:40, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Withdraw nom. North America1000 08:32, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Seismic anisotropy – just added Multiple issues, main things are math, refs, links, and style. Kwinkunks (talk) 16:24, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
 * This seems better suited for WP:GOCER. North America1000 01:09, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

February

 * New Jersey Turnpike – needs additional sources and formatting improvements. In addition, consistency with naming conventions such as the word "exit" (like in exit 5), the "E" should be lowercase in the body and lead. Footnote number 22 needs to be replaced with a more reliable source. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Struck "Footnote number 22 needs to be replaced with a more reliable source" above. Appears to have been addressed. North America1000 14:13, 27 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Garden State Parkway – needs extra sources, formatting improvements, and consistency with naming conventions throughout. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Belt Parkway – extra sources are needed, especially in "history" section. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)