Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive 13

 This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up, or are over one year old .

December 2017

 * Victoria's Secret - Lead section is outdated and the whole article itself is overly long and full of unnecessary details. SpiritedMichelle (talk) 02:40, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
 * I updated the Lead and tried to compress the History section. Could use more compressing/editing on the whole article --Courtc22 (talk) 19:01, 12 January 2018 (UTC)

January 2018

 * Vinylon - style and tone of much of the text is too informal/"un-encylopedic". 2Q (talk) 20:57, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Road rage - Many maintenance problems. AmericanAir88 (talk) 14:43, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Santiago Giraldo – There are two extremely long paragraphs and some information which is irrelevant, especially in the lead, with some present-tense alongside a lot of unsourced detail. Might be able to improve it a bit myself but I may not have enough time and I'm no expert at this, hence the reason why I've put a cleanup tag there and reported this. Broman178 (talk) 18:45, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Update: I have removed the two extremely long paragraphs, removed irrelevant information in first one (lead) and divided second one into smaller paragraphs so removed tag for lead and changed cleanup tag. However, more references will be needed later and some copyedits, reduction and expansion might be required in some places in the article, might be able to do some more, especially removing present tense, but if anyone else has other ways to improve this article, please do so. Broman178 (talk) 10:33, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

March 2018

 * MATCH International Women's Fund - Canadian non-profit. Multiple self-referencing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bbarmadillo (talk • contribs) 20:24, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Kerry Freedman - American professor of arts and author. I did some basic cleanup, but more cleanup is needed. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:39, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Tried to give the article a more neutral stance and did some general cleanup, but it could still use some better citation. -- LichWizard  talk  21:08, 8 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Jesse Brown (journalist) - requires clean up, particularly on the long, rambling section on Jian Ghomeshi who was later acquitted of all charges despite Brown's continued insistence of his guilt. There is also disagreement on whether he is a journalist and/or if that is the best description of his current role as a talk show host.
 * Planck length -- Needs more citations, a bigger history section, more focus on conventional physics, a better treatment of currently unaccepted theories, and attention from an expert. I've already done some cleanup myself, but needs considerably more. cnte (talk) 07:46, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Cultural achievements of pre-colonial Philippines – Needs additional citations, may contain original research, relies largely on a single unreliable source, may not have a neutral point of view. Thinker78 (talk) 00:43, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Christina Battle - Canadian video artist. Most works and exhibitions unreferenced. I am not an expert in video art, so just tagged the relevant project and also adding here. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:51, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
 * List of countries by firearm-related death rate – Needs stats corrected because many don't match the references. I have done some myself. Thinker78 (talk) 06:06, 5 March 2018 (UTC) Edited 07:19, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

April 2018

 * Akkai Padmashali - Indian transgender. I did some basic cleanup (references duplication) but more work is needed. Possibly a candidate for the deletion. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 15:16, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Ugnius Kiguolis - Lithuanian businessman. I did some basic cleanup. Much more needed. Considered AfD, but found a Lithuanian Wikipedia article, so he might be notable. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
 * - Added some more categories to the page Lucie Person (talk) 03:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * (still) - Added an infobox, and more cleanup done Lucie Person (talk) 20:28, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Sovereignty (play) - 2015 play. Minor cleanup needed ( references duplication, styling). -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 05:55, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up reference duplication. -- LichWizard  talk  18:52, 8 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Ohotaq Mikkigak - Inuit artist, needs cleanup at bibliography and references sections. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:07, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

May 2018

 * Demonstrative - The first and second sections are basically the same thing, and both obviously written by a long chain of editors adding examples sequentially in inconsistent fashions. The two sections and examples therein need to be consolidated and made consistent. Justin Kunimune (talk) 02:00, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Latin Kings (gang) - Used to be much more organized but is now a confusing mess. Kausticgirl (talk) 07:10, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
 * If you can identify a date in the past when the article was not "a confusing mess", it should be fairly easy for us to update it to a state resembling what it was back then. ---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 00:50, 21 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Shortstown - Needs a lot of info to be cited, cleaned up and added. -- User:Nathanimations (talk) 12 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed and cleaned up sections. However the article is highly uncited and is a copyvio. AmericanAir88 (talk) 14:03, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

June 2018

 * Suhas Gopinath – This article was considered for deletion, and requires cleanup according to the discussion. --Deepakhmwiki (talk) 06:50, 15 June 2018 (UTC)

