User talk:Grayfell/Archive 10

Holtzclaw Page
I would like to update the Holtzclaw, but respectfully I will not be biased and always have 3rd-party references. I will only state information that is in the reference and not make any judgements of character or guilt or innocence in the text. There is much going on right now with the case. There are secret evidence and hearings and I would like to flesh out the information so it is accurate and not biased. Please show me where I said anything or insinuated anything about a witchhunt. Holtzclaw was arrested under those conditions. He was also found guilty by a panel of jurors.

Dlruthenberg (talk) 20:44, 31 August 2017 (UTC)


 * This is regarding this edit. Even if sources specifically mention Holtzclaw, which those did not, the connection would need to be neutrally explained as background, not as a direct cause, which was painfully obviously your intention. "...amidst racially charged civil unrest..." is extremely leading and extremely euphemistic. You provided no neutral rationale for introducing this lengthy section on a tangentially related event. A rape in Oklahoma is not comparable to a murder in Missouri unless reliable say they are, and we would have to be able to explain why that comparison is being made in a neutral way. The place to discuss this further is the article's talk page, not here. Grayfell (talk) 22:00, 31 August 2017 (UTC)

Neo-Nazism "Ableism and Antiziganism"
Ok. I took rid of these two hateful beliefs because like I said, Neo-Nazis usually doesn't talk negative about these certain group of people like they do with ethnic minorities like Blacks or Asians, Jews, Homosexuals, and Leftists. Yeah I actually did heard a White Power punk song about some fictional character who I think her name was "Mary" and the singer mentioned she have Down Syndrome, but despite this, Ableism is for the most part a rare topic for them to even bring up in both their Protesting and Music, along-side Antiziganism, which honestly why would they bring-up that like 24/7, like this was the targets of the original Nazis, but not these so-called "Modern" Nazis, plus when does these Gypsies even started getting attention during our current generation, like not the 70s, 80s, or 90s, but since like 2001, since 9/11. I just heard in Canada, there were Neo-Nazis protesting against Romani people but back in 1991. So really they might bring-up these groups for the sake of those from WWII, but really it more necessary to just have "Ultranationalism, Racism, Xenophobia, Homophobia, and Antisemitism", because those are what they mainly speaks up against people with. Ks159081 (talk) 12:51, 4 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Neo-Nazis hate disabled people. This is according to many reliable sources. Your opinion that they don't is original research. Your experience listening to some songs doesn't accurately represent larger larger movement. We need reliable sources. If you know of a reliable source which says neo-Nazi punks rarely sing about disabled people or Romani, let's see it. Sampling this music isn't good enough.
 * Neo-Nazis are, for the most part, angry and irrational. This includes neo-Nazi punks. If you're looking for ideological consistency from a small, non-random sample of neo-Nazi punks, you're going to be disappointed. They target whoever is convenient at the time, which includes Romani and disabled people. Anti-Romani sentiment and violence are still a very big deal among some neo-Nazi groups, such as in the Czech Republic. Just because you are not personally familiar with this, doesn't make it irrelevant. Isn't the point of Wikipedia to learn about things you are not personally familiar with?
 * The place to discuss this further is the article's talk page. Not here. Thanks. Grayfell (talk) 20:31, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

Sulekha
Hey Gary,

I have been editing the Sulekha page on Wiki and the content I posted twice for the about section has been rejected stating that it was promotional. However, I've removed the points which I felt was promotional and made the necessary changes You can find the edit below and could you please let me know if this is okay. If not, it would be great if you could let me know which of these points felt promotional.

"Sulekha, led by Param Parameswaran (Chairman) and Satya Prabhakar (CEO), is one of India’s largest and fastest growing digital platforms in the local services and listings ecosystem. Sulekha uses data and technology to match the needs of 30+ M users with 3+ M verified local service businesses across 40 cities and 500+ categories. Sulekha helps users find relevant local businesses across categories like coaching, home and office service, entertainment, health and wellness, moving and packing, and training. Sulekha understands the needs of users in detail and matches them to relevant, verified local businesses, thus reducing the time and hassle of finding a local service provider.

On the other hand, Sulekha helps SMEs grow their business by marketing their services in their city/locality and category to find targeted prospects.

Sulekha serves Indians in India and the US, and has operations across major cities in India. Sulekha’s four global investors are GIC (Singapore), Norwest Venture Partners (Palo Alto), Mitsui (Tokyo), and IMG (New York)."

Sorry in advance if this isn't the right way to do this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arvindl1989 (talk • contribs) 09:04, 5 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello. My name is not "Gary". I'm glad you're discussing this on a talk page, but please try to read this more carefully. Calling someone by a wrong name, when you have that name written down in front of you, is kind of rude.
 * This is important: read Conflict of interest. If you are being paid or compensated in any way for editing this article, such as by your employer or as a freelancer, you must disclose this: Paid-contribution disclosure. This is not optional, so please answer explaining that you understand. Disclose your conflict of interest, specifically paid editing, on your userpage (User:Arvindl1989).
 * The edits you have made are too promotional. Way, way too promotional. You are asking for specific points? The entire thing reads like an advertisement, not like an encyclopedic overview. As a starting point. try reading WP:BUZZWORD, but there are so many problems with this that's there's nothing salvageable to include in the article. The goal of Wikipedia isn't to sell people on Sulekha, it is to explain it neutrally from an outside perspective.
 * Again, please clarify your COI status before going any further, thanks. Grayfell (talk) 10:39, 5 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello. I apologize for that. It was a geniune mistake

continuing on Jason Innocent
Continuing Is settlepi considered a reliable source? Ip7 (talk) 05:56, 11 September 2017 (UTC)Ip7 (talk) 06:02, 11 September 2017 (UTC)

Whitewashing etc.
Hi Grayfell,

You've accused me of whitewashing. I'm sure it's a controversial article with people on one or both sides regularly trying to do... I don't know. But check my contributions: my global contribs

I don't edit articles about identitarianism or even about anything related.

Secondly, if you're going to revert, you need to give a reason. "Whitewashing" is not a reason. That would be like me reverting you and giving a summary of "Wrong!"

My edits came with an explanation in the edit summary *and* on the Talk page. I explained my edits because it was possible to justify them. If it's possible to justify your revert, then please explain it. Otherwise your revert should not stand.

And then you also reverted my edit about the Gurk article. Read the source. Gurk interviews the other guy. The other guy says (at the very end) that there's a risk that the nazis posing as identitarians online might make racism hip and modern. The text of the article is clearly wrong, but you reverted me because you somehow prefer the incorrect version. I'd be interested to hear your explanation (but you gave none, not in the edit summary, not on the Talk page). Great floors (talk) 22:49, 14 September 2017 (UTC)


 * "Both sides" is a red flag. This strongly indicates false balance. We are not interested in "both sides", as though both sides are equal, we are interested in due weight. The weight of many "sides" is that this is a white nationalist movement, and that's being generous with the euphemisms.
 * You've made about 700-800 edits. Okay. Each project has its own community, and I'm not interested in trying to assess edits for Wikipedia projects with different guidelines and standards without a very good reason.
 * Assuming good faith doesn't mean carefully looking over someone's contributions to see if their edit was ideologically acceptable, or if they are familiar with a topic. That's the opposite of assuming good faith, if you think about it. I do, I admit, check contributions for edits like this to see if they are part of a larger pattern of non-neutral edits or outright vandalism. I didn't see that in your case, but for that particular edit I would've reverted either way, so it wouldn't have mattered much.
 * Since the substance of both your edit and your talk page comments was to downplaying a defining trait of the Identitarian movement, this edit needed to be reverted. Your explanation on the talk page was flawed and insufficient, and another editor already explained this and proposed a compromise which you only partially responded to. There was no reason for me to add to it for that reason, but I have now done so, anyway, at your insistence.
 * What Gurk "worries" is not for us to explain. If you would like to more clearly attribute his opinions to him, do so in a more neutral tone, please. Grayfell (talk) 23:21, 14 September 2017 (UTC)

