Talk:Hatoful Boyfriend

Weird phrasing
"Yuuya explains that the protagonist's body had been gathered in the chemistry lab." What does this mean? How can a single body be "gathered"? Should it say "found"? Equinox (talk) 16:46, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
 * The body had been dismembered, and the parts were found in numerous boxes by different characters. The paragraph doesn't make that very clear, though it does use the term "dismembered" in the sentence after the one you quoted. So, the wording is accurate, but that sentence could probably use some better set-up. Eishiya (talk) 00:42, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

Proposed merge with List of Hatoful Boyfriend characters
Character list is unsourced and not independently notable from the main series entry. Perhaps a few things should be merged (if necessary) but the rest of it is primary source stuff outside the scope of a generalist encyclopedia such as ours. Plus this main article is GA-rated so it sufficiently covers the series characters as necessary in the dedicated section. czar 02:09, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

or, we could source it instead, since it's a detailed, accurate article from my knowledge, and it isn't just filling space Aleccat (talk) 22:53, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * You're welcome to do so, but most of it either (1) cannot be sourced to reliable, secondary sources, (2) is not noteworthy enough for mention in an encyclopedia article (video game trivia), or (3) has no valid reason for summary style split from the parent article. czar  03:24, 9 August 2016 (UTC)

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