Talk:2008 Bathurst Boys in Red accident

Reliable sources
I have stated both CBC and CTV articles at the bottom of the page. Are they not reliable? --Kuzwa (talk) 17:45, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

Thank you for the formatting im not good with that kind of thing. :[ --Kuzwa (talk) 17:49, 12 January 2008 (UTC)


 * (edit conflict) They are reliable, yes. Inline citations would be nice, they are pretty imperative on these breaking-news type stories. On the other hand, Wikipedia is not a news service, and I am not sure about lasting notability of this incident. Maybe it deserves a mention on the article on the school, but I am not convinced about it having its own article. On the other hand, maybe this is a more serious incident than it appears- yes, it's tragic, and yes, I am sure it will make local and probably national (though I doubt international) news, but does it really warrant an encyclopedia entry? I think not. J Milburn (talk) 17:51, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

This will probably lead to changes in sports across the province. Generally basketball tournaments in this province are not cancelled due to weather related phenomenon. After this though that will probably change. But it remains to be seen. --Kuzwa (talk) 17:52, 12 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, I have watchlisted the article. I will reassess it in a couple of days- I may take it to AfD or not, depending on how much attention the story seems to recieve. J Milburn (talk) 17:55, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

Just doing some research on the route. Route 11 is apparently one of the most dangerous routes in the province. There has been lots of argument in the New Brunswick legislature over the condition of roads in this province. This event may pressure the government into repairing these roads. --Kuzwa (talk) 18:13, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

Clarify?
The CTV article states that the female teacher that was killed was the driver. While the CBC article says she was the wife of the driver. Can anyone clarify? Was she not the specified driver but was driving these people? --Kuzwa (talk) 01:24, 13 January 2008 (UTC)

Answer: The driver was the coach of the team - he survived. His wife was a passenger. -- DCouprie —Preceding comment was added at 19:27, 16 January 2008 (UTC)

To-do's

 * More citations, proper referencing
 * Cleanup grammar check
 * Wikify
 * Expansion on the Reaction and Aftermath sections.

--Kuzwa (talk) 16:25, 25 October 2008 (UTC)

Boys in Red Tragedy request for feedback and response
Hi. I am a rather inexperienced editor here on Wikipedia and this is the first article I have done major expansion too. I was wondering if I could get some pointers/comments on a few things.


 * 1) Writing - This tends to be me weak point. I would much appreciate feedback on my writing style and the flurry of grammar and spelling mistakes in the article!
 * 2) Referencing - Am I referencing everything correctly, are some of my references not reliable?
 * 3) Images - Is the Image:2008 Bathurst Crash.PNG free to use? What is the status on images created by the Canadian government?
 * 4) Name - Is the name of the article appropriate or should it be changed back to 2008 Bathurst van collision?

Thanks in advance. --Kuzwa (talk) 20:26, 29 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Considering the difficulty of the subject matter, you've succeeded in several respects. The overall result is hardly one that will draw serious editorial criticism.


 * 1) Most of the writing comments would relate to small matters, such as using "October" in one place and "Oct." in another, a hyphen in one place, and an en-dash in another. I.e., things so trivial they might not be noticed.


 * 2) The references are complete enough in detail and in whole. The reputability of the sources is fine.


 * 3) I'm not an expert on TV image copyright, however I think your suspicion is correct, that photo is not available for free use. The justification doesn't seem strong, or correctly couched. This is worth mentioning, because your justifications for your own photos might excite some attention as well because, for example, they lack a description. It's worth knowing that there is a group in Wikipedia that feels many existing photos should be removed; for their sake, if nothing else, it's worth following the "letter of the law" as closely as possible. I don't know that my justification for this photo is perfect, but to this point, I've never had my photo uploads challenged.


 * 4) The article name is fine. If there is another common name people use to search for it, a redirect link can be created.


 * There are two other somewhat important issues with the article. Although this article neatly ties in accident data, social implications, and legislative responses, there are still places where it reads like a memorial piece, and this generally unsuitable for Wikipedia. (Consult withWP:NOT.) An encyclopedia is not a suitable place to express one's grief. Although they read well, sentences such as "Cleland's parents stated that the boys were laughing and having a good time." are questionable (unless somehow, the boys' state was related to the cause of the accident, for example). The details of the funeral are similar. The tributes on Facebook and YouTube are also pretty much out-of-place in Wiki, in part because issues can arise with Facebook and YouTube links. The External Link to the Facebook tribute is not correct and should be deleted, for several reasons described in WP:LINKSTOAVOID.


 * The other comment is easy to fix, and you'll probably find it to your convenience if you do much Wiki editing, which is that it's better to make several changes to an article, then "save" once. Otherwise it creates a complicated editing history that is difficult for later editors to work with. On Oct. 30, for example you made a couple dozen changes in about an hour. When I have changes that complicated, I use "Show preview" -- and also cut-and-paste a copy of my work-in-process to my computer, in case something goes wrong with the edit.


 * But all-in-all, it's a worthwhile article. Except for the last point, if you hadn't mentioned you were an inexperienced editor, I wouldn't have guessed it. Hope to see more of your work! Alpha Ralpha Boulevard (talk) 06:24, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

About the article title
Why does the name have "tragedy" in it? Is it the commonly accepted name for the incident, or is only the "Boys in Red" the common name? Why don't we have "Boys in Red incident" or "Boys in Red disaster"? I hesitate about the use of the word "tragedy" - We do not use that word to describe other negative incidents and with other malicious people. Why is the word used in this incident? WhisperToMe (talk) 06:11, 20 November 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm not totally opposed to switching the article name to Boys in Red accident or Boys in Red incident. I'd hesitate to use the term "disaster" though it's true that many news sources have called the crash such a thing. According to an historical survey a disaster is defined as a "single event, occurring at one time (no more than the order of a few days), within Canadian (and Newfoundland, before 1949) territory out to the 200-mile economic zone offshore, in which loss of life was 20 or more persons." I therefore assumed that disaster in the title by a Canadian context would be a little extreme. Anyways discuss. --Kuzwa (talk) 11:52, 20 November 2008 (UTC)


 * The article has now been moved to Boys in Red accident. --Kuzwa (talk) 04:51, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

Picture
Do we really need that picture of the destroyed vehicle there? It seems insensitive to me. --Quadraxis (talk) 23:15, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

Insensitve how so? The image is currently used as the main means of visual identification of the subject or in simpler terms the image which shows/represents the accident scene. --Kuzwa (talk) 00:35, 29 January 2009 (UTC)

Request for copyedit
At the direct request of the main author I have skimmed the article and put a copyedit tag on it. If no one else copyedits it within the next seven days I'll do it myself. It's already rated as a Good article so it shouldn't need much work. DQweny (talk) 22:25, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * The article was copyedited by the original author with some input from me, and the copyedit tag removed. DQweny (talk) 18:54, 19 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I think that minor cleanup is really all that is stopping this article from FA. Thanks again! =) --Kuzwa (talk) 19:00, 19 October 2009 (UTC)

Atlantic Wholesalers and Loblaws lawsuit
This needs some context: the cause of action isn't explained in the relevant section, and neither plaintiff is mentioned anywhere else in the article, so the reader can't infer anything. Steve Smith (talk) 00:35, 13 January 2010 (UTC)


 * To be honest, no one in this province understood why they were suing at all, it's almost as if they didn't have a reason. --Kuzwa (talk) 22:54, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

12 years later, this confused me as well, because nothing had been updated. It took one simple search to confirm that the companies in question owned the truck. So much for “they didn’t have a reason.” I added a few words to the section to clarify.  PacificBoy  00:16, 22 January 2022 (UTC)

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