That was weird
Yea, I was undoing the IP user, its edit showed as the most recent when I did it, not yours. I may have started it, then stepped away for a minute. I dunno. The Gremlins. Thanks. :) TheValeyard (talk) 02:28, 16 September 2017 (UTC)


 * No biggie, I have had the same thing happen a few times. Grayfell (talk) 04:34, 16 September 2017 (UTC)

Edits to Alfresco (software)
I am not sure how you get notified of changes so I am adding a comment here. I have added 2 sections to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Alfresco_(software) to discuss what it will take to remove the tags. When you get a chance, please review them and respond. I am trying to improve that article after it was woefully out-of-date prior to my making edits and want to make sure that what is written is in compliance. Pie1120 (talk) 02:58, 19 September 2017 (UTC)


 * I have responded at the article's talk page. Grayfell (talk) 03:58, 19 September 2017 (UTC)

Reverted Birth Date - Tariq Nasheed
You rolled back the date of birth. It is noted in the copyright entry of one of his songs, as well as his real name (corrected - I stated Sanders, it's acually Thomas). You can hear it's him by actually listen to the song Bolt24 (talk) 10:19, 19 September 2017 (UTC)


 * That smells a lot like original research. If a reliable source doesn't spell it out, it doesn't belong. I don't accept that a routine entry in copyrightencyclopedia.com is reliable, nor is it useful for this point. The proper place to discuss this further is the article's talk page. Grayfell (talk) 21:48, 20 September 2017 (UTC)

Travis McHenry
Hello! Should we not reference Mary Bird Land as a way to prove the area he is claiming? I did not place the reference to reference McHenry. Please advise. Thanks! Geejayen (talk) 21:41, 20 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello. I'm confused, what's the Britannica source for? It doesn't mention him, or his micronation, so I'm not clear on what its purpose it. If this is the only way we can support that Marie Byrd Land is in the Antarctic, then we have a serious problem that a brief Britannica article on geography isn't going to solve. Actually, after looking at the few sources, the article needs a lot of work, so I'm going to post something on its talk page.
 * As a general rule of thumb, sources for WP:BLPs should specifically mention the person by name. This is just a rule of thumb, but using sources to support a point not actually made by those sources is synthesis. I hope that answers your question. Grayfell (talk) 22:05, 20 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello, Yes the Britannica article was an attempt to reference Mary Bird Land since it is the real name of the location he is claiming (Westarctica). I totally understand what you mean now. Thank you for clarifying and your insights. Yes the article needs a lot of work. I removed a lot of erroneous unsupported content as a start to making it better when I first discovered it. Geejayen (talk) 00:00, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

Cloud power
about Cloud Power (AirHES) - is Indiegogo link a reliable source like this? https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/cloud-power-clean-water-and-energy-from-clouds#/ Andrew Kazantsev (talk) 10:14, 21 September 2017 (UTC)
 * I've responded at User talk:Andrew Kazantsev. Grayfell (talk) 21:33, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

Andrew Kazantsev (talk) 05:13, 22 September 2017 (UTC) OK, thanks. But then, how can I message about this global solution for energy and water supply? Maybe my patent could be enough as reliable sources?
 * Please do not post the same messages to multiple talk pages. I will respond on your talk page, which is the same place I responded last time. Additionally, please sign your posts at the end, not at the beginning. Thank you. Grayfell (talk) 06:51, 22 September 2017 (UTC)

User Leysure
There is currently a discussion at Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding user:Leysure. The thread is User Leysure, WP:SPA for spamming. Jeh (talk) 10:06, 22 September 2017 (UTC)


 * p.s.: Wasn't there an earlier spate of these spam attempts from micsig, from a different username? I swear there was... but I can't find them now.

How was my edit about the 2017 Berkeley protests not neutral?
All I added was that there were riots. You can't deny that rioting took place. Nicholas S8 (talk) 08:03, 24 September 2017 (UTC)


 * No you didn't:
 * Side one: Conservative activists
 * This is euphemistic as hell.
 * Side two: Antifa
 * This is painfully obviously emphasizing the most controversial side while ignoring all the rest.
 * If you don't even admit or realize what you're doing, this conversation is over. If you want to make the case that riots -separate and distinct from "clashes"- were a defining trait of all of these protests taken together, you've got to find sources and get consensus for it. If you want to talk about this further, do it on the article's talk page, not here. Grayfell (talk) 08:25, 24 September 2017 (UTC)


 * by "conservative activists" I meant the conservative speakers whose presence at UC Berkeley has caused the riots
 * it put antifa as side two because they are the ones who started the violent protests against the speakers
 * here is just one of many source to prove that riots have taken place http://www.cnn.com/2017/02/01/us/milo-yiannopoulos-berkeley/index.html If you are really ignorant enough to not see any rioting during any of the Berkeley protests, then I'm truly sorry for you. Nicholas S8 (talk) 08:43, 24 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Yes, I'm sure you're extremely sorry for me. My inability to tell the difference between "clashes" and "riots", and my unwillingness to chose the more incendiary of the two, it keeps you up at night. Your sorrow burns with a thousand suns, undoubtedly.
 * Your argument completely ignores my point, and is fatally flawed anyway. I told you to get consensus at the article's talk page, not here, and I meant it. Grayfell (talk) 08:49, 24 September 2017 (UTC)

International House of Prayer
Mr. Greyfell, I work for the International House of Prayer and my department head has encouraged me to update our page. I see that I will need to study up as if I were creating a new page, since the site has not been updated since 2010, apparently. Just one question and then I'll study up: I emailed our registrar's office and got the latest figures on enrollment at our school. What better source could that be? Do I need to wait for someone in the independent press to write a news story on our enrollment in order to get it updated? I am not intending to be contrary, I simply do not understand the ropes here. ElizabethJohnson1949 (talk) 18:42, 26 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello. Before I answer your question, I must insist you carefully review Paid-contribution disclosure. This is not optional. There are ways for editors with a conflict of interest to contribute, but this requires caution and transparency. Please do not edit International House of Prayer again until you have reviewed this, although you can still propose changes to the article's talk page. You should also review Conflict of interest. Since this is a lot of homework, you might also find Plain and simple conflict of interest guide helpful. Thank you.
 * As for your question, for both practical and philosophical reasons, Wikipedia requires that content be supported by reliable sources, but additionally, those sources must meet Verifiability. This means that other people who are not involved have some way to double-check this information. The source wouldn't necessarily have to be on the internet, but it must be published, so that a moderately determined person could reasonably track down a copy to confirm that it says what is claimed.
 * Think of it this way: Wikipedia is not a substitute for IHOPKC's own website. If your organization publishes this info on its actual website, this could be considered for inclusion on Wikipedia, but we do not publish original research. Emailing the registrar is a form of original research, and is not verifiable, since private correspondence is not published.
 * After you have reviewed the above information about paid/COI editing, I suggest you propose such changes on the article's talk page: Talk:International House of Prayer. Simply start a new section, as you did here. Thanks. Grayfell (talk) 20:18, 26 September 2017 (UTC)

Rye high school
Please don't delete a near essay for the rye highschool page, I am a school admin and this info is all factual. And no the football team does not make playoffs every year and baseball hasn't won state in 4 years. Thank you please revert my editing. Equinoble (talk) 00:59, 3 October 2017 (UTC)


 * You're a school admin who doesn't know how to spell "propoganda"? An admin who adds juvenile vandalism about how police brutality "doesn't exist" while lying about it being a "typo"? Not setting a very good example for the kids, are you? What about this? Is this vandalism, or pushing a religious agenda, or just plain ol' antisemitism? Don't bother explaining it to me, just don't pretend other editors are stupid. If you want to change the school article, find reliable sources and post suggestion to the article's talk page. Not here. Grayfell (talk) 01:29, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