July 2018

 * The Harley Medical Group - British cosmetic surgery clinics, multiple self-referencing and also references could be improved. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:42, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
 * I fixed most of the issues but would like more experienced editors to take a look at it. The article still has very emotional language in breast implants scandal part. Also, as far as I understand, the company changed its name to avoid bankruptcy - this should probably be added to the article. "Compliance" part might also need attention. Looks like it has some very obvious facts (doctors should have licenses). --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:39, 28 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Map - Vital article in need of a big source cleanup. AmericanAir88 (talk) 03:30, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
 * GLAST (tokamak), article is somewhat disorganized. Some points seem repetitive, some require citations and and others may be too technically specific. It is also unclear if GLAST-II & GLAST-III are upgrades or separate devices. AquaDTRS (talk) 21:33, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey! Say! JUMP, clean-up for grammar, references, formatting, and cutting of irrelevant information. Sounds too promotional at times and there are signs of edit-warring. lullabying (talk) 07:46, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed information pertaining to specific members and removed irrelevant information. Cleaned up repeated wikilinks in the body. --Madds212 (talk) 19:59, 10 August 2018 (UTC)


 * B. S. Moonje, needs more citations and encyclopedic formatting (esp. titles). Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  04:16, 25 July 2018 (UTC)
 * AmericanAir88 (talk) 00:14, 1 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Bill Clapp - US businessman, seems to be notable, but the article has many unreferenced facts and the tone is very promotional. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:42, 21 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Made article improvements pertaining to promotional content. I included some references, however additional are needed for unreferenced facts. ChrisD Strummer (talk) 18:59, 13 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Rob Schenck - American Evangelical pastor and activist. The article has multiple typos and grammatical errors and also needs more attention/cleanup from someone with an Evangelical or generally Christian background. Lbr123 (talk) 01:21, 13 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Olurotimi Badero - Nigerian doctor. The article looks very promotional, needs cleanup and attention from someone with the medical background. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:38, 12 July 2018 (UTC) ✅
 * I've put in templates for notability, advertising, etc. It may be a candidate for a deletion discussion if there's not enough notability. Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  00:16, 21 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Abdul Wahid Omar - the original editor write it in a fan's point of view and the article was tagged as such. I've try to improve the article as much as I can, looking for sources etc but I need someone else to check and clean it up. Froswo (talk) 06:33, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Everette Taylor - The editor who created the article was found guilty of taking pay for creating a different article. So there is this banner at the top of the articles he created that says it was paid for. However the subject of this article is notable enough. The article should be worked on and the banner removed since we aren't sure this very subject paid for his — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aghachi7 (talk • contribs) 20:57, 6 July 2018 (UTC)

August 2018

 * French Development Agency: It looks like much of this has been copy/pasted from the French Wikipedia and then translated, with links to frwiki left in-place. French Wikipedia has a different style guide to ours, so things like smart-quotes and guillemets should be converted to straight-quotes and direct links to frwiki should be replaced with calls to Template:ill. Language-tagging should be completed, as well. —  OwenBlacker (talk; please &#123;&#123;ping&#125;&#125; me in replies) 16:00, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Musical: The Prince of Tennis: Some information is listed under bullets; sources not formatted; one section has a list of every behind-the-scenes DVD ever released and I'm not quite sure what to do with it. lullabying (talk) 17:06, 28 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Cowasuck, major clean up needed. Tinton5 (talk) 05:57, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Eliminated unrelated info, added wikilinks, and formatted words. --Madds212 (talk) 17:45, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Edited grammar and orthography werewolf (talk) 04:43, 30 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Alex Davies (rugby union) - UK rugby player. Bare references. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:41, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Filled references and added infobox. Now someone needs to fill the infobox :) Sorry, I am not a rugby fan. :) -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:49, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up infobox and added career stats. Clembathon (talk) 11:27, 27 September 2018 (UTC)


 * Mental health in the United Kingdom – cleanup with neutrality and tone/style. Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  03:57, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Janni Lee Simner - US author. Lead section too long. Bullets need to be in prose as well --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:05, 25 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Shortened the lead section --Madds212 (talk) 20:11, 30 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Fix the Debt - US lobbying organization. "History" part could be shortened a lot. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:59, 25 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Laura Escudé – cleanup for an abundant amount of external links and an excessive amount of naming names of who this person has worked with. Needs to get rid of some of that fluff. Reads a bit like an ad. Not sure if everything in discography/performances is necessary for listing there. Notability tag is up and should be checked as well. Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  05:51, 24 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Drop shipping – cleanup for style and citations. Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  01:46, 22 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Struck. Article is in decent shape at this time. North America1000 15:26, 16 May 2019 (UTC)


