Wikipedia:Featured article review/Conatus/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 0:29, 15 July 2023 (UTC).

Conatus

 * Notified: Lacatosias, Zbxgscqf, WikiProject Systems, WikiProject Psychology, WikiProject Philosophy, 2022-09-27

Review section
I am nominating this featured article for review because of issues I've discovered with WP:OR along with factual errors in the article prior to my edits in September, where it appeared that a variety of WP:SYNTH inferences were made to connect Spinoza's concept to a variety of similar looking ideas throughout Greek, Roman, and Arabic philosophy. I believe I removed most of the original research at this point, but the article itself is fairly short and I'm not convinced it's comprehensive now that it's been trimmed of all of those unjustified inclusions. &#32;- car chasm (talk) 03:38, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I have fixed (above) the talk page notification from September. Please read the instructions at WP:FAR and complete the rest of the notifications. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  12:16, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that, I believe I misunderstood the instructions; After re-reading I've now notified the nominator, other principal contributors (other than myself) and the three wikiprojects whose templates are on the page. Please let me know if there is anything else I missed! &#32;- car chasm (talk) 14:59, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, thanks! (No need to apologize; I just like to make sure first-time FAR nominators learn the ropes :) Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  21:25, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
 * have any of your concerns been addressed? Sandy Georgia (Talk)  16:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
 * As far as the article is concerned, not at all - It appears I'm still the last person to make any significant edits to the page at all; it doesn't look like either of the major contributors notified above are still active. &#32;- car chasm (talk) 17:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC I doubt the article is comprehensive, especially since several sources listed as references are not cited. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  20:32, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC, issues unaddressed. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  03:03, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include original research and comprehensiveness. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:08, 1 July 2023 (UTC)

Nikkimaria (talk) 00:29, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Delist. Now less than half the size of the promoted version; comprehensiveness concerns. DrKay (talk) 15:56, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Delist Comprehensive concerns, per DrKay above. Z1720 (talk) 02:17, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Delist, issues unaddressed. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  02:41, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.