You are just a huge liberal, pushing your beliefs by changing info on numerous subjects, ( ive read your previous "talk" articles) also, you are talking out your ass right now because I changed some pages info cause it was full of error. Also, you won't let me comment on the high school wiki page because I don't have "references". Where tf is the refrence that the football team goes to state "every year", or that the schools attendance is 280?? Not even close. This just shows to prove that Wikipedia is just a bunch of editors steering the beliefs of people to fit thier agenda. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Equinoble (talk • contribs) 04:44, 3 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Well, I wouldn't say huge, but I am pretty tall. Not sure what that has to do with anything. Anyway... I've removed the silly claim about going to playoffs every year, and have updated the information on enrollment as supported by National Center for Education Statistics listing. As part of the school's administration, I'm sure you're aware that US schools report enrollment information to the government every year, and this is the kind of source I was talking about. Your personal expertise, as part of the school's administration, is not usable, because Wikipedia doesn't accept original research. According to the NCES, the school had 222 students for the last reported year. That seems relatively close to the 280 number reported in 2008, but I'm not one of the school's admins, so what do I know? Grayfell (talk) 21:20, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

opinion piece in Breitbart by former editor name-checks you
In case you weren't already aware of this, thought you'd find this article informative. Or at least amusing. Rockypedia (talk) 17:53, 9 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Thanks for letting me know, I would not have seen this if you hadn't posted it. Amusing indeed, but also amusingly bad. It's so... strained. And boring, and cherry-picked. I don't get why anyone would find that kind of second-hand minutia of interest, but that's Breitbart, innit? Grayfell (talk) 23:23, 13 October 2017 (UTC)
 * yep. I just like that a Breitbart "contributor" needed a safe space to bitch about Wikipedia after being blocked on Wikipedia. Rockypedia (talk) 12:57, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

Assistance with review of my edits
Hi Greyfell. Thank you for your review of my edits of the page Jeff McWaters. Would you please review my changes to make sure it is written in a neutral manner so we can have the top banner removed? I am a new contributor and appreciate the help! Thanks. Kamillabirgitte (talk) 22:16, 13 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello, welcome to Wikipedia. You still have not clarified if you have a conflict of interest or not. Please do so before editing any further. The content you added appears to promote McWater's business activities, and Wikipedia is not a platform for promotion.
 * These changes you have made are insufficient for removing the banner, as the article still includes trivia supported by weak sources and presented in an inappropriately informal way. There are two closely related issues: The amount of detail and the way it is presented. I will give examples of the problem, but rather than fuss-over the exact wording, the simplest fix is going to be to remove a large amount of unnecessary details from the article. A Wikipedia article isn't a substitute for his own corporate bio page.
 * Examples of inappropriate wording include, but are not limited to: saying he landed a job, ...was exposed to entrepreneurship at an early age..., ...was proven ineffective..., ...focused on meeting the healthcare needs... etc. This is just the tip of the iceberg. Manual of Style/Words to watch might be helpful, especially WP:BUZZWORD. This still of writing is common in corporate press releases and similar, but it is not neutral, nor is it compliant with Wikipedia's expectations for a formal tone.
 * Keep in mind that this is a general encyclopedia, and he shares this project with everyone else who is notable. His article should, on some larger level, be an academic overview of who he is and why he's notable from a larger view, not a trophy-case of his accomplishments.
 * The best place to discuss this further is the article's talk page: Talk:Jeff McWaters. Thanks. Grayfell (talk) 22:51, 13 October 2017 (UTC)

Comment : Probable Sock
You might be interested in this edit after seeing this edit by 2605:6000:EC16:C000:40F6:9247:A3DD:B27F. This seems to be some how associated with IP 141.131.2.3, as it seems they signed them both as "MC", immediately suggesting a sock. Further evidence in article with this revert in history here. Considering 2605:6000:EC16:C000:40F6:9247:A3DD:B27F has made just four editsSpecial:Contributions/2605:6000:EC16:C000:40F6:9247:A3DD:B27F on the one day, suggest this is highly likely. Arianewiki1 (talk) 06:03, 18 October 2017 (UTC)


 * I've kind of lost track of the details on this one, but I don't think editing from shifting IP addresses is considered sock puppetry, especially when the editor is clearly indicating that they are the same person through a signature. If this person has been blocked, or also has an account, that would be different, of course. Grayfell (talk) 22:18, 19 October 2017 (UTC)

PewDiePie talk page/suggestion
Hi, I would definitely like you to take a look at my post/suggestion on the PewDiePie talk page. I directly reference you and your reversions here. I would also like to clarify that I have no ill-intent with what I wrote in that section; it's really just more of a general frustration with reversions of sourced/referenced material. Best wishes, Soulbust (talk) 10:14, 19 October 2017 (UTC)


 * I get it. I am new to this article, and it might seem like I'm just disrupting things without a good reason. Obviously, I think I do have a good reason. I should've posted on the talk page, and that was my mistake. Your mistake has been not assuming good faith. If you don't have ill-intent, and I don't have any reason to think you do, don't imply that I have some ulterior motive through speculation. It's not cool, and it's allowing your frustration to interfere with improving the article. Saying "I don't want to speculate" and then speculating... well, who's going to take that kind of thing seriously? Grayfell (talk) 22:14, 19 October 2017 (UTC)

Upcoming Wikipedia edit-a-thon dedicated to artists of color - Thursday, Oct. 26 at PNCA
On Thursday, October 26, a Wikipedia edit-a-thon dedicated to artists of color will be held from 4–8pm at the Pacific Northwest College of Art (511 NW Broadway). Learn more at Facebook. Hope to see you there! -MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 18:27, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Milo Yiannopoulos
Can you restore the material you just took out. Yes it might be petty or whatever but we are trying to get consensus about what yo do. Your unilateral intervention is not helpful. Contaldo80 (talk) 12:12, 26 October 2017 (UTC)


 * I have explained why I'm not going to do that on the article's talk page. Grayfell (talk) 19:50, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

ThinkProgress
Hi. I notice that you fairly recently edited the ThinkProgress article. Since then, however, over the past few months, a lot of editing has been going on at the article, and now there is a disagreement on the Talk page about whether the current version of the article is balanced or not, as well as whether the content throughout the article is appropriate/optimal for the article. If you can spare some time to analyze the article and the current discussions on the talk page, I'm sure everyone would be interested in your input, either way. Happy editing! -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:32, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

IoT
Thank you for the feedback on my recent edits to the IoT page. Just wanted to drop in and let you know that I'll be working on the article bit by bit for the next few weeks(months? however long it takes.) If things seem unfinished, it's because they are and I just haven't gotten around to them yet. I appreciate your help in making the article better and wanted you to know how my editing style works so that it doesn't alarm you when there are gaps. --Baumergrl (talk) 01:56, 28 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Glad I could help. Wikipedia's open and cooperative nature means that all articles, even good articles, are still considered unfinished to some degree (Wikipedia is a work in progress is an essay on this), and any editor can come along and work on them. This is just something to keep in mind. Grayfell (talk) 08:56, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

Fine, you're a regular
Regarding this: Fine, you're a regular. Cut the shit at Order of the Arrow. You should know better. That's not a template. -- Jayron 32 02:46, 4 November 2017 (UTC)


 * And yet, your contribution to the talk page about this blatantly promotional garbage being edit-warred into the article is where, exactly? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Grayfell  (talk • contribs) 02:48, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I have no interest in the article at all. You are behaving badly, for which I am telling you to stop it.  I'm telling you that you should know better, because you're edit warring on an article.  Quit it.  -- Jayron 32 03:00, 4 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Talk is cheap, and abrasive talk is even cheaper. If you don't see how this content is unacceptably promotional, your behavior isn't a whole lot better. Grayfell (talk) 03:06, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I haven't looked at the content at all. Don't really care.  I saw the back-and-forth in the article history.  You may be right, but edit warring gets right editors blocked as often as it gets wrong editors.  -- Jayron 32 03:08, 4 November 2017 (UTC)