 * History of Sarasota, Florida - An article that originally was part of Sarasota, Florida and then split off to its own article. However, multiple issues are present such as verifiable resources and flow of article. It might be hard to solidify the problems but doesn't hold to get this attempted. – TheGridExe  ( talk )  21:46, 21 August 2018 (UTC)
 * John Stroud (director) - British TV director and producer. Needs references improvement. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:54, 21 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Arse Elektronika - conference about the interactions between sex and technology. Needs more sources, copies directly from a primary source at one point, and needs formatting work.  Laurel Wreath of Victors  ‖ Speak 💬 ‖  20:02, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
 * I just removed the section that copies from a primary source because it restated another part of the article. The rest still needs work though.  Laurel Wreath of Victors ‖ Speak 💬 ‖  20:05, 20 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Sacred Microdistillery - UK distillery. Multiple cases of self-referencing. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:37, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
 * cleaned up a little--just a little  DGG ( talk ) 06:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Saunders Schultz - American sculptor. Lead section too long, the text need shortening and better references. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:26, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
 * remove excess naming & minor cleanup for article. &sub; Emoteplump ( Contributions ) ( Talk )  12:20, 26 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Chidhumo and Masendeke – requires a restructuring of the formatting, sentence structure, etc. Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  03:33, 18 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Sycamore Partners - investment company. Low-quality references (press-releases). -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:48, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
 * John Ashley (actor) - Bare URLs and source formatting needed. Tinton5 (talk) 04:29, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
 * added bare url tag so problem will be solved in no time. &sub; Emoteplump ( Contributions ) ( Talk )  12:44, 26 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Elvis Duran - needs overhaul with punctuation, addition of sources, and general other clean up. Tinton5 (talk) 04:24, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Hot sauce - Reads more like a list and outline than an article. More citations and lead improvement as well. AmericanAir88 (talk) 21:16, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
 * I removed most of the bullets but I am unsure if I should remove them in the final section. --Madds212 (talk) 17:25, 21 September 2018 (UTC)


 * Kids Code Jeunesse - Canadian non-profit organization. Lead section is too long (almost an article itself), promotional. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:03, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Lavanya Vemsani - Indian scientist. Lead section too long, some content needs shortening. Also added notability tag. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 05:17, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
 * James William Hipp - US music educator. The article has bare references. The content needs to be shortened a bit. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:28, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the above. No bare urls as of this post. North America1000 15:33, 16 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Anatoly Rubin - A survivor of the Holocaust and later of the Gulags. Some NPOV cleanup is needed. This article may require copy editing for Spelling and grammar. Karny.rubin (talk) 15:58, 2 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Still requires a lot of cleanup but I've started. Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  00:34, 6 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Initiatives to prevent sexual violence - the section "Prevention programs", specifically, seems to have some copy/paste information, and is just excessively long. Rosalina2427   (talk to me)  22:17, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Sunil Wadhwani - COI issue. But the guy is a billionaire, and the article is substantial. Kindly vet - MakersBreath (talk) 07:42, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
 * It is a draft, so why bother? -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:49, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
 * From what I can tell, it was an article, but got moved into a draft instead of being put on Cleanup. I want to take a crack at fixing it up and pushing it back live, but I'm not sure if I'm permitted to try. Looks interesting though given his status as an entrepreneur and brother of another prominent billionaire. Your thoughts, Bbarmadillo? -- MakersBreath (talk) 11:30, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Well, given the undisclosed conflict of interest it cannot/should not be moved to main space directly, but should go through the WP:AFC. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:33, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
 * I may be inferring this incorrectly; I apologize if I am, but does this mean that me or any other editor who might be interested in this draft must create the article afresh? If so, then wouldn't that fall under duplicacy? Again, I'm sorry if I sound stupid about this. -- MakersBreath (talk) 05:13, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 * I've given it a positive once over. Cleaned it, made it live. But this still requires a second look, preferably from a different set of eyes. If anyone is up for it, kindly do take it up. In the meanwhile, I'll be working on this simultaneously as well. Thanks, MakersBreath (talk) 04:32, 20 August 2018 (UTC)

