Talk:Chrisye

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WP:RS are needed to improve this article SatuSuro 12:55, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Fixed that. Crisco 1492 (talk) 17:02, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
 * There is still an incomplete sentence at the end of the second paragraph in Legacy section (His signature song "Lilin-Lilin Kecil...). Anyway, great job on expanding and referencing the article. — MT (talk) 14:48, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pointing that out. I don't even remember where I was going with that. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:52, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

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 * In this sentence "Though Chrisye has been described as "legendary", his on-stage persona has been described as "stiff", with very little movement" it would probably be a good idea to try to briefly specify who has described him this way. Mark Arsten (talk) 19:32, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:57, 4 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Not sure if you're aware, but the .ogg file in the third section is a redlink. Mark Arsten (talk) 20:30, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks like it was messed up by turning the hyphen into an ndash. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:57, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Doh! I really need to be more careful with my script toys! Mark Arsten (talk) 18:18, 5 January 2012 (UTC)


 * "Padang-style wedding", worth a redlink? Mark Arsten (talk) 19:09, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Hmm... perhaps, but referencing would be somewhat difficult for any resulting article.
 * That's too bad, but you're probably right. Mark Arsten (talk) 00:58, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
 * this was all I could find for English sources. Mark Arsten (talk) 01:00, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
 * LoL, I guess that takes priority over Yockie's article now that there's a nice online English reference available. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:51, 6 January 2012 (UTC)


 * "After Resesi, Chrisye collaborated with Djarot and Suryoprayogo again on the 1983 album Metropolitan. The album, drawing on New Wave influences and dealing mainly with issues facing youth, was well received, later going silver; the single "Selamat Jalan Kekasih" ("Goodbye Dear") also became a hit. That same year, Chrisye and Yanti had their first daughter, Rizkia Nurannisa. The following year, the trio collaborated again on Nona (Miss), which was full of social criticism; the album spawned four singles and went on to be certified platinum." This could be clarified a bit, after talking about the couple having a child you mention the trio releasing an album (since there are two trios mentioned in the paragraph). Mark Arsten (talk) 19:38, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
 * True enough. Gonna fix it. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:20, 6 January 2012 (UTC)


 * This made me laugh for some reason. I guess if he were protestant he would by definition not be pleased with the Catholic Church, so my changes were technically accurate :) I'm used to "the Church" meaning "the Catholic Church" for some reason.
 * I've yet to see his opinion on the Catholic church; Protestants and Catholics tend to get along here, so I doubt he had hard feelings towards it. BTW, perhaps we should change to "disillusioned" or something similar?
 * Interesting, I didn't know that.


 * "Chrisye immediately began work on his first album with Musica in May 1978, Sabda Alam (Nature's Order), choosing several songs submitted and writing others, including the title song." The part about "choosing several songs submitted" isn't quite clear to me, who submitted them?
 * Fellow songwriters; he doesn't go into much detail. I will probably reword that.


 * "Amin, after taking a deep breath, agreed to the condition." This might be ok, not sure if it is too much detail though.
 * Hmm... "hesitantly"?


 * "Released in Due in part to the popularity of the film, Puspa Indah was well received and sold well; "Galih dan Ratna" and "Gita Cinta", released as singles, were also well received." You have "well received" twice in that sentence, maybe it could be rephrased a bit? Mark Arsten (talk) 17:28, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Also successful? Crisco 1492 (talk) 21:26, 6 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Alright, last three fixes look fine. This will be a featured article in no time :) Mark Arsten (talk) 23:45, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Fingers crossed... Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:37, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

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