 * If your first two choices are Cut the shit and boilerplate template, both for content you haven't even looked at, you need to try harder. Grayfell (talk) 03:17, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Look, if you're so concerned about being treated as a regular, you should have already known that edit warring does not take into account content, only behavior. I've never said you were wrong.  Just that you were edit warring.  I will concede that you were right (without any statement that you actually were) but it wouldn't exempt you from being blocked for edit warring if you insisted on continuing to do so.  -- Jayron 32 03:21, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * If you would block me for making three edits over two days, the first of which (at least) was blatant spamming, than you still need to try harder. Grayfell (talk) 03:32, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I've never said I intended to block you. You are currently discussing the problems on the talk page, which as far as I am concerned, has justified everything I have done here.  -- Jayron 32 03:34, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Bullshit. You posted a template that explicitly threatens to block me, and then say you never intended to block me, and then try to take credit for other people's discussion. Grayfell (talk) 03:42, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I said that I was not intending to block you. -- Jayron 32 03:45, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Be honest: Did you remember that the template included a block warning? You know full well that you were implying that you would block me, either directly, or through a noticeboard. The threat was made by you and template or not, you alone are responsible for your edits. Grayfell (talk) 03:54, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Yeah, that's what I though. Grayfell (talk) 04:16, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Look, you can keep pretending you can read my mind. It hasn't happened yet.  But maybe someday you'll be able to do it.  -- Jayron 32 04:23, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Your actions demonstrate that you weren't really paying attention when threatening other people, and then, with your own words, you acted smug about something that would've happened anyway. Grayfell (talk) 04:32, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I threatened nothing. I reminded you of the rules.  You acted all huffy when I gave you a template, so I rephrased it by your request.  You'll notice I've not blocked you at all.  So this is all where you get to pretend like you were actually threatened because it makes you feel like you were justified in edit warring.  As long as we both feel good about this, there's no loser, is there?  -- Jayron 32 04:37, 4 November 2017 (UTC)

You've raised a point that makes this... not fun, so I'm going to give a more serious response. If you're not interested in reading this that way, don't bother responding at all.

We're not on the same level, so you will always be the "winner", here. Your actions have weight, and when you treat this as a joke, it has an edge that you cannot ever control. Sorry, that's just how it works. Even if this were a completely empty threat, getting blocked is scary to some people. When you threaten a stranger, justifiably, toothlessly, it doesn't matter, you don't get to decide how other people take it. You don't have to agree with this, you can laugh at me if you want, but you do have to accept that other people treat this seriously. I let you know I was annoyed by your behavior. So fucking what? What do you gain by dragging this on? You fully made your point, so don't play shitty, dehumanizing troll games over it. No, you didn't block me, but you could've. No, I don't think you would've blocked me for this without a better reason, but I don't know you, and you don't know me. You have the power here, not me, so my assumptions about your behavior are pretty much irrelevant. Grayfell (talk) 05:59, 4 November 2017 (UTC)

Re: Order of the Arrow Article
Hello Grayfell. The Order of the Arrow article now presents, accurately, that some Native Americans approve of the use of Native American elements as part of the organization, while some Native Americans criticize this as inauspicious cultural appropriation. Previously, the article presented the situation as if all Native Americans criticized the OA for cultural appropriation. As Native Americans are not a monolithic group and there is diversity of opinion, the article now properly reflects the reality of the situation. As for labeling the last section of the article with a banner saying "This section contains content written like an advertisement," this criticism is inapplicable, as if the section were advertising the OA, the section would not include robust perspective of criticism that is many times longer than the previous version of the criticism that was present on the page. An advertisement for an organization would not present such criticism; instead, the section provides multiple perspectives. Merely showing the OA's perspective is not an advertisement, just as showing the perspective of detractors is not an advertisement for that position. I humbly request that you therefore remove the "Written like an advertisement tag". Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by PeaceandHonor (talk • contribs) 02:55, 4 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello. I appreciate that you expanded some of the critical content to the article as well, but I have some serious problems with your changes, and I do strongly feel that the end result is promotional. I have started a discussion on the article's talk page: Talk:Order of the Arrow. This will make it much easier for other editors to join the discussion so we can reach consensus on how to resolve this. Grayfell (talk) 02:58, 4 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Firstly, I appreciate the cordiality of your response, and understand your concern about the changes being of promotional nature. I can assure you wholeheartedly that is not the singular goal; instead, balance is the goal. This is why, in addition to adding details about supporters of the OA's practices regarding Native American elements, I added MANY details (including a rather lengthy quote) that were with regard to criticism of these practices. Someone looking only to promote an organization would not purposely multiply the length of the criticism section many times over! Balance is the goal here, not promotion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by PeaceandHonor (talk • contribs) 03:09, 4 November 2017 (UTC)


 * I think I understand what you are saying, and I don't question your motives, but adding critical content is compatible with promotional intent. Not that it applies to you, but even spammers do this, sometimes. I could go into why this is, or show some past examples if you would like, but if you want to discuss the article, the article's talk page is a better place. Grayfell (talk) 04:13, 4 November 2017 (UTC)

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re your reversion of my minor edits to Arthur Jensen
Hello Greyfell:

I presume that you saw my comment on the Talk page of the article on Arthur Jensen, in which I said that I might edit the article when I had reviewed sources. I would not make a meaningful edit without consulting a source other than my memory. The very minor edit I made with regard to the verb "has had" was done because that verb implied that Jensen had, and still has, an interest in music. This was true when Jensen was alive, but now, after he has died, a past tense verb is appropriate. I fail to see why you would revert that. The edit of inserting some identification for Melvin Connor was made because, as I was reading the article, I did not know who Melvin Connor was, so I interrupted my reading, to find out, by going to the article on Connor. It puzzled me that he would be treated as a knowledgeable critic, and even quoted at length, without some indication of his qualifications to offer criticisms of Jensen's work. So, I put those qualifications in, so that other readers would know that Connor was an informed professional, who could reasonably discuss Jensen's work. I don't understand why that would be reverted either. My reasons for these minor edits were to improve the quality of the article. They were not relevant to its content or to any controversy about Jensen's viewpoints. Please restore these edits.

I have read and done mostly minor edits on Wikipedia since about 1993. I hope it is appropriate in this space to explain my recent activities on Wikipedia. I might assume that you have noticed that I have been reading the articles relevant to racial differences, and adding comments to some of the Talk pages. My doctoral dissertation in psychology was on racial prejudice, and I am interested in how such topics are discussed, and how they can be discussed scientifically. I am reading these articles because I have recently been rather forcibly exposed to the fact that racial differences are being treated, in almost all of the current professional literature, as if they have no empirical reality. The phrase that seems to have become part of the standard definition of race is "social construct" and, as a social construct, the concept of race is being imbued, or has been defined, as a concept which includes intrinsic implications relevant to social hierarchy, social class, and unjust but socially ascribed inferiority. This word is being used as a normative concept, like caste. To me, this is objectionable, because if the word race is not usable, there seems to be other word that could be used to discuss the actual empirical differences among various populations of humanity. It is my intention, after I have read the relevant articles, to try to improve them by inserting discussion that acknowledges and points out the differences between empirical claims, which are scientifically verifiable or falsifiable, and normatively loaded language, which does have intrinsic meanings relevant to ascribed social rank.

I am very careful to write professionally when I edit articles, although I thought the occasional silly remark on a Talk page might be allowed. (I have read a lot of silly remarks on Talk pages.) However, what I said about Neanderthal ancestry of Europeans, and its contribution to European skin and hair coloring, is not speculation or original research -- there have been extensive publications about it. I learned about it from reading the webpage Science Daily, and some other sources. And if I give as an example, the usage of races of horses as equivalent to breeds of horses, and refer to the varieties called breeds and landraces among virtually all species, as an example of how the word race might be treated as an empirical concept, that is not a silly remark. If the word race is lost to empirical science, then some other word, such as ethnic type is going to have to be substituted for it. I would rather rehabilitate a word from ordinary English, than require ordinary people to adopt a piece of jargon in order to discuss the fascinating varieties within our species.