September 2018

 * Timeline of the 2018 Nicaraguan protests - copy-editing (I think?), grammar, capitalization, format. Image2012 (talk) 13:46, 30 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Information To Every One (i2e1) - Indian Wi-Fi provider. Promotional, contains in-text links to LinkedIn and suffers from WP:CITEKILL. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:07, 25 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Road signs in the United States - clean up needed, formatting, addition of sources, captions for pictures need fixing, consistency, etc. Also, a few signs are missing from sections that should be included, from this list (lodging and recreational signage) Tinton5 (talk) 04:11, 25 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Began working on making sure everything is consistent, fixing image captions and adding new signs slowly. -- Boilermakerjustin (talk) 05:31, 1 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Eros Music - Indian music studio. Needs references improvement (incl. removing self-referencing). -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 14:08, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
 * SCORPION program - US military research initiative. Needs shortening. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 22:27, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Could someone please review Gary J. Goldberg entry and ensure it complies with Wikipedia content policies? I saw the notice while updating his current positions (and correcting a broken citation.) Thanks. K Wyatt at Works Design Communications (talk) 21:34, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Did some basic cleanup, but a think that the article is a candidate for deletion. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 16:30, 16 September 2018 (UTC)


 * Antisemitism in the UK Labour Party – issues relating to prose and scope have been mentioned on the talk page ad nauseum by editors on one side or another (FWIW, I'm including myself in that). NPOV cleanup and RS cleanup is needed by uninvolved editors. --Bangalamania (talk) 17:55, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Praniti need clean up. Already about more than two weeks.help to Clean up and please remove those tags. ATK55   talk  12:15, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
 * fixed some issues. There are 3 YouTube links at the article that need proper template. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:06, 16 September 2018 (UTC)


 * Age of consent reform in the United Kingdom – seems a notable topic but there seems to be some issues with scope and the tone of the article. A number of long-standing issues raised on the talk page. --Bangalamania (talk) 14:31, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Greenwich Entertainment - US independent film distribution company. Highly promotional. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:14, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
 * IllumiNations – Very long and poorly done. AmericanAir88(talk) 02:59, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
 * didn't get any editing done, but I found an article very similar to it IllumiNations: Reflections of Earth --via (talk) 02:39, 21 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Srinagarindra – lots of fluff and POV problems with not sources for large chunks of fluff text whatsoever. --Killuminator (talk) 21:14, 6 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Shah Inayat Shaheed – major grammar and POV cleanup. Almost sounds like a fervent fan wrote it. Edit: FLUFF everywhere. Rosalina2427  (talk to me) 20:53, 6 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Yxng Dxnzl – Nigerian rap album. Highly promotional. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:57, 6 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed some of the promotional writing in there, and removed an unnecessary section --via (talk) 02:47, 21 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Hartford Fire Department, clean up needed. Rosalina2427  (talk to me) 20:35, 4 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Yonkers Fire Department, clean up needed, layout, grammar, etc. Tinton5 (talk) 05:32, 4 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Hellenic Parliament – Need help on how to organise and clean/rewrite this page, it has been taken over by some massive additions [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hellenic_Parliament&type=revision&diff=557286766&oldid=555041724&diffmode=source in 2014] on parliamentary procedure to the degree that it is sterile and unnecessarily detailed. --Michail (blah) 00:40, 4 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Whipping Post (song) – The song is probably notable enough but much of the article, in particular the section "At Fillmore East version" is written with a very journalistic tone. I'm tempted to say that that section justifies blanking per "What Wikipedia is not" but hesitant to go out on a limb and do so without some consensus Ichigoichigo (talk) 12:24, 3 September 2018 (UTC)

December 2018

 * Baggage handling system – Needs refs and a rework. AmericanAir88(talk) 02:42, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Tinton5 (talk) 01:11, 29 March 2019 (UTC)

Others

 * Ethnocentrism — Garbled syntax throughout is the main concern; see talk page. — ℜ ob C. alias ALAROB 16:51, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ - not by me, but syntax issues are resolved Nosebagbear (talk) 23:34, 15 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Voice acting in South Korea – Been on the cleanup list for 10 years and is in critical condition. AmericanAir88(talk) 19:16, 26 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I submit that the topic has weak notability of its own and the article does not attempt to assert any notability for the topic or any of the listed events. I have PRODded the article with this argument and we'll see if anything happens. --- <b style="color: DarkOrchid"> DOOMSDAYER 520</b> (Talk&#124;Contribs) 21:16, 27 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I believe taking it to AFD is a better route. If the PROD is removed then I will take it to AFD. I agree with you.</S> <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 00:48, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Article was deleted today. --- <b style="color: DarkOrchid"> DOOMSDAYER 520</b> (Talk&#124;Contribs) 00:19, 4 January 2019 (UTC)


