Talk:Impetigore

Suggestions
Possible improvements for this article:

- Paragraphs in the lede could be reduced. See here.

- "On RogerEbert.com, Peter Sobczynski gave the film 3 ½ out of 5 stars, commending film's style and use of Indonesian folklore, but criticising some elements of the ending. He particularly highlighted the film's opening sequence, calling it "electrifying" and "absolutely spellbinding" I think Roger Ebert's website grades out of four stars.

- "In a more mixed review, James Marsh in South China Morning Post rated the film 2.5 out of 5 stars and said the film was "unevenly paced and fails to capitalise on its grisly premise", but praised Basro's performance.

Al Jazeera highlighted Impetigore as part of a new wave of low-budget folk horror films bringing attention to Southeast Asia's film industry, alongside Malaysian film Roh." Possibly merge these into one paragraph IMO.

- Some refs, like this, are all right, though there could be better refs from RT. Also, I checked some refs, and ref 3 couldn't be opened somehow.

These are minor issues still, if these are improved this would be a easy B-class. Many thanks! VickKiang (talk) 03:38, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Done all of these. Thanks so much for your input! Any further suggestions on how to make the lead more concise? And what would it take for this to be GA-class? Cheers Arcahaeoindris (talk) 09:15, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

- It might be just an error with my device, but I couldn’t open ref 15, so could you please check it?

- This is a very minor suggestion, though Variety also has some criticisms, including:

“the convoluted later mix of chase scenes and explanatory flashbacks feels more like an awkward pileup of miscellaneous genre tropes than an elegant (or terrifying) solution to a supernatural mystery.”

If this could be mentioned briefly, that would be great. I had a quick read at the other sections, and there are no big problems. For GA, IMO someone more into horror films could review this for you, as I am not an expert in this genre. Thanks! VickKiang (talk) 21:41, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks ! I have fixed ref 15 and added the Variety critique as suggested. No worries, I may submit for GA review at some point. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 12:34, 6 July 2022 (UTC)