You can check my qualifications to discuss these things on. When my grandfather was asked about his ancestry, he used to say he was a mongrel, and so am I, so I don't really feel like I'm racially superior to anybody. Before I was a psychologist, I was an English teacher and a student of philosophy.

I hope to consult you in future, when I undertake a serious edit, as I certainly recognize that these topics are very fraught with controversies. Thank you for reading my stuff. Janice Vian, Ph.D. (talk) 03:35, 9 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello. While I appreciate your cordiality, I think you have some serious misconceptions about Wikipedia. As you perhaps already know, content on Wikipedia is not based on personal familiarity or professional qualifications. Instead, such qualifications are useful for how they allow us to find and summarize reliable sources. I'm not sure why you are sharing your personal history in this way. I'm sorry to be blunt, but I'm not interested in verifying your personal history in order to discuss this with you on Wikipedia. Your personal ancestry shouldn't come into this, because even if you weren't a self-described mongrel, your ability to edit the article would remain exactly the same. Likewise, Wikipedia has only been around since 2001, so I don't know what you mean when you say you've been editing since 1993. It doesn't really matter, though.
 * As a courtesy to you, I have redacted some information from you comments. I'm not going to use it, and there are enough trolls and harassers coming to my page that sharing this information here is unlikely to have a positive outcome.
 * Regarding the revert I made, this was about MOS:CREDENTIAL. I have retained the explanation of his qualifications while removing the "Dr." in front of it, as this is against Wikipedia's manual of style. If you check the article, you will see that the grammatical change is also preserved. I don't know why you linked to the word "Konner" in isolation, since that is a disambiguation page which provides no useful information in that context, and I assume this was an error.
 * As for the scientific basis for race in humans, your comments blur the lines of several separate issues in a way that, as I said on Talk:Scientific racism, is somewhat disturbing to me. Distinctions which may be pragmatically useful for animal husbandry should not be cavalierly applied to humans as a biological fact. I trust that you can see how this appears profoundly dehumanizing, but you're doing it anyway, so please reevaluate your approach. Even if this weren't offensive for that reason, it's very sloppy science. To quote Wikipedia's own article Race (human categorization): Although such groupings lack a firm basis in modern biology, they continue to have a strong influence over contemporary social relations. At most, "race" has a non-firm basis in biology. If you disagree with this newer academic consensus, well, okay, but Wikipedia isn't the place to fight this battle. If you disagree that this is the current academic consensus, you'll need to find actual, recent sources discussing this.
 * "Rehabilitating" a word is not within Wikipedia's goals. The word has changed meaning because the scientific understanding of the topic has advanced. We don't need a replacement, because the concept itself hasn't changed, it's just become less useful. "Race" isn't, biologically speaking, a discrete set of groups, it's a multi-axis continuum, with a very heavy dose of social and environmental factors thrown in to complicate things. This isn't new, but we now have more incentive to treat it in a nuanced way, and we have better tools to back this up, also. If you're academically studying the genetics of horses you might use these breeds as a convenient shorthand, but you better be very clear exactly how you define these breeds if you want to get published, right? Maybe you're looking as a specific set of markers. At the very least, such a paper would explain that the breeds are certified by a relevant breeding association, but that raises new problems. Especially for humans, the biology of race amounts to piling statistical trends on statistical trends as determined by whatever genetic marker is convenient to geography in some statistically convenient past time-span. There is no simple test for blackness or whiteness or south-Asianness or Aborigineness or such, because of course there isn't. Even neanderthal genetics is ambivalent. Race is used in biology only within specific contexts (the statistical trends of sickle-cell disease are an obvious example) not based on discrete preexisting biological categories. Any attempt to make these categories into empirical claims is incredibly contentious, not just socially, but biologically. Grayfell (talk) 04:55, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for the thank you
Just wanted to express my gratitude for your recognition of the cleanup I did on Catalonia. Thank you. :) Quinto Simmaco (talk) 07:40, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Oh, and thank you for the public thanks you gave for the advice I gave to User:Nickboy000.


 * I'm of the opinion that some of the new "problem editors" here can actually become productive contributors... But they need to slow down, pay attention to the editing process of others, and more than anything else, reflect on what's being said to them in response to their edits. Rather than taking an adversarial stance. It rarely works out that way, but I have seen it happen on occasion, so it's always worth a try. Hopefully it didn't fall on deaf ears, and the editor can come back someday, after they've matured a bit. Quinto Simmaco (talk) 07:53, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * I think you may be confused, since I don't remember anything about Catalonia. You're welcome anyway, though. :)


 * I do remember your comments to Nickboy000. Your advice was good and thoughtful, and I also thought it was better that it came from a fresh name rather than one of the editors they'd been 'battling' with. I admit I'm not great at figuring out how to deal with problem editors. Lately I'm trying to be a bit more accommodating, for the reasons you mention, but a lot of the time I feel like it's more for my own emotional benefit than theirs. I dunno. I've also seen it happen on occasion, but my fear is that humoring some of these nastier viewpoints is fostering an atmosphere that drives away good editors. I can't really fault a new editor who sees the mess on some of these talk pages and decides to go elsewhere. We shouldn't drive away potential good editors in the hopes that some of the problem ones might get better, but we shouldn't assume they are incapable of contributing, either. It's a difficult line to walk.


 * Oh well. You're welcome, is what I'm saying. Grayfell (talk) 10:43, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Andrew Patterson edits
Hello Grayfell. It would be useful to me if you could point to what exactly the problem with the new edit was, rather than a blanket approach, I presume in here somewhere? . . In 2017 Patterson was awarded New Zealand Institute of Architects Gold Medal, presented to a single architect each year. The citation notes his practice’s distinctive projects. [5] [6] Andrew Barrie, Professor of Design at the School of Architecture and Planning University of Auckland says that Patterson's not needing to fit on or conform gives him a freedom expressed in his eye for materiality, space and light which drives his ability to produce buildings which connect internationally. [7] Patterson is the youngest architect to receive this award. [8] The Gold medal is quite an achievement and I wanted to add. There is no conflict of interest other than being a fan of NZ architecture I am trying to be as objective as possible e.g the inclusion of quotes from academia should I remove this? Andrew Barrie, Professor of Design at the School of Architecture and Planning University of Auckland says that Patterson's not needing to fit on or conform gives him a freedom expressed in his eye for materiality, space and light which drives his ability to produce buildings which connect internationally. The rest was new awards info and interesting commentary on Maori references in his work. EditorforGS (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 02:01, 21 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Hello. Before I answer your specific questions, please disclose any conflict of interest you have. This is strongly advised in all cases, but if this COI is paid or compensated, it is not optional, as it is required by Wikipedia's terms of service (and in some places laws regarding covert advertising). Paid-contribution disclosure explains more.
 * To be blunt, it is very obvious that you are editing the article with the intent of promoting Patterson or Patterson Associates. Wikipedia is not a platform for promotion. Once you have disclosed your conflict of interest, I would be happy to answer in more detail. Thank you. Grayfell (talk) 02:06, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

I am not sure if previously working at The School of Architecture and Planning is a conflict or not? I have also worked on developing Patterson's website design which is where I came into contact with this body of work (this was 2 years ago and I was paid for that specific project, note I am not a copy person my background is design). I am basing the page on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ian_Athfield which has quite detailed information as do other notable NZ architects e.g https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pete_Bossley and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Beaven

Regarding the Len Lye building I am not sure if you can split the person from the building when the person in question is an architect and that is why they are of note? EditorforGS (talk).