 * State Transport Leasing Company – Russian state-owned company. The article is too long and reads like a press-release or a brochure. Needs shortening and proper referencing. I did some basic cleanup, but it needs more effort. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 23:25, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
 * ❌ per Articles for deletion/State Transport Leasing Company. North America1000 20:54, 26 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Draft:Ellis Island: The Making of A Master Race in America (film) :clean up needed; please help to create and review short article. Adamme18
 * Note This is a draft of an article. <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 21:03, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
 * ❌ This article has failed the review and is still in draft space.


 * Zipline International Inc. – medical drones company. I did some basic cleanup, but more work is needed to remove promotional content and fine-tune the article. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:41, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ fixed by several editors. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:06, 22 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Bowling alley, expansion and globalization needed. Tinton5 (talk) 03:51, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Moved to WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests. Tinton5 (talk) 04:42, 26 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Walker & Dunlop – US real estate company. References could be improved a bit. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 22:00, 23 December 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 01:02, 29 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Zakariya Mohammed – Indian film director. I did a basic cleanup, but more effort is needed. To do: a) remove unreferenced facts and trivia, b) expand references and fix errors, c) remove references from the lead section, d) remove unnecessary references per WP:CITEKILL. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:00, 23 December 2018 (UTC)
 * ❌ per WP:G5. North America1000 15:01, 4 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Urvashi Rautela – Needs shortening and a bit of a cleanup Shringhringshring (talk) 19:55, 23 December 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Shringhringshring (talk) 16:34, 8 January 2019 (UTC)


 * List of structures built on top of freeways – bare URL in references. Tinton5 (talk) 19:56, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 08:58, 16 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Topanga, California - some bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 08:12, 13 January 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 23:47, 13 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Spoon Guru Limited - British nutrition company. The article is promotional, suffers from WP:OVERKILL and needs references improvement. The article was created by a blocked account but the subject is definitely notable. I did some basic improvements. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 22:20, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 * ❌ per WP:G5. North America1000 17:06, 11 January 2019 (UTC)


 * MC Asawana - Nigerian comedian. Promotional language (i.e. "where he has met and interviewed almost every Nigerian celebrity one can think of"). References need cleanup and formatting. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:41, 25 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Was moved to draft namespace, with edit summary stating, "Moved undisclosed paid editing back to draft". North America1000 15:03, 4 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Marion's Piazza – References defined multiple times with different content. North America1000 16:32, 8 January 2019 (UTC)
 * The article was cleaned-up by . North America1000 03:42, 9 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Nancy Snow (academic) - US book author. References are a total mess, some of them should go to cite book template, describing her works. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:24, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Fixed the references and the publications section. --Chumash11 (talk) 20:27, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Bajo Hondo – A new article that would benefit from reference cleanup and formatting. North America1000 00:21, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed references, but it still needs grammatical cleanup. Syntaxlord (talk) 04:30, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Fixed up the grammar quite a bit, although the article as a whole could still use a bit more work. -- LichWizard  talk  18:47, 14 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Steve Oroho - bare URLs Tinton5 (talk) 06:52, 21 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 00:26, 22 February 2019 (UTC)


 * <William M. Cox - bare URLS, etc. Tinton5 (talk) 06:18, 21 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 00:08, 22 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Cinnamon roll – Reference errors need cleaning-up. North America1000 14:14, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
 * by . North America1000 02:56, 16 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Cooley Dickinson Hospital – Page is in serious need of reorganization and formatting, and is tagged as such. North America1000 04:29, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
 * I created an infobox and a table of contents. Syntaxlord (talk) 16:16, 10 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Nasal septum deviation – a poor section in a relatively important medical article. --Hildeoc (talk) 15:22, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
 * by TylerDurden8823. Syntaxlord (talk) 01:25, 19 February 2019 (UTC)


 * List of members of the United States Senate – Reference errors: named references invoked but not defined. North America1000 06:02, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
 * <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 03:59, 23 February 2019 (UTC)


