Talk:Climate change in Italy

Student assignment (May 2022)
We are a group of student from Uppsala University who have created the page regarding Climate change in Italy. Before it was simply a redirect from Climate of Italy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Belindapr (talk • contribs)
 * You've done a great job here. Some feedback:


 * I like your clever use of excerpts (although in some cases I found the excerpts too long and have shortened them).
 * I've also corrected the formatting of the section headings.
 * I have removed external links in the main text where I found them.
 * I also removed when you used Wikipedia as a reference (not allowed).
 * In some cases you forgot to add references - please see my "citation needed" tags. Some of those statements are general climate change statements (not specific for Italy) so you probably don't need those but it's always good to link to the related other articles, e.g. effects of climate change on human health.
 * I find you have used "we" a few times, perhaps check if you can eliminate the "we" statements.
 * I haven't checked through everything in detail but overall it looks very interesting! - I was surprised to read that Italy doesn't have a deforestation problem but one of too many forests (really?). Please hang around Wikipedia even after your course has finished and continue to do more editing. EMsmile (talk) 15:43, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for filling a gap in Wikipedia's climate change coverage by adding this major European country. if you act quickly (within 7 days of creating the article) you can submit this for the "did you know" section on the main page  Chidgk1 (talk) 15:20, 22 May 2022 (UTC)