 * Please use the preview button and sign your posts properly by typing four tildes.
 * Yes, being paid by the company is most definitely a conflict of interest! You were paid two years ago, and you started editing the article two years ago. I'm going to be blunt, the history of the article, and your past connection, both lead me to believe that you still have a conflict of interest. Why have you never made a single edit outside this topic in those two years? You don't have to answer that, but don't pretend we're stupid enough not to notice. Your editor name also suggests that you are (or were) editing on behalf of someone else, presumably User:Natalie GoodSense. Either that or this is not your first account. If that is the case, please carefully review Sock puppetry. Disclosing previous accounts is the best option, and using multiple accounts at all is only permitted in a limited number of cases.
 * At the end of the day, what matters is that the article isn't spam, which it was. Comparisons to other articles are a mixed-bag. This is better than nothing, but Wikipedia doesn't work on precedent, because many other article also have serious problems. Both of your two comparison articles have serious problems with sources and neutrality, and are also about people with longer careers. As a paid editor with obvious, promotional intent, the proper way to handle this is to propose changes to the article's talk page. Do not edit the article itself, except to revert vandalism or fix typos. The minor edit checkbox should not be used when adding or removing content, and anything that isn't minor should be proposed on the article's talk page. Do you understand? Grayfell (talk) 02:44, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

No I don't understand. I have asked for clarification on what you considered spam from what I have written and I have not received that. I also don't understand the new banner. The only content there is what you have edited. Yes I was paid 2 years ago, yes I know AP the NZ architectural community is small and that is when I noticed his wiki page needed some work (not many NZ's have a wiki page and I thought it would be handy to know how to edit). No I don't edit other peoples pages, quite frankly copy is not my natural medium and I find it difficult and having to deal with this sort of thing doesn't help. Natalie@GoodSense is me, I project manage websites under this name. The companion articles are a pretty good indicator of other NZ architectural pages, and yes AP is young, that is what makes him special, as in being the youngest ever recipient of a Gold Medal. Is there a mediator editor I can take this to, that can look at my original copy and your edits and this dialogue as I find your tone and actions bullying and unreasonable. ````Editor for GS — Preceding unsigned comment added by EditorforGS (talk • contribs) 05:58, 21 November 2017 (UTC)


 * The marketing company GoodSense.co.nz's list of clients currently includes Patterson Associates as a portfolio piece. This is an active conflict of interest even if the work is now marked by the company as 'finished'. You were paid to promote this client and from Wikipedia's perspective, this is a problem. Conflict of interest editing is taken seriously on Wikipedia for several reasons. It has damaged the project in the past, and continues to do so. You may find Conflict-of-interest editing on Wikipedia informative as to why this is taken seriously. Having a COI does not mean you cannot contribute, but it does mean you have to tread carefully. I know it's a lot of boilerplate, but the lengthy message posted to your talk page goes over this in detail. I know this might be frustrating or alarming, but it is not my intention to threaten or intimidate you, only to make sure the project is kept to a high standard.
 * Yes, I drastically trimmed the article because it needs to be rebuilt from the ground up. The WP:DUE weight of the article's many details had not been clearly established, but that doesn't mean it cannot be eventually restored. I did this with the hope that you would begin to propose changes on the article's talk page, as I've requested both here, and through the boilerplate message on your talk page. This way we can address each of these issue in more detail.
 * There's plenty of more I could say about this. As a general rule, awards should be contextualized by reliable, independent, sources. This means that press releases or similar from the NZIA are not sufficient for establishing the award as encyclopedically significant. Having won an award is not, by itself, informative unless there is a neutral way for readers to assess the award's significance. This needs to be established the same way all substantial information needs to be established on Wikipedia: through reliable sources. Many of these sources do not, at a glance, meet Wikipedia's guidelines for reliable sources. Architecture Now's about page does not fill me with confidence that it has the "reputation for accuracy and fact checking" required for a source. Neither does their publisher's. If we don't have a foundation of reliable sources, all these details start to seem unbalanced and disproportionate. We already know he's "not reticent about proclaiming his ambition and ability". With that in mind, how many of these sources are reliable, and how many are built out of press releases? How can we use reliable sources to create a neutral overview of him and his work?
 * If we say that a specific work is "notable", that implies that it either already has its own Wikipedia article, or could have such an article (see Notability (geographic features) or Notability). By listing every work which has a source associated with it, we are using tangential sources to imply notability. This isn't neutral. Again, there is a lot I could say about this, so to summarize: The article's neutrality needs to be preserved, and these questions need to be resolved before this content is restored.
 * There are a number of other places you can go if you need input from another editor. If you feel I am being unreasonable about my belief that you have a conflict of interest, or that it's negatively impacting the article, Conflict of interest/Noticeboard would be one place to get more input from editors experienced with that area. If you feel that I am being bullying or abusive (or anybody else is, for that matter) Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents is a good choice. Both of those pages have an "Are you in the right place" box at the top which lists some other possible places, as well as advice on how to make a post. Grayfell (talk) 06:51, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

I am glad to see you are giving me some specifics and also that you have moderated your tone. Re: There's plenty of more I could say about this. As a general rule, awards should be contextualized by reliable, independent, sources. This means that press releases or similar from the NZIA are not sufficient for establishing the award as encyclopedically significant. Having won an award is not, by itself, informative unless there is a neutral way for readers to assess the award's significance. This needs to be established the same way all substantial information needs to be established on Wikipedia: through reliable sources. Many of these sources do not, at a glance, meet Wikipedia's guidelines for reliable sources. Architecture Now's about page does not fill me with confidence that it has the "reputation for accuracy and fact checking" required for a source. Neither does their publisher's. If we don't have a foundation of reliable sources, all these details start to seem unbalanced and disproportionate. We already know he's "not reticent about proclaiming his ambition and ability". With that in mind, how many of these sources are reliable, and how many are built out of press releases? How can we use reliable sources to create a neutral overview of him and his work?

The NZIA is NZ's only and major independent Architectural body and our only significant award givers (also why they are noted in the pages of other NZ architects I sited). These awards are our major awards - happy to add this detail, and link to their website rather than press releases. Ditto Architecture Now - we don't have many architectural commentators, most of these are academics or well known architectural journalists, I think they would be pulled up pretty fast by the NZ architectural community if they didn't fact check! What is a neutral way for readers to assess the award's significance? How do small countries establish this credibility? These are our architectural media. I added "not reticent about proclaiming his ambition and ability" as a way to balance the commentary. Andrew is known for his flashy architecture and his flashy nature. As this was a comment by the NZIA on his recent Gold Medal win I thought it a good way to acknowledge this. Also, although not all the projects are on wikipedia as individual projects, some are very important to NZ architecture should be retained as notable projects. I willing admit to being an amateur at editing in wikipages and probably making mistakes, however I do think APs contribution to NZ architecture is important and that he is somewhat outside the community made this an interesting project for me. I was trying very hard to be impartial which is why I wanted advice on what factual information was problematical to you, rather than a whole lot of assumptions based on web work I did years ago (at what point does working for someone cease to be a problem?) Re: I did this with the hope that you would begin to propose changes on the article's talk page, as I've requested both here, and through the boilerplate message on your talk page. This way we can address each of these issue in more detail. Could we maybe revert to the copy that was OK for years and then carry on? Beacuse jeepers I don't have endless time to do this. Please note I am also an artist and wanted to add some much needed female NZ artist pages eventually, this was my learning curve, I will now think twice about that as NZ art commentary is much more sketchy that that of architects. ``EditorforGS|EditorforGS`` still don't think I get the signing thing. .. EditorforGS  —Preceding undated comment added 08:58, 21 November 2017 (UTC)