 * List of shopping malls in India – Over-extended images at the end of the article could use consolidation into a gallery. North America1000 05:09, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 22:19, 5 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Spanish Empire – For some reason, the sfn-links don't work. --Hildeoc (talk) 18:42, 4 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ They didn't work because they were linking to references that weren't on the page. I've copied and pasted the references they refer to. A garbage person (talk) 23:49, 6 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Assassination of Martin Luther King Jr. – For some reason, the sfn-links don't work. --Hildeoc (talk) 18:42, 4 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ The sfn's weren't working because they need to hook onto a defined "ref" field, which the sources you were trying to link to didn't have. For example, "|ref=harv" or "|ref=&#123;&#123;harvid|Sample Harv Id|year&#125;&#125;". I've gone and added "|ref=harv" to the end of all the works in the Sources section. For more about short footnotes, I'd look at the template documentation, especially the How to use it section. A garbage person (talk) 23:49, 6 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Fighting Gravity – It looks as though information was plastered on here with no care for organization. -- Lacon432 (talk) 08:09, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Syntaxlord (talk) 02:50, 5 February 2019 (UTC)


 * A thoke – Over-extended images could use consolidation into a gallery . North America1000 11:06, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 15:48, 2 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Woodbridge Securities – US Ponzi scheme. Bare URLs at references. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:27, 23 December 2018 (UTC)
 * - I added the "Bare URLs" tag to the article, which notifies a team of bots and humans that usually fix that particular problem without delay. So that issue is in good hands but I wonder about the topic's notability. --- <b style="color: DarkOrchid"> DOOMSDAYER 520</b> (Talk&#124;Contribs) 21:12, 27 December 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ by various editors/bots & someone already explained its notability. &sub; Emoteplump ( Contributions ) ( Talk )  11:46, 26 January 2019 (UTC)


 * List of The Rising of the Shield Hero episodes - This is an anime series episode page. All I ask is someone here to trim down the episode summaries as per MOS:A&M. Thanks in advance. Sincerely,  Masum Reza  talk 11:32, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅Plum3600 (talk) 13:15, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks again. Sincerely,    <i style="color:#087643;font-face:arial;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.2em 0.4em;">Masum Reza</i> <sup style="color:orange;">☎  14:22, 26 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Sheck Wes - bare URLs and error reference Tinton5 (talk) 06:54, 21 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 21:39, 24 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Rosetta Allan page - has warning of work put up for payment, which isn't true. I tried to put an author photo up, and Wikipedia's questions were angled toward copywrite issues that got confusing, so the photo was rejected, and I think this has caused the problem. I don't mind not having the photo up, but the warning sign looks bad. Can someone clean this page? Thank you. Rosetta Allan. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Poetryrose (talk • contribs)
 * – Work put up for payment warning has been replaced with an NPOV autobiography warning. Syntaxlord (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2019 (UTC)


 * List of shipwrecks in the Great Lakes – Minor layout errors in some of the tables in the article. North America1000 15:59, 6 February 2019 (UTC)
 * -Stelio (talk) 13:17, 25 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Timeline of United States history, formatting problems (inconsistent table formatting, rowspan problems, etc.) &sub; Emoteplump ( Contributions ) ( Talk )  13:33, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
 * This has been resolved by replacing the entire page with a redirect to a category containing individual pages. -Stelio (talk) 12:46, 25 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Apartment hotel, Bare URLs in references . Tinton5 (talk) 09:18, 29 January 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ I did some basic formatting, but the references might need some more work. Syntaxlord (talk) 22:27, 31 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Perfume (Japanese band) - Japanese musical girl group. Lots of stylized capitalization used in article. lullabying (talk) 19:39, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ There wasn't any capitalisation used in the article.Plum3600 (talk) 13:43, 26 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Cibus - food exhibition in Parma. Probably notable, but requires strong cleanup. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:32, 2 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ Article was deleted. -- LichWizard  talk  20:02, 4 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Peking University Marxist Society - clean up needed. Tinton5 (talk) 06:38, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 23:58, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Lizzy Greene - bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 04:48, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ 23:55, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Big Three (colleges) - some bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 04:13, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 23:53, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Deer–vehicle collisions - some bare URLs and minor references style clean up needed. Tinton5 (talk) 05:04, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Anba Suriel - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 03:57, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 09:03, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Ava Max - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 00:46, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ 23:51, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Tommy McCabe - bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 04:25, 11 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 03:37, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Snow emergency - bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 04:20, 11 March 2019 (UTC)
 * by User:AmericanAir88. North America1000 09:04, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * El Bananero - bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 01:42, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Tagged "linkrot" for the automatic bare URLs fix. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:47, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ --Bbarmadillo (talk) 16:25, 24 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Vidfish – " Requires a secondary editor to reduce conflict of interest. Amie Hu1000 14:53, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Usedtobecool (talk) 22:06, 29 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Nupla Khang – References need formatting. North America1000 10:23, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 18:54, 27 March 2019 (UTC)


