Wikipedia:Featured article review/Mumia Abu-Jamal/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Casliber via FACBot (talk) 2:16, 2 December 2018 (UTC).

Mumia Abu-Jamal

 * Notified: WikiProject Philadelphia, WikiProject Crime and Criminal Biography, WikiProject Civil Rights Movement

I nominated this article for featured article status (only archive4 and after, not the previous times), but I've come to the realization that the nomination was a mistake. As detailed at Talk:Mumia Abu-Jamal/Archive 4 and Talk:Mumia Abu-Jamal/Archive 3 almost the entirety of the promoted version was sourced from primary sources, because secondary sources are almost always grossly partisan. The prose of the article has since suffered and it now consists of short stubby paragraphs and sections. I no longer believe that this article meets criteria 1a, 1c, or 2b. There are also problems with 1d (the article is now skewed to a more pro-Mumia viewpoint) and 3 (see ). As previously indicated, the article is not maintained. DrKay (talk) 16:24, 11 October 2018 (UTC)

Review section
See above. Moved to FARC. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:46, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

FARC section
Choppy paras - prose, comprehensiveness and POV issues. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:46, 25 October 2018 (UTC) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:16, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Delist. Problems remain. No substantial changes since the review opened. DrKay (talk) 11:58, 3 November 2018 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.