 * See WP:SIGNATURE. Just type four tildes, or if you are using the desktop version, there is a "sign your posts on talk pages:" thing at the bottom of the edit window. Also, please use the preview button to make sure your posts are formatted as something you yourself wouldn't mind reading. Break up lengthy paragraphs and keep direct quotes short... that kind of thing.
 * I'm not going to revert to the previous version. Undisclosed paid editing is against Wikipedia's terms of service. You will still need to post to the talk page instead of editing the article directly. The page was overlooked for years because nobody noticed, not because your behavior was acceptable. Now that you know that it's a problem, you will have to act differently.
 * We do not just take an editor's word for it that a source is reliable or significant. Once again, please review Identifying reliable sources. If reliable, independent sources do not exist, then information is not presumed to be worth inclusion. NZ is not so tiny that it doesn't have book publishers, newspapers, and universities. If the ONLY coverage of something is within a walled-garden of promotional architecture websites, then Wikipedia isn't the place to solve that problem. Academics who are writing about architecture will be published in academic journals or writing books. Journalists writing about architecture will be published in established papers or magazines. The NZIA is not an "independent" body in a meaningful sense. They are an architectural body which (among other things, obviously) gives out awards. They have a vested interest in publicizing those awards for both the benefit of the recipient and the presumed benefit of the NZ architecture community. An independent body would be someone who comments on this award from the outside. A reliable source is one that does so with a previously established reputation. If these awards are listed on other pages without secondary sources, well, that's unfortunate. This is one reason why COI editing is so frustrating for others to deal with. Wikipedia has a lot of problems, and all experienced editors know it. No matter how good your intentions, this is a problem we need to fix, not an excuse to spread the problem around.
 * In general, the context provided by these reliable sources is what's used to explain to readers what a detail signifies. For awards, ideally, there would be enough context to explain this at the award's own page. Calling it a "major" award may be accurate, but it's not informative in the slightest. Sometimes vagueness is unavoidable, but using secondary sources at least provides a cap to the PR.
 * As I said, there's a lot to this. Another very significant issue is due weight. Including a lot of flattering details about specific projects based on interviews and other ephemera is grossly unbalanced. If these works are significant enough to be included in the article, they should be summarized from a neutral perspective. You may find WP:WTW helpful for how to approach this for other articles you edit in the future.
 * Think of it this way: If nobody else bothered to mention this award besides NZIA and Patterson, who cares? What does it actually say about him or the award? The more space is devoted to these awards, the more significant readers are going to assume the awards are. We are specifically not supposed to lead readers into unsubstantiated assumptions. That's kind of the point of an encyclopedia, right?
 * The NZIA's website is not an ideal source for anything other than extremely basic details.
 * You've been editing since 2014, at least. You are not new at this. If you want to add anything about NZ artists, do it now instead of the article you were paid to write. Grayfell (talk) 09:59, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

Utopia
Gr4nder (talk) 03:07, 26 November 2017 (UTC)


 * You reeeeeallly aren't paying attention if you think I'm alt-right. Just find reliable sources, that's how Wikipedia works. Grayfell (talk) 03:26, 26 November 2017 (UTC)

Hey
JustAPoliticalNerd (talk) 00:30, 28 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Is this your first Wikipedia account? Grayfell (talk) 00:31, 28 November 2017 (UTC)


 * JustAPoliticalNerd (talk) 00:35, 28 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Striking. Blocked per Sockpuppet investigations/PerfectlyIrrational. Grayfell (talk) 22:57, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

Blastikus back on Oswald Spengler
See my latest edit on the talk-page. He is now using this account

Can you re-open an SPI for Ben Steigmann / Blastikus? 

is also Ben. (evidence in this edit on his Wikiversity Project against Wikipedia ). 117.20.41.10 (talk) 20:19, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

See this if you are interested 117.20.41.10 (talk) 20:55, 29 November 2017 (UTC)


 * It seems that you've figured it out, but I've commented at the SPI. Thanks for letting me know. Grayfell (talk) 22:55, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

I'm gonna lose this one, huh.
Congratulations on your victory. It will be like fucking last year—Lauren Southern's a libertarian because I'm an IP address versus esteemed members. (Don't bother replying to my talk page—I'm check here for your response—if any).45.72.224.206 (talk) 04:27, 30 November 2017 (UTC)


 * I reverted the Libertarian thing and put it back to "far-right", so ... what are you saying? You're going to "lose" this one, because we can't figure out what the heck you're talking about. I think it's possible I might agree with you? Maybe? If you want to talk about the urine-dumping incident, you're going to need to explain what the problem is with the three sources used for that section. Is it a due weight thing? What? Vaguely pointing to a bunch of blatantly unreliable sources doesn't help. Saying that your post made 'implicit' points is asking other people to do the work you should've done yourself. Just explain what the problem is directly. You are also, of course, free to make an account, if you want. I'm sure you have a reason for not doing that (and I don't care about that) but the article has such a lengthy, nasty history of vandalism and sock-puppetry, that if you're at all familiar with Wikipedia you can't be too surprised the article is protected. Grayfell (talk) 04:36, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

Dang!

Why did you have to reply to my post! Now I have gained a little faith that I might have an appreciable effect on this article!

"You're going to "lose" this one, because we can't figure out what the heck you're talking about."

It might have something to do with the fact that the post was reverted only 17 minutes after it was posted.

"If you want to talk about the urine-dumping incident, you're going to need to explain what the problem is with the three sources used for that section."

That's the problem with WP talk pages. If I posted an update to the section: "did she really get urine poured on her or was that soda pop?" it's unlikely to be read. Sections don't seem to be read, and most simply re-hash old stuff in new sections—it's the WP way! I presume you read my post before you reverted it—I re-mentioned my concerns; but okay, I'll waste time here. I saw the YouTube video. Now I know it's a primary source and WP would rather it be re-iterated by an RS, but fuck! I'm already fed up with webpages that take minutes to dl, dump a lot of advertising shit, and either say little and/or stuff that looks like a copy and paste from another source.

Presumably there were no Sun, G&M, or Yahoo reporters there—not even freelancers. Did any fly from Toronto or Silicon Valley, or was their report based on the YouTube video?

Now presumably, in the absence of RS as well as WP's abhorrence of primary sources, the urine thing should be removed; but, of course, it wasn't, nor will it be. I ran into similar shit in the article over Southern's alleged Libertarianism. Finally WP has moved on it, but oh so slowly and with much aggravation.

The freaking weird thing about it is that the Encyclopedia Dramatica article has an embedded video where urine was more likely tossed at Southern in another latter protest, and it might be because someone was inspired by the flawed article here.

"Vaguely pointing to a bunch of blatantly unreliable sources"

Funny how the WP article on RS describes WP as an un-RS. The idea is that such articles might have sources that could be for sources here. Indeed, one of RW's aims is to be a supplement to WP.

"You are also, of course, free to make an account, if you want."

I have, and I don't want to use it on the computer I'm using, and no, it's not for sockpuppetry.

My history of vandalism of the article was to remove the alleged libertarianism—not her party candidacy but her libertarianism. It was reverted, and the page is now protected, so it's the talk page I went to. It seems the editors got the message, but for so long this Trump supporter who ridiculed Gary Johnson was described by WP as a libertarian.

I've similarly vandalized the WQ article of Lauren Southern by accurately quoting from one of her YouTube videos—to counter the perception that she's such a badass anti-feminist hero.

I can understand why the article is protected—not that it will help much—but fuck, it's annoying when I make a post in the talk page I put a few 10s of minutes into creating and it's reverted so quickly. It's why I rarely go back to this article.

Not that RationalWiki is much better as an Alternative outlets—it too can get heated, but it might be better if I improve the article there. This might be easier as Lauren Southern is mostly noted for being alt-right I could use a few sources here and add them there.

I'm surprised that ED has a half-decent article about her—another urine thing and the description of her "book."

I might work on RationalWiki's article of Lauren Southern and WQ. Who knows, I might do a Simple English article.

I might, just might, create an alternate account for articles on Lauren Southern, but after this post, my interest in this article will likely significantly wane for perhaps almost another year.

Another possibility in the RW article is a subsection on the WP article. RW does that with CP at times such as https://rationalwiki.org/wiki/Conservapedia:Donald_Trump_achievements or https://rationalwiki.org/wiki/Conservapedia:Differences_with_Wikipedia

Anyway, I was likely in error to make that post in the talk page. Don't-give-a-fuckism and all that. Though an alternate account might help. Who knows.

But for now, the best thing for me is to withdraw and leave the Lauren Southern article—and talk page—to the experts.

Good morning.

45.72.224.206 (talk) 06:46, 30 November 2017 (UTC)


 * I think this is too long for the point you're trying to make. When writing for an audience of impatient, pedantic assholes like me and most other Wikipedia editors, you should tailor your message accordingly. Feel free to attribute this to a flaw on our part, if you like, but for strictly tactical reasons, you should get to the freaking point.
 * Yes, I got the idea that some of those unreliable sources might have reliable sources... but so what? I'm sure Google has every one of those sources, also, so help us figure out which are reliable and which aren't. I'm pretty sure ED is blacklisted, so sharing some of those valuable source for discussion would be helpful. Just saying they exist... not so much.
 * You stated that "her gender is still an issue"... but it's an occasional source of vandalism. That's about it. So you bringing up a bunch of trolly speculation about "what if she made out with a chick" is only making it more of an issue.
 * Conservapedia is great for laughs, so let it be what it's good at. That article hasn't been substantially edited in over a year, and it has no sources at all. Bring it up is trying to start a conversations about something other than how to improve the Wikipedia article.
 * I'm guessing you're the same IP who already brought up the soda/piss argument before, but we don't really second guess sources like this, which you seem to already know. Using this topic as the battleground to debate how Wikipedia handles sources is totally ridiculous. You want to make the case that it's undue weight? Yeah, I could see that! Let's talk about that and only that on the article's talk page, so something can be done. If you already made that point in your post, it was oblique and buried among a lot of other comments, and expecting people to tackle all of that at once as a single topic is insulting.
 * If you know of a reliable source for the second piss incident, great. I'm not interested in watching a video of it, though, and holy shit, why would we want to include that in a Wikipedia article?
 * We already have at least one, if not more, aggressive sock puppets trying to make this into a shrine to how serious political business Southern is. Copypasting unflattering reviews of her self-published book to the talk page is adding even more noise. If the article's length is proportional to how significant she actually is, it's going to be a pretty short article. Grayfell (talk) 09:09, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

1. "I think this is too long for the point you're trying to make. When writing for an audience of impatient, pedantic assholes like me and most other Wikipedia editors, you should tailor your message accordingly."

Andrew Schlafly, if I understand correctly, refers to being concise and against talk, talk, talk. But hey, you're busy. (I can only imagine the shit regular editors like you have to deal with.)

From one pedantic asshole to another, please read this at your convenience. I'm in the lifeboat now.

2. "Just saying they exist... not so much."

It is a talk page.

3. "You stated that "her gender is still an issue"... but it's an occasional source of vandalism. That's about it."

The article says "In October 2016, Southern had her gender legally changed to male as part of a video produced for Rebel Media to show the ease of the new gender ID laws."

The RebelMedia report merely headlines "Lauren Southern Becomes a Man!" and reports "According to the Government of Canada I'm literally a dude now! Just watch the video."

I just watched the video again and it's not even a government office at first! It's a frickin' health clinic! In the 8:03 video at 2:22 she says "about a year ago" when asked when she started to identify as a man, and yeah, at 2:42, she says –it's even on the screen—"I'm, um, attracted to girls."

3:19—Clair Vaughan Medical clinic—her address understandably is blocked out—but Clair Vaughan is in the pre-1998 amalgamated borders in Toronto which is while not the most liberal part of the city, it definitely ain't Ford country—where she might not have had the same success conning the receptionist. (FWIW, it's near Bathurst, the trad Jewish area, and likely a few km from the Junction, where Michael Coren—a bit of a firebrand himself—more in the past—and a writer of many books—most likely over 90 pages. Don't worry about doxing: the area is high density, and Coren has referred to the Junction a few times in his Toronto broadcasts.)

As health cards are a provincial matter, she is easily arguably at best not recognized as a man by the federal government, but provincial, and this is only in regards to medical insurance. Her driver's license might describe her as a woman. Ditto her passport—given she travels—I wonder how she'd get into Trump's America with a passport that'd describe her as a man. I suppose the Italians listed her as a woman too.

If instead of a health card, she listed as a man for a library card, would WP cite it as a source for it's claim of legal manliness?

Also the document says "application." It doesn't say whether or not the ministry turned her down. There's no shots of her new health card and what it describes her gender as—assuming she even got a card—she might have been refused and didn't re-apply yet.

https://files.ontario.ca/thumbnail-healthcard-illustrated.jpg

Another reason for the removal:

Gender on Health Cards and Driver's Licences https://news.ontario.ca/mgs/en/2016/06/gender-on-health-cards-and-drivers-licences.html June 29, 2016 2:05 P.M. Ministry of Government and Consumer Services

"From June 13 onward, sex designation is no longer displayed on the Ontario health card. Upon their next renewal, cardholders will receive a card that does not indicate sex."

4. "Conservapedia is great for laughs, so let it be what it's good at."

Uh huh. Thought I'd mention the other wikis in order to get the perhaps-too-politically motivated (myself included) alternative outlets for their(/our) energies. Not that Schlafly would tolerate their editing, and I excluded the newer more racist wikis that yammer on about her alleged Jewishness.

5. "I'm guessing you're the same IP who already brought up the soda/piss argument before,"

As well as whether or not she's a Libertarian. Took a while for me to pull myself out of the mud, too.

6. "but we don't really second guess sources like this,"

Apparently not.

7. "Using this topic as the battleground to debate how Wikipedia handles sources is totally ridiculous."

I don't think I am. I'm simply attacking these sources, or more aptly, these particular alleged sources, not WP policy in general.

8. "Let's talk about that and only that on the article's talk page, so something can be done."

Eliminate the bad reports and with it references to the urine incident as well as her alleged legal change of gender?

Fat fookin' chance!

I already have. It's ignored.

It fatigues me.

9. "If you know of a reliable source for the second piss incident, great."

It was intended as a (relatively) quick reference to a source to possible sources.

I currently have no reliable sources; the article has no reliable sources. So let's remove these suspect links and thus references to the alleged incident.

10. "We already have at least one, if not more, aggressive sock puppets trying to make this into a shrine to how serious political business Southern is."

Oh yeah? what sources has he used, if any? How deep are his analysis?

11. "Copypasting unflattering reviews of her self-published book to the talk page is adding even more noise."

But what if the review is by someone at RebelMedia—which apparently is considered a RS by WP? Shall I look for ED's source and if valid, put it in the article?

So should it even be called a book?

The article describes her as a "book author"

A Google News search of her "book" title lead me to this: The deplorables have arrived in Washington, but they're not exactly united http://mashable.com/2017/01/19/deploraball-deplorables-trump-inauguration/#Dkp32YaLt5qX

"Lauren Southern, author of a 90-page self-published book called Barbarians: How Baby Boomers, Immigrants, and Islam Screwed My Generation"

Fellow Danish descendant and occasional hair bleacher Iggy Pop wrote a book (Here's a 35 NYT review of it by Robert Palmer—no Wayback Machines needed here.) and nowhere in his WP article is he described as an "author." I guess Iggy's so more noted for other things that it kind of slipped the minds of the editors to put it in the article. (and to be fair, it was co-written, just like Art of the Deal)

So let's remove the "book author" reference and keep the writer categories as she has written at least a glorified pamplet.

12. "If the article's length is proportional to how significant she actually is, it's going to be a pretty short article."

Yep. There was already a Nom for AfD.

45.72.224.206 (talk) 17:10, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

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