 * List of juices – The table layout is ambiguous, and the table headers are repeated for no reason . Would benefit from alphabetical organization into one solid table with one set of headers. North America1000 19:52, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Deleted the repeating headers. -- LichWizard  talk  21:15, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Struck part of my post above. North America1000 07:26, 11 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Vegetable juice is missing from the list. Tinton5 (talk) 04:01, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Added Vegetable juice to the list. I'll try to alphabetize it when I get a chance. -- LichWizard   talk  19:36, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅. Thanks to everyone who helped out to improve the article. alphabetized the list, so I have now struck the rest of my nomination above. North America1000 16:09, 29 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Burger King – Some bare urls and an issue with a named reference being invoked but not defined. North America1000 19:15, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 21:57, 12 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Formfit - bare URL in reference section. Tinton5 (talk) 20:09, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
 * . attempted to restore the dead link, wasn't able to do so and removed it, and I formatted the remaining link that was in the article body as a reference. No bare urls exist at this time. North America1000 07:25, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Air Jordan - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:12, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 01:36, 11 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Benny (slang) - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 07:06, 21 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Syntaxlord (talk) 21:53, 21 April 2019 (UTC)


 * List of The Quintessential Quintuplets characters - It seems that the page has grammatical issues. Wording is bad too. Sincerely,    <i style="color:#087643;font-face:arial;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.2em 0.4em;">Masum Reza</i> <sup style="color:orange;">☎  13:53, 20 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed by other editors. Sincerely,    <i style="color:#087643;font-face:arial;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.2em 0.4em;">Masum Reza</i> <sup style="color:orange;">☎  03:40, 27 April 2019 (UTC)

Syntaxlord (talk) 19:44, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Christopher Ferry - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 05:43, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I don't know if I should mark this as Not Done or Partly Done. I was able to format some bare URLs, but refs 17 and 28 are dead links that couldn't be fixed with the fix dead links tool. Additionally, this is a very short article that is definitely stub-class, but it has 34 references, three of which are not in English.
 * ✅ I marked the dead links. No bare URLs are currently found. Tinton5 (talk) 01:16, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Long Beach Island - some bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 04:19, 16 March 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 16:51, 16 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Self-storage box - this article is very poorly written. The grammar is wonky, one of the section titles appears to have been written like a computer code statement, and the sources used aren't great.
 * Fixed some grammatical errors InvisibleUp (talk) 15:28, 23 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ by Jerome Paterson (talk) 09:42, 13 May 2019 (UTC) fixed some of the grammar and added some references.


 * Transmembrane protein 151A – Has an unclear citation style, and also errors in the references section. North America1000 18:07, 23 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed reference errors Syntaxlord (talk) 19:00, 23 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Fixed all reference styles and added archives. Sincerely,    <i style="color:#087643;font-face:arial;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.2em 0.4em;">Masum Reza</i> <sup style="color:orange;">☎  04:39, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Rain and snow mixed - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 13:56, 13 June 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 15:10, 13 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Kottayam district - The bottom of the page is a complete mess. It seems to have something to do with what someone was trying to do with columns. I am not familiar enough with the syntax of this to fix. --SVTCobra (talk) 23:30, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 05:34, 6 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Natalie Enright Jerger, bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:39, 4 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Syntaxlord (talk) 14:55, 11 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Seven Wonders of Romania – Would benefit from image layout cleanup, such as moving images into a consolidated gallery, table formatting and layout, and general layout/cleanup improvements. North America1000 11:09, 1 June 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Has been addressed. North America1000 05:36, 6 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Milton Berle - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:27, 20 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 01:16, 28 May 2019 (UTC)


 * John Saxon - the television section should be in table format like the film section. Lacon432 (talk) 05:42, 20 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 14:00, 21 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Harbor Square, some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:37, 19 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 14:27, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

