Talk:Benin Altar Tusk

How many tusks are there?
The article refers both to the "The Benin Altar Tusk" and to various different "Benin Altar Tusks" and different samples. It should be made clear whether there is just one Benin Altar Tusk or whether there are multiple Benin Altar Tusks and if so how many. The article is very confusing on this matter. Willbb234 13:51, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * @Willbb234 There are several Benin Altar Tusks. These tusks were only in Benin before the Benin expedition, but after the expedition, they scattered all over the world. The tusks are currently present in many museums all over the world. Museums like the ones mentioned in the article all have it. There are also many Benin Altar Tusk in Benin City that are used on ancestral altars.
 * How does this sound? Vanderwaalforces (talk) 10:43, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I was more thinking that the article needs some copyediting. For example, the first sentence heavily implies that there is just one tusk: The Benin Altar Tusk, referred to as Aken’ni Elao in the Edo language, is an ivory artefact with historical, cultural, and religious significance. Emphasis on the words that have this effect. The Provenance section also has this effect. Willbb234 16:12, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @Willbb234 I have some copy-edit in mind too, but, can you do some when you can?
 * I had same thoughts actually. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 17:59, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @Willbb234 Hi there, it's been a while. Perhaps, this is no longer a problem :) Vanderwaalforces (talk) 22:34, 28 December 2023 (UTC)

I’ll take a look when I have time. The GA review seems thorough at first glance. Cheers, Willbb234 17:53, 29 December 2023 (UTC)