- I've made edits to fix it partly. Would be great if anyone else can check to verify --Castdates (talk) 08:02, 20 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Barkha Sharma - Have removed irrelevant information & cite links and cleaned up the article for neutral tonality. Please check and help finish the cleanup process. Castdates (talk) 12:10, 15 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅--Castdates (talk) 04:13, 28 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Rolling distribution - Some references are outdated or not available anymore; Section "Common myths, misconceptions" seems un-encyclopaedic (delete? then merge?) --Brevity (talk) 15:54, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ --Brevity (talk) 07:22, 18 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Mueller Report, some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 02:19, 4 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Syntaxlord (talk) 00:01, 7 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Port of Camden - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 01:14, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ I was able to format most of the URLs, but I had to mark one dead link. Syntaxlord (talk) 21:40, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Trampoline, bare URLs in some references. Tinton5 (talk) 07:16, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
 * (by another user). North America1000 15:20, 8 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Wonka Bar, bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:57, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 13:20, 6 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Traffic stop, bare URLs in some references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:43, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
 * (by another user). North America1000 15:20, 8 July 2019 (UTC)


 * All-way stop, bare URLs in some references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:39, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
 * (by another user). North America1000 15:20, 8 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Darko Gasic, grammar needs improvement; consider adding diacritics to name ("Gašić") and moving page accordingly Paul G (talk) 06:18, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Fan Yang (artist), a few bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 01:07, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 12:39, 5 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Santita Jackson, bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 02:12, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 19:34, 10 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Kaitlan Collins, bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 02:56, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
 * . North America1000 12:50, 5 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Atlantic City, New Jersey, footnote # 2 in references section has error. Tinton5 (talk) 04:37, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
 * (by another user). Tinton5 (talk) 04:22, 10 July 2019 (UTC)


 * New York State Route 231, a couple of bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:40, 10 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ by myself and other editors. <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 19:09, 10 July 2019 (UTC)


 * One World with Deepak Chopra, General Cleanup needed
 * Improved writing and marked dead link. Syntaxlord (talk) 19:20, 9 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Nivedita Singh Chandel, This article is not paid but someone has marked it as paid article so please do a clean up. General Cleanup needed User:aryanshukla87 (talk) 13:35, 30 june 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌. The article was deleted per WP:A7. North America1000 12:54, 5 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Highlands Army Air Defense Site, bare URLs in references and clean up needed. Tinton5 (talk) 05:42, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ by various users. Tinton5 (talk) 01:32, 3 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Rob Ryan (entrepreneur) – This article needs some serious cleanup and the refs are just links. X-Editor (talk) 04:16, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ by SVTCobra. <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 14:00, 19 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Guided rat, bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 07:06, 14 June 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 01:19, 3 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Prosoft Engineering - I have disclosed my affiliation with said company and would like the page to be reviewed. If an unbiased Wikipedian can go over the page as well to make sure that the page is read with no bias to conform with Wikipedias guide lines. --Sam3077 (talk) 19:27, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ per AFD. <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 19:15, 10 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Glen Bredon – Format a mess. Ernstblumberg (talk) 11:13, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
 * - Improved several references and added basic infobox. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:56, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I've struck the above entry. The article is properly formatted at this time. North America1000 06:44, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Centenary University, formatting and source formatting need some clean up. Tinton5 (talk) 03:02, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed visual formatting and removed repeat wikilinks. Source formatting may still need cleanup --Madds212 (talk) 17:36, 21 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Struck the above. The sources and formatting are in good shape at this time. North America1000 05:47, 17 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Craig_Jones_(Royal_Navy_officer) disclosure made on talk page following undisclosed paid edit tag applied to article Samcherry5 (talk)
 * ❌ Drafted. <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 13:56, 16 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Throat-clear - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 07:58, 25 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 16:42, 25 July 2019 (UTC)


 * The Solar Water Project - a US-based non-profit organization. Referencing is a total mess. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:27, 26 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ Drafted by DGG. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 05:48, 27 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Natwar Gandhi - former chief financial officer for the District of Columbia. The article needs a bit of general cleanup. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:56, 26 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:35, 3 August 2019 (UTC)


 * Fabio Panzeri - Italian fashion designer. Doesn't have inline citations, also need a general cleanup to fix style and turn to prose (vs. list). --Bbarmadillo (talk) 09:12, 21 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ by per WP:G11. North America1000 03:25, 2 August 2019 (UTC)


 * Findomeet - findomeet social network- (not a deletion candidate). i have cleaned up. ,Bachspin (talk) 14:35, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Drafted byBachspin (talk) 14:36, 2 August 